? - An OOTS style comic

[Nageto004]

Behold Browse Filler!

http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/2772/short16.png
This is my first try at making art work with inkscape so just remember that.:smalltongue:

Also the comidic apeal may be a bit touch and go for a bit.

This is was a story about random advetures, welcome back plot.
comic
Comic #1 (http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/6105/pannel2.png)-Original plot
Comic #2 (http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/3645/pannel3.png)-Original plot
Comic #3 (http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/5371/pannel4.png)-Original Plot
Comic #4 (http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/2490/pannel.png)-Original plot
A new hope (http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/8320/pannel6.png)-Death of Original plot
Beep Bloop (http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/7466/pannel7.png)-Gag
Wrong game (http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/9973/pannel8.png)-Gag
new world (http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/7294/pannel9.png)-Start of new plot
Main change (http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/5673/pannel10.png)-Plot II
sleep in...space? (http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/551/pannel11.png)-Plot II
castel court (http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/1718/pannel12.png)-plot II
Get to da portal! (http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/3639/pannel13.png)-Plot II
Say what?! (http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/2470/pannel139.png)-Plot II
Sky roket in flight (http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/9229/pannel140.png)-Plot II
titleless (http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/5693/pannel14.png)-Plot II
Doom doom doom! (http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/9787/pannel16.png)-Plot II
Roachwave (http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/1447/pannel17.png)-Plot II
Poof (http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/9553/pannel18.png)-Plot II
The Re-Animator (http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/3902/pannel19.png)-Plot II
Run Joe Run! (http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/4496/pannel20.png)-Plot II
Don't you just hate those kind of mix ups? (http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/3605/pannel21.png)-Plot II
Does it shine? (http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/9931/pannel22.png)-Plot II
It'll cost ya ta hurry up the work. (http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/1907/pannel23.png)-Plot II
Wow get pissed why don't ya. (http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/4078/pannel24.png)-Plot II
Aww he looks happy. (http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/3367/pannel25.png)-Plot II
Why is every body geting so sappy all of a sudden? (http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/3204/35832446.png)-Plot II
What an older character?! (http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/5753/76807360.png)-Plot II
Note to self... (http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/1234/79757526.png)-Plot II
Yea! I mean. (http://img263.imageshack.us/i/98131529.png/)-Plot II
I forgot all about that guy (http://img532.imageshack.us/i/60133177.png/)-Plot II


Holliday (Closest/current)
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/6375/easterq.png

Current
http://img101.imageshack.us/i/84606482.png/

The World of ?
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/8166/59038122.png

----INFO----
- 12 Countries
- 7 Continents
- 55 billion+ citys, towns and, villages
- Main city of the story is Loken City located in the State of Majin in the country of Loken.

Other

bannershttp://img197.imageshack.us/img197/3650/banner2z.pnghttp://img197.imageshack.us/img197/3650/banner2z.png

http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/4720/bannerih.png (http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/4720/bannerih.png)

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/8343/banner2zx.png (http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/8343/banner2zx.png)

http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/3438/banner3yg.png (http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/3438/banner3yg.png)


holliday comics/picsHalloween comic (http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/7505/pannelh.png)
Thanks Giving (http://img361.imageshack.us/ifs/5751/img522/1/16415503.png)
X-mas (http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/909/pannelc.png)
New Year (http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/2372/pannelny.png)
St. Patrics day (http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/4232/stpdh.png)

[Nageto004]

Issue #1 (http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/6105/pannel2.png) is up

[Cizak]

It look fairly decent. I didn't laugh or anything, but hey. It's the first comic.


Nitpick: In the banner you forgot the space between "all" and "I", and wrote "allI".

Oh and btw, is he supposed to smile in the first comic? Because from the speech and the eyebrows I get the feeling he should be:smallannoyed:, but it seems he is smiling.

[Nageto004]

It look fairly decent. I didn't laugh or anything, but hey. It's the first comic.


Nitpick: In the banner you forgot the space between "all" and "I", and wrote "allI".

Oh and btw, is he supposed to smile in the first comic? Because from the speech and the eyebrows I get the feeling he should be:smallannoyed:, but it seems he is smiling.

Thanks didn't notice the banner thing.

[Nageto004]

Issue #2 (http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/3645/pannel3.png) is up so is Issue #3 (http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/5371/pannel4.png) (can you spot the game refrence in #3?)

[Szilard]

Spelled get wrong.

[Nageto004]

Spelled get wrong.

yea Im not to good at that...

[Cizak]

Good, I guess. Doesn't like teh fact that nothing is happening, but I'll keep checking.

Nitpick: "im" should be "I'm".

[Nageto004]

Good, I guess. Doesn't like teh fact that nothing is happening, but I'll keep checking.

Nitpick: "im" should be "I'm".

something will happen, just don't know what but, for a couple more comics I will just be introducing the rest of the team and what their doing.

[Nageto004]

Issue #4 (http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/2490/pannel.png) is up.

[Cizak]

Um... good? I don't really get what's going on.

Nitpick-time: "I didn't know what one to get" should be "I didn't know wich one to get".

Also: Why are everyone smiling? They don't "sound" (you know what I mean) like their happy och so, but everyone has smily mouths?

[Nageto004]

Um... good? I don't really get what's going on.

Nitpick-time: "I didn't know what one to get" should be "I didn't know wich one to get".

Also: Why are everyone smiling? They don't "sound" (you know what I mean) like their happy och so, but everyone has smily mouths?

1. Right now he is anwsering the question from the last comic.
2. I suck at mouths and thats the best I could get them.
3. I also suck at spelling.

[Nageto004]

Filler vid? (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HS-D8AKgGy0) This is just some thing I made when I got Inkskape.

[Nageto004]

Finaly Issue #5 (http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/8320/pannel6.png) is up and the last two pannels arn't goung to make sence and thats good. :smallwink:

[Rae Artemi]

Was that Tingle in panel 5?

[Nageto004]

Was that Tingle in panel 5?.

Yea it was I didn't make him to good though.

[Nageto004]

Issue #6 (http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/7466/pannel7.png) is up and kinda short.

[Cizak]

OKay, I have absolutely NO idea of what's going on? Is there some kind of jokes that I don't understand here?

[Nageto004]

OKay, I have absolutely NO idea of what's going on? Is there some kind of jokes that I don't understand here?

He gat sewed and gat an acheivement for it.

[EmeraldPhoenix]

Ok, listen. Your artwork is good, but I have a few suggestions for you.


Put all new comics in the first post by editing it, in addition to posting new posts. It makes it easier to find the comics and read them in order.
Please, I know you may not be the best speller, but can you at least just check it over or have somebody else look over it? If you have Inkscape, it should be a quick and easy fix.
Try to put more effort into explaining what is going on. If people have no idea what just happened in between comics, that's a sign that maybe you should make a comic in between explaining it, or maybe even just adding an extra pannel or two at the beginning or end.
Use Spellcheck.


yea Im not to good at that...
"Yeah, I'm not too good at that..."


Good, I guess. Doesn't like teh fact that nothing is happening, but I'll keep checking.
"Good, I guess. I don't like the fact that nothing is happening, but I'll keep checking."


Nitpick-time: "I didn't know what one to get" should be "I didn't know wich one to get".
No, actually it should be "I didn't know which one to get."


Also: Why are everyone smiling? They don't "sound" (you know what I mean) like their happy och so, but everyone has smily mouths?
I don't even know what you were trying to say with och. Smiley has an e.


Finaly Issue #5 (http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/8320/pannel6.png) is up and the last two pannels arn't goung to make sence and thats good. :smallwink:

"Finally, Issue #5 is up and the last two panels aren't going to make sense and that's good."


He gat sewed and gat an acheivement for it.

"He got sued and got an achievement for it."

...actually, that spellcheck one goes for everyone here.


Thanks. I think your comic looks good, but it could be a whole lot better with some very small changes.

[The Neoclassic]

Spelling and grammar are very important to most comic readers. I recommend you get a beta reader. Either send them comics or just the dialogue before you post them, and in 12-24 hours they can get back to you with what you need to fix to make it grammar and spelling proper. :smallsmile:

[Nageto004]

Issue #7 is up. (http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/9973/pannel8.png)

[Rae Artemi]

Nick, you really should let me read these before you post them, so many spelling errors...

[EmeraldPhoenix]

...What...the...fart...?

Can anybody explain what just happened in that comic?

And why they kept mentioning the bottom part of a shoe? Unless-oh. Ohhhh. You meant "soul", didn't you?

Ok, it still doesn't make any sense, even knowing that.

[Nageto004]

Issue #8 (http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/9973/pannel8.png) is up.

[Nageto004]

New (http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/5673/pannel10.png) comic up

[Wreckingrocc]

Okay, please add some extra panels in between. I can't tell the difference between when he's walking and moving around when the background/angle changes. Is that a different portal? Different room? I'm totally lost as to where all of this is going.

Spellcheck should be default on everything you use; it's not very hard to right click it and select the one you want, unless you don't know the difference between similar-sounding words that are spelled differently (IE the difference between They're, Their, and There), in which case we might have a problem... If that's the case, sou should probably consider taking some elementary school courses online, if you can find any.

Finally, the jokes seem... Random. Most of the references I either don't notice, or understand but lack understanding of the joke. It's kind of hard to follow everything.

[Nageto004]

Finally, the jokes seem... Random. Most of the references I either don't notice, or understand but lack understanding of the joke. It's kind of hard to follow everything.

Thats the point also new (http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/551/pannel11.png) comic. Last one before school starts.

[The Dark Fiddler]

I'll be honest; I don't understand anything about what the hell's going on, and I don't get the jokes, which makes me not want to continue reading. The spelling also puts me off. I can respect that you might not be great at writing, but in this day and age with all of the spell-checkers out there, and the ease of finding a beta-reader, there's really no excuse.




Finally, the jokes seem... Random. Most of the references I either don't notice, or understand but lack understanding of the joke. It's kind of hard to follow everything.

Thats the point also new (http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/551/pannel11.png) comic. Last one before school starts.

Yeah, that's a REALLY bad way to get regular readers.

[Surrealistik]

Random, arbitrary, retarded. I love it.

[Nageto004]

Yeah, that's a REALLY bad way to get regular readers.

Did I ever say I wanted to get REGULAR readers, no I only expect people to find this read a little and move on consider it browse filler.
p.s I don't care if Browse Filler isn't a word/term it is now:smalltongue:.

[Nageto004]

new comic is up. HELLO EVERY ONE!

[EmeraldPhoenix]

Mmmhmm. Indeed. The new comic is up.

Now then, I think I speak for more than myself when I say: It would be so very, very, extremely helpful for you to type up and post, in detail, exactly what has happened in the plot over the course of your comics. Or even just a general summary would be nice.

Also? Please write at least one sentence with proper grammer, capitalization, and punctuation. Just to prove that you can. Otherwise, I'm forced to conclude that you have some kind of weird illness that prevents you from being gramatically correct. :smallamused:

It doesn't have to be long. Just one gramatically correct sentence, then you can go back to butchering the english language any way you want.

Also, I redid the first comic with a few changes in the dialouge.
Origanal:
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/6105/pannel2.png

Gramatically Correct:
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/9382/badcomic.png

See, it's the little things that matter.

[Surrealistik]

You've just eliminated about half the hilarity in that strip. Listen, this guy is a comedic genius; he knows what he's doing. Let the master go about his works.

[Nageto004]

See, it's the little things that matter.

No It's the big flashy things with glitter that matter, and Billy Mays (R.I.P)

[Wreckingrocc]

....?.....

[T-O-E]

Issue 7 made me laugh so hard. Wonderfully absurd.

[Green-Shirt Q]

Also? Please write at least one sentence with proper grammer, capitalization, and punctuation. Just to prove that you can. Otherwise, I'm forced to conclude that you have some kind of weird illness that prevents you from being gramatically correct. :smallamused:

Like Dyslexia. Or having English as a second language.

But yes, I agree that the correct use of english may in fact make this comic much, much better. I recommend you getting a proofreader, Nageto004.

[Rae Artemi]

Once again, Nick, send me these before you post them so that I can proofread them.

[Nageto004]

New comic is up

[Nageto004]

I NEED YOU! To pick the next cameo/refrence character I put in the comic.
here are the choices: http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/7302/21861239.pngOld Gregg http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/6190/12823590.pngRaiden http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/1553/93254479.pngCapt. America http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/962/62419246.pngMaster Chief http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/7290/79653842.png Deamon Roach

[Nageto004]

New comic (http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/2470/pannel139.png) is up; don't forget to vote.

[Nageto004]

New comic is up.
p.s. someonenonotyou (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=112985) I know how you fell now, Im lonley too.:smallfrown:

[T-O-E]

This is insane.
I love it.

[Nageto004]

Alright I can't wait any longer prepair for the Halloween comic!

http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/7505/pannelh.png

Have trouble reading? Audio (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FtyNeMazZY8&feature=channel_page)

[Nageto004]

I crisen this thred active. (New comic)

[karnokoto]

This is frackin amazing, I love it! Don't listen to these fools with their talk of 'english' and 'grammar!' Keep workin your magic!

[Nageto004]

New comic is up, huray for weekly updates!:smallbiggrin:

[Nageto004]

I went ahead and posted the new comic. Ignore any spelling/gramer mistakes in it, I couldn't edit it.

[Nageto004]

New comic, it makes no sence why? You'll find out, later!

[Nageto004]

New comic. So alone in here :smallfrown:.

[Nageto004]

New comic

*Beep Bloop*
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/5980/beepbloop1.png

[Nageto004]

once again new comic

[Nageto004]

Happy Thanksgiving every one the Holiday Pannel is up so, GO LOOK AT THE FOOD YOU DON'T GET TO EAT!

[Nageto004]

Christmas comic, its about time.
And hey look it rhymes.

[Detrimentalist]

I vote for the de(a)mon roach to be the cameo appearance.
Also, I agree that you should send these to Rae for proofreading.
Funny comic!

[Nageto004]

Also, I agree that you should send these to Rae for proofreading.
Funny comic!

I do now. But not the holiday comics.

[Nageto004]

Happy New Year. Do not open untill you read the comic.Remember when you think of New Years the baby is the grim reapers kid.
P.S. Rae is in it as a thank you for my camio and he is the smartest person I know so he got to explain the holliday.

[Rae Artemi]

heh, XKCD reference. I like it.

[Nageto004]

Behold a new comic. With the new power of spell check Inkscape has taken Rae's old job.

[Rae Artemi]

Behold a new comic. With the new power of spell check Inkscape has taken Rae's old job.

LIES, for spellcheck is imperfect. hey is spelled wrong in panel 2, there should be a comma after me in panel 4, there should bw a comma after go, and a comma after well. Also yeah has an h on the end.

[Nageto004]

LIES, for spellcheck is imperfect. hey is spelled wrong in panel 2, there should be a comma after me in panel 4, there should bw a comma after go, and a comma after well. Also yeah has an h on the end.

oh well then you'll get the rest.

[Nageto004]

Well the new comic is up. I have much fear for tomarrow.

[Nageto004]

Am I glad I sent this ,and one other, to myself now that my templates may be gone forever. That means the new comic...

[Nageto004]

Am I glad I sent this ,and one other, to myself now that my templates may be gone forever.]

Well this is the last comic till I have my data back, wich should be by the week end at least. And yes I know that I messed up some spelling but like I said I don't have the data to fix it so GET OVER IT.

[Nageto004]

Back with a new comic.

[Nageto004]

New Comic is up.

[Rae Artemi]

you forgot the image tags.

[Nageto004]

Fix it.
7890

[Nageto004]

New4one.910

[Nageto004]

New New New!!!!

[Nageto004]

Heres the new comic http://img532.imageshack.us/i/60133177.png/.
FYI: Im haveing problems with this link so its not on the first page yet.

[Nageto004]

Still having troubles w/ the front page.
Did He have that all on under those clothes? (http://img28.imageshack.us/i/23874592.png/)

[Nageto004]

I think the problem is fixed but still: Would they even be able to help? (http://img101.imageshack.us/i/84606482.png/)
Also 50 pts. if you can tell what music vid he's watching.

[Rae Artemi]

It's 99 luft balloons :smalltongue: