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fizzybobnewt
2010-12-20, 10:01 PM
We all know the story of the Grinch, (if you don't: It's a book by Dr. Seuss in which a creature called the Grinch, who hates Christmas, tries to "steal" Christmas from the "Whos" [people] by stealing all the presents and such. In the end he learns his lesson and his heart grows several sizes, I forget how many exactly.)
Anyway, we know that story, now at least. But what if the Grinch never had a change of heart? What if he came back next Christmas, but this time, the Whos were ready for him? You help decide the Grinch's actions as he tries to escape the Whos' deadly traps, get to his cave safely, and maybe nab some presents while he's at it.
Submit stuff for the Grinch to do in bold, the comic will continue with the one with most votes. Ties will be decided more or less randomly.
Comic #1
http://i859.photobucket.com/albums/ab152/fizzybobnewt/Grinch1.png
Woops, forgot the CRUNCH on that last panel. And sorry about the small words.
#2
Tranquilizer darts. (This is more of a syringe, really. wh'ev's. [Pronounced "wevs", short for "whatev's" short for "whatever".])
http://i859.photobucket.com/albums/ab152/fizzybobnewt/Grinch2.png
"...probably."
#3
Find Delibird and shoot him!
http://i859.photobucket.com/albums/ab152/fizzybobnewt/grinch3.png
Hey, "#" and "3" are on the same key!

Ender Wigin
2010-12-21, 04:07 PM
Hmm... An alternate universe of a Dr. Seuss book... Not what I would have chosen for an interactive webcomic, but ok. And mabe you could put some rymes in there or somthing, to make it more... Seussey?

Anyway, make the Grinch pull out some tranquilizer darts, or better yet, make him bring out Max to help.:smalltongue:

fizzybobnewt
2010-12-21, 04:17 PM
Grinch actions bold plz. About the rhymes... I don't know if I want to make it Dr. Suessy in that way, it's kind of a darker take on the story.

CrimsonAngel
2010-12-22, 01:38 PM
Why did the window fall off like that?

fizzybobnewt
2010-12-22, 01:48 PM
It was supposed to be a visual joke. It's really a painting, it fell off when he slammed the door.

Domochevsky
2010-12-22, 02:00 PM
Ok, so i think this here is missing some basic explanations... :smallconfused: lay down to us how this is going to work. Is this the regular MSPA style "post a command" thing? Are the special rules?

Ender Wigin
2010-12-22, 02:04 PM
Grinch actions bold plz.

The Grinch blows his dog whistle which calls Max, who has started being on steroids ever since pulling his sleigh last year, and he tears the wolf to shreads. There, happy now?!?

fizzybobnewt
2010-12-22, 02:45 PM
Ok, so i think this here is missing some basic explanations... :smallconfused: lay down to us how this is going to work. Is this the regular MSPA style "post a command" thing? Are the special rules?

1. Yes.
2. Not really.
Thanks for the feedback. I put some explanations in the first post. (That is, after you mentioned it to me, I did.)


The Grinch blows his dog whistle which calls Max, who has started being on steroids ever since pulling his sleigh last year, and he tears the wolf to shreds. There, happy now?!?

I don't want to start an argument, but I apologize for how much my request for bold seems to have offended you. True, I guess it's not that important. You don't have to bold if you really don't want to.
Also, hee hee! That's great. I'm going to add Max on steroids somewhere.

Cizak
2010-12-22, 03:48 PM
Um... punch it?

super dark33
2010-12-22, 03:53 PM
get into its mouth and punch its bauble inside

fizzybobnewt
2010-12-22, 09:32 PM
http://i859.photobucket.com/albums/ab152/fizzybobnewt/Grinch2.png
"...probably." He's starting to get used to it.
I would've used Max, but I'd already started when that idea happened. Except now I'm doubting my own memory, because the Max idea was in the same post as the tranquilizer idea. Weird.

blackjack217
2010-12-22, 09:38 PM
>Do A barrel roll and use bombs wisely

Domochevsky
2010-12-22, 11:15 PM
Protip: Add the command that was used at the head of the comic, so people know what's up. :smallwink:

Ender Wigin
2010-12-23, 02:29 AM
Use a tinsel lasso, climb up and steer the presents into each other to make them crash, so they blow up or somthing...

Find Delibird and shoot him.

super dark33
2010-12-23, 03:34 PM
throw snowballs at them!

fizzybobnewt
2011-01-19, 07:46 PM
Find Delibird and shoot him!
http://i859.photobucket.com/albums/ab152/fizzybobnewt/grinch3.png
IT'S FINALLY HERE! Boy, was I procrastinating busy.

blackjack217
2011-01-19, 08:55 PM
>Do A barrel roll and use bombs wisely

this still works

super dark33
2011-01-20, 09:16 AM
i second this
>Do A barrel roll and use bombs wisely