Super SMUSH Bros Brawl

[InvaderGir]

This is done in my spare time, so it will be updating at random.



SUPER SMUSH BROS. BRAWL

Chapter 1

#1: http://http://gronquist.com/pb/wp_84db1f3b/images/img1876749fa17beeee3f.jpg (http://gronquist.com/pb/wp_84db1f3b/images/img1876749fa17beeee3f.jpg)

#2: http://gronquist.com/pb/wp_3db59fb2/images/img70614a0add1468e78.jpg

[MethosH]

The link is broken. :smallfrown:

[The Blackbird]

How is he a ghost in the Playground if he has posted?

[Shades of Gray]

I unno.

Here is the correct comic one:

http://gronquist.com/pb/wp_84db1f3b/images/img1876749fa17beeee3f.jpg

[MethosH]

I just figure out the problem...
When I click on the link I'm send to "http://http://gronquist.com/pb/wp_84...a17beeee3f.jpg"
There is 2 "http://"

[Green-Shirt Q]

I will read, because I really like Super Smash Bros., but I really hope this is nothing like my current webcomic (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=105608).

[InvaderGir]

Sorry about the link, I was going to fix it, but didn't have enough time before vacation (it was awesome :smallcool:)
@Q this won't be like your webcomic at all, I hand draw (well, photoshop) all of my own images. I also had this idea a while ago, but never had the time to actually do it.

Also, The second comic is up. Tell me what you think of the art style. (I am still kinda new to this)

[Green-Shirt Q]

Also, The second comic is up. Tell me what you think of the art style. (I am still kinda new to this)

To be perfectly honest, it doesn't look like very nice art. Very....unprofessional, for lack of a better way to describe it. I highly doubt I'll be able to take this seriously.

Also, it's not even slightly OOTS style.

[Trizap]

not even remotely OOTS style.

.......and how it starts...........hmmmm.........not real confident in it.......I will now taking bets on how long this comic will last.

[T-O-E]

NEVER save in Jpeg. Save in Png.

[Cizak]

Sorry to save this, but it desn't look very good. I'm gonna give it a chance, just because it's (well, kinda. not really, but kinda) new.

And as people have said, it's not oots-style.

[InvaderGir]

Hey, sorry about the late reply, I have been kinda busy. Also, sorry about the quality, this is the best I can do with my current schedule, seeing as I have school, friends, doctor and dentist appointments, and on top of that, me and my family are selling our house. If you want, I can move this over to the webcomics board, it just seemed OotS-ish, so I put it in here. This is just somthing I do when I am bored, so it isn't going to be perfect or anything /rant.

Anyways, I hope to get another comic up soon, but it may take a while, as I am trying out Inkscape, (and failing miserably :smalltongue:)

[Green-Shirt Q]

Moving it would be pointless. Despite it's non-OOTS status, it is still a comic posted on the GitP forums, which is apperently a fan-comic. The whole point of this was to keep all the comics people have been making in the same place, so there is no reason to move.

[Lissou]

To be perfectly honest, it doesn't look like very nice art. Very....unprofessional, for lack of a better way to describe it. I highly doubt I'll be able to take this seriously.

Also, it's not even slightly OOTS style.

Well, it still looks better than yours :P

I'd have to agree though, not OOTS at all.

[Green-Shirt Q]

Well, it still looks better than yours :P


An unnecessary and hurtful comment I'll have to ask you to explain. :smallannoyed:

[Mina Kobold]

An unnecessary and hurtful comment I'll have to ask you to explain. :smallannoyed:

I agree with you Q, that was rude:smallannoyed:

[Falgorn]

I agree with you Q, that was rude:smallannoyed:

But Q's wasn't? I can't cut Q slack. Sure, the art's not that good, but he just started.

[Green-Shirt Q]

But Q's wasn't? I can't cut Q slack. Sure, the art's not that good, but he just started.

Except I didn't insult the art. InvaderGir asked us to say what we thought of the art, and I did. It's not like I said "OMG YOUR ART SUCKS WORSE THEN ANYTHING LOL". :smallannoyed:

And, unlike InvaderGir, I never asked to be critiqued.

[Trizap]

people comment upon how Q is rude, but don't seem to focus any comments at all on me for what I posted.......maybe its just hes more well known.......or has been here longer........or maybe its possible that my post wasn't rude enough to make comment on.......eh....I don't mind...........I don't think my post is rude anyways.

and any potential people who have to ask "why did you post this post?"

cause I felt like it.

[InvaderGir]

Sheesh, I have the worst luck with forums... [/muttering to oneself]
You know, you guys could probably start posting... oh I don't know... constructive criticizm. I mean seriously, I know that I asked for comments of the art style, but I didn't expect this. If you guys know SO much about good webcomics, then maybe you could give me some tips. And if you don't, then stop posting rude comments about it.
Anyways, I plan to have one comic a week done, and the third will be up shortly, (as soon as I learn how to draw ROB...:smallannoyed:)

@Q I don't mean this to be insulting or anything, but your webcomic is hardly OoTS style at all... and yet it is in the FAN comic board

EDIT: the reason I put this comic in here, is because the OotS comics inspired me to do my own.

[Green-Shirt Q]

First of all, I'd like to apologize if I was rude and if I hurt anybody's feelings.

Second, the reason I didn't post constructive criticism is because I couldn't think of anything at the time, and for that I also apologize. I wasn't trying to be rude, and I didn't think I was.

Here is some constructive criticism: Try making the lines of the characters smoother. It would make the art look A LOT more professional. I'm sure any art program can do this.

I know the name "Fan-Comics" is a little misleading, it confuses me slightly too, but this isn't just for OOTS style comics!! It doesn't need to be! It's just a place for people who MAKE ANY KIND OF COMICS, like you and I, so that the forums are more organized.

Again, and apology for rudeness. :smallfrown:

[InvaderGir]

Thanks for the tip Q, but I think I might stick with ABR for a bit to practice web-comic-ish-stuff. Also, I have givn up on Inkscape, and am sticking with Photoshop.

Anyways, I have to redo all of my templates, as about half of my computer files got corrupted, (stupid little brother... :smallannoyed:) so it may b a LONG time bfore any more comics. (it took me about half a month to do all of the templates, and I had a break from school somewhere in there)