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Dr.Epic
2010-11-16, 04:55 PM
So I'm involved in this project where I have to do illustrations. Anyway, below is a finished sketch and I'm wondering, looking at this guy, does he look angry? The sketch based off this I was told looked too angry and I'm hoping this one doesn't look quite so mad. You can explain in detail what you think, but I'd also appreciate a rating of 1 to 10 (1 complete calmness, 10 Hulk rage) indicating how mad he looks. You can also critique the piece as a whole and give me feedback but I'm mostly looking for thoughts about the anger (and before you say anything, the character is a disembodied floating head and the background is all white because I did this in photoshop, the head is a separate layer, and this is going to be used in an animation).

http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/8594/head1copycopycopy.jpg

Emperor Ing
2010-11-16, 04:58 PM
First reaction:
http://warnickfamilytexas.com/shane/Videos/Kill%20it%20With%20Fire%20Aliens.jpg
Second reaction: 3/10. If that's anger I shudder at what's happy.

Dr.Epic
2010-11-16, 05:13 PM
First reaction:
http://warnickfamilytexas.com/shane/Videos/Kill%20it%20With%20Fire%20Aliens.jpg
Second reaction: 3/10. If that's anger I shudder at what's happy.

Ha! Ha! What a terrific story! (sorry, I just watched the Room)

Thanks for the input.

zimmerwald1915
2010-11-16, 05:16 PM
First reaction:
Huh. My first rection was "So Dr. Epic was Terry Gilliam all along."

And it looks more concerned than angry.

Dr.Epic
2010-11-16, 05:25 PM
Huh. My first rection was "So Dr. Epic was Terry Gilliam all along."

Who? Also, I might have to sig that.

Dogmantra
2010-11-16, 05:39 PM
Who? Also, I might have to sig that.

The Python that did the animations. Also he's a film director.

CrimsonAngel
2010-11-16, 06:36 PM
Maybe do something to his mouth so that it's not totally normal shaped. He could bare his teeth. scrunch up, etc. Maybe open his eyes some more too.

Raging Gene Ray
2010-11-16, 07:07 PM
It doesn't look like a "flying off the handle" kind of angry...more of a "constantly on edge and looking for a reason to blow up" kind of angry...like he has that expression everywhere he goes.

Winter_Wolf
2010-11-17, 11:56 AM
That guy looks... constipated... or something. Not really angry as such.

Glass Mouse
2010-11-18, 02:23 PM
Right side of the face looks pretty annoyed.
Left side looks more sad than angry.

The lines on the forehead would need to point downwards towards the middle of the forehead rather than curve up like they do if you'd like to have her really angry.

Pretty creepy thing, though. Nicely modelled.

spacemarineW40K
2010-12-04, 09:48 PM
if saw his face walking down the street, :eek: (eek)

RedSun
2010-12-04, 09:52 PM
I wouldn't call him angry so much as I would call him surly.

The Glyphstone
2010-12-05, 08:38 AM
Yeah - less angry, more 'petulant and irritable'. Maybe a 3 or 4 on the mad-scale at worst.

cho_j
2010-12-11, 10:31 PM
I'm gonna agree with the posters above me. He looks irritated, not angry. My guess as to why is that his eyes have no lid showing. When you're REALLY furious, your narrow your eyes. Also, the mouth could contort more. Below is my favorite facial emotions guide; hope it helps!
Download for real full size/readability. (http://cedarseed.deviantart.com/#/ds1wwv)

scienceguy8
2010-12-11, 11:54 PM
Who? Also, I might have to sig that.

The Miracle of Flight (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LMpXUd_kesA)
Conrad Poohs and his Dancing Teeth, from Episode #23, "Scott of the Antarctic" (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D1BKtrG7qxQ)
Brian Islam and Brucie, from Episode #9, "The Ant, an Introduction" (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nhVod-29QRk&feature=related)

Lots more at YouTube. Just type in "Terry Gilliam animation". I just don't feel like listing all of them, but trust me, they are all good.

Castaras
2010-12-12, 11:46 AM
2/10 on rage scale. Looks like he's sulking/pouting rather than angry, imo.

aart lover
2010-12-15, 10:11 PM
i would say more slightly aggravated than anything else. or possibly constipated.

Raging Gene Ray
2010-12-16, 02:15 AM
Lots more at YouTube. Just type in "Terry Gilliam animation". I just don't feel like listing all of them, but trust me, they are all good.

Ooh! The picture looks like the first frame in an animation where this guy gets progressively madder and ends up opening his mouth so wide that his skull shoots out from under his elastic lips, along with fire, sewage, blood and organs, shambling creatures, various trinkets and civilizations, and all sorts of crazy crap.

Then he closes his mouth and acts like nothing happened.