Broken world

[Rademijas]

Hello...
I would like to introduce to you my new comic called Broken world, which is made in "Order of the Stick style".:smallsmile:

cast:

Fred-here (http://img10.imageshack.us/i/fredrsprototyp.jpg/)
Bob-here (http://img34.imageshack.us/i/bobnu.jpg/)
Mary-here (http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/6950/marieq.jpg)
Joy-here (http://img196.imageshack.us/i/joyprototyprs.jpg/)
Noseamus-here (http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/928/nosales.jpg)


Translation from Czech: strip 1: here (http://img697.imageshack.us/i/1dilfull.jpg/)
strip 2:here (http://img69.imageshack.us/i/2dilull.jpg/)
strip 3:here (http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/3401/3dilfull.jpg)
strip 4:here (http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/9071/4dilfull.jpg)

Thanks for comments:smallwink:

[Rademijas]

sorry for doublepost but no one posted here!

strip 1:http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/606/1dilfull.jpg
strip 2:http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/8850/2dilull.jpg
strip 3:http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/3401/3dilfull.jpg
strip 4:http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/9071/4dilfull.jpg

Have a fun and write!:smallsmile:

EDIT: For gods sake,can't you write any comment?:annoyed:

[Green-Shirt Q]

EDIT: For gods sake,can't you write any comment?:annoyed:

Oh look, a comic about adventurers in a fantasy setting. What an intriguing premise. Never seen this before.

...I can't really tell what's going on in these comics, to be honest. :confused:

Also, people don't tend to comment unless we have comics to comment on. Unless the story has been going on for a while, we don't really care about out-of-comic character bios. I recommend alerting everyone when you've made a comic with a new post. Don't care about double posting. Triple post only if you need to.

[Rademijas]

...I can't really tell what's going on in these comics, to be honest.
Well,I can explain everything in next strips,so keep watching:smallsmile:

And thanks for your recommends...:smallbiggrin:

If I have time, new strip will be here tomorrow:smallwink:

[EmeraldPhoenix]

Hmm. I think this may have to do with not having English as your first language or something, but the dialouge in your comics is a bit...weird.

For instance, the first thing that comes to mind: when you use the phrase "Let them to me", I think what you mean is "Let me at them".

If you want, you could PM dialouge to me, first, and I could make sure it's alright. I'd be willing to do that.

[Rademijas]

Hmm. I think this may have to do with not having English as your first language or something, but the dialouge in your comics is a bit...weird.

I am just ill...and English isn't my favourite subject in school,so I can't speak so...er....good.

Of course thanks for comment:smallsmile:

[Dallas-Dakota]

Oh look, a comic about adventurers in a fantasy setting. What an intriguing premise. Never seen this before.

...I can't really tell what's going on in these comics, to be honest. :confused:

Also, people don't tend to comment unless we have comics to comment on. Unless the story has been going on for a while, we don't really care about out-of-comic character bios. I recommend alerting everyone when you've made a comic with a new post. Don't care about double posting. Triple post only if you need to.
Hey, look on the bright side, at least it isn't just one big Author Self Insert.

[EmeraldPhoenix]

I am just ill...and English isn't my favourite subject in school,so I can't speak so...er....good.

Of course thanks for comment:smallsmile:

Still, though, I'd be happy to help make sure your comics are good, dialouge-wise. I have lots of experiance as a grammer cop, you know.:smalltongue:

I'm sure if I tried to make comics in French, they would turn out bloody awful...no matter how good my French teacher is. (I know you're not french, just an example.)

[An Enemy Spy]

I am just ill...and English isn't my favourite subject in school,so I can't speak so...er....good.

Of course thanks for comment:smallsmile:

It's well, not good by the way. You can't speak so...er...well.:smallsmile:

[EmeraldPhoenix]

It's well, not good by the way. You can't speak so...er...well.:smallsmile:

Ok, even I don't do that. Seriously, nobody does that.:smallamused:

[Maximum Zersk]

Well, it looks good, but the plot seems too close to OotS. Especially the first comic.

[Rademijas]

Ok, my english teacher is sure proud of my english.


Well, it looks good, but the plot seems too close to OotS. Especially the first comic.
Yes, this is one kind of inspiration... "too-close-to-OotS" inspiration:smallwink: