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kaptainkrutch
2009-01-17, 10:59 PM
I'm making a friend a picture for his birthday, and I was wondering if youse guys could critique my OotS-style.

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm102/kaptainkrutchpimpin/badasses.png

(By the way, Poolstroke {they never said his actual name} is a Deadpool knockoff {who himself is a Deathstroke knockoff} from Superman/Batman Annual #1.)

(They're supposed to look neutral, they'll be posed in the actual picture.)

Edit: Here's the Iron Spider for Checkmate down there. (Just send me a pm if you want an avatar)

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm102/kaptainkrutchpimpin/ironspid3.png
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm102/kaptainkrutchpimpin/ironspid4.png

Serpentine
2009-01-17, 11:12 PM
Well, I've looked at it... and I cannot see anything wrong with it. Maybe the arms could be a bit longer. They look great!

CrimsonAngel
2009-01-17, 11:30 PM
Wow, love it.

The Neoclassic
2009-01-18, 12:00 AM
Those are really good! I want to say the eyes are a little close together, but I am probably just imaging it. Seriously, I've seen a decent amount of OotS style art here and yours is certainly in the better half.

kaptainkrutch
2009-01-18, 12:42 AM
Thanks guys, it really means a lot.


Those are really good! I want to say the eyes are a little close together, but I am probably just imaging it. Seriously, I've seen a decent amount of OotS style art here and yours is certainly in the better half.

You're right! I hadn't noticed before, here's a comparison.

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm102/kaptainkrutchpimpin/eyes.png
It's off by around 1/3rd of an eye width.

Checkmate
2009-01-18, 03:23 AM
I think they are very good.

Uncle Festy
2009-01-18, 05:32 PM
Shee-ooh.
That is impressive.
I'm entirely unfamiliar with the source material, but damn those look fantastic.

Beans
2009-01-19, 02:22 AM
Poolstroke. That's a good 'un.
Me likey.

kaptainkrutch
2009-01-19, 06:45 PM
Thanks so much you guys. Seriously, if anyone wants an avatar, I'll make it. I have nothing better to do. :smallsmile:

Checkmate
2009-01-20, 12:46 AM
Thanks so much you guys. Seriously, if anyone wants an avatar, I'll make it. I have nothing better to do. :smallsmile:

Really? If you want to, only if you want to, could you make me one of Spiderman in his stark armor (Iron Man armor)? Only if you really want to.
I will use it and credit you in my sig.

For reference to what I mean, http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:SMCW.jpg or http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Scarlet_Spiders.jpg (technically not spiderman, but the same outfit)

Or when you don't like it, you could do a normal spiderman.