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Akrim.elf
2010-12-31, 03:44 PM
link to previous thread ...
http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=165926

what to say, short stories about a girl who wants only one .. candy!
One Important Note - I hold the principle - if something about it and nobody understand it, I did it wrong ...
and then it is useless to explain anything ...
update at least once a month!


http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n159/Akrim13/g5901.png
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/236/5/f/Unhappy_Mem____by_DepresiveNeko.png

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/239/a/c/Unhapy_Memento_II_by_DepresiveNeko.png

http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/239/b/b/Unhappy_Memento_III_by_DepresiveNeko.png
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/249/b/c/unhappy_memento_iv_by_depresiveneko-d2y5bbx.png
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/312/e/2/unhappy_memento_xiii_by_depresiveneko-d32fz66.png
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/321/b/4/unhappy_memento_xiv_by_depresiveneko-d331g9j.png
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/003/e/3/unhappy_memento_xix_by_depresiveneko-d36bnuc.png
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/008/4/f/memento_xx_by_depresiveneko-d36p0yr.png
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/016/e/5/unhappy_memento_xxii_by_depresiveneko-d37bo2h.png
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/029/8/2/unhappy_memento_xxi_by_depresiveneko-d38bddx.png
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/058/2/b/unhappy_memento_xxlll_by_depresiveneko-d3ajbj0.png
http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/084/4/c/unhapy_memento_xxiv_by_depresiveneko-d3cff6l.png
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/163/4/6/unhappy_memento_xxvii_by_depresiveneko-d3ipt2z.png
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/135/a/c/memento_xxvi_by_depresiveneko-d3gdycs.png
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/091/3/c/unhappy_memento_xxv_by_depresiveneko-d3cy40q.png



http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n159/Akrim13/g13139.png

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/269/6/b/unhappy_memento_v_by_depresiveneko-d2zidca.png
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/271/d/c/unhappy_memento_vi_by_depresiveneko-d2znofn.png
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/271/c/3/unhappy_memento_vii_by_depresiveneko-d2zo3uu.png

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/274/4/3/unhappy_memento_viii_by_depresiveneko-d2zuaef.png
http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/286/d/f/unhappy_memento_ix_by_depresiveneko-d30onob.png

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/294/e/6/unhappy_memento_x_by_depresiveneko-d3177j9.png
http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/300/2/a/unhappy_memento_xi_by_depresiveneko-d31mpus.png
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/302/0/9/unhappy_memento_xii_by_depresiveneko-d31quw7.png

Sweet Factory
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/336/6/d/unhappy_memento_xvi_by_depresiveneko-d3428p7.png

http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/353/8/c/unhappy_memento_xvii_by_depresiveneko-d34qmh2.png
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/353/8/e/unhappy_memento_xviii_by_depresiveneko-d3573yi.png

Akrim.elf
2011-01-03, 10:15 AM
part 19

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/003/e/3/unhappy_memento_xix_by_depresiveneko-d36bnuc.png

M@XWeru
2011-01-03, 02:21 PM
A comic about ghosts and candy. Awesome.

Cizak
2011-01-06, 04:08 PM
I... don't get it.

M@XWeru
2011-01-06, 06:33 PM
The first two stores are open, and the last doesn't allow ghosts.

It would have been better with the Ghostbusters logo, though. ;P

Cizak
2011-01-06, 10:13 PM
That one I think I got. But the rest... eh?

Akrim.elf
2011-01-07, 08:17 AM
ou .. I forgot that everyone immediately assumes that it is a placard with the inscription opened / closed on opposite sides ...

If I knew, I wrote a note - on both sides of the sign is the same word ... either closed or open

http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n159/Akrim13/g6691.png

Akrim.elf
2011-01-08, 11:11 AM
part 20

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/008/4/f/memento_xx_by_depresiveneko-d36p0yr.png

Bayar
2011-01-14, 06:22 PM
I really like your art style. And it is refreshing to see a webcomic doing humor without the aid of massive walls of text. Keep up the good work !

Akrim.elf
2011-01-16, 01:26 PM
part 22 (hm.. this weird... i forgot created a comics 21..)

http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/016/e/5/unhappy_memento_xxii_by_depresiveneko-d37bo2h.png

araveugnitsuga
2011-01-16, 06:18 PM
The fourth wall has been destroyed, it's pieces now lay across several multi-verses.
Found it very funny.

Akrim.elf
2011-01-17, 07:44 AM
The fourth wall has been destroyed, it's pieces now lay across several multi-verses.
Found it very funny.

you means this?
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/245/6/d/006___break_away_by_depresiveneko-d2xtznu.png

Ninjaman
2011-01-17, 02:12 PM
Funny very funny akrim.elf

araveugnitsuga
2011-01-17, 06:16 PM
Akrim.elf, never ceasing to amaze me in her destruction of the fourth wall, and the third wall, and the second wall, and the first wall. Oh, and the fifth wall.
You are still missing 6 dimensions.

Awesome and funny.

Akrim.elf
2011-01-29, 02:09 PM
Okey, is time for part 21!

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/029/8/2/unhappy_memento_xxi_by_depresiveneko-d38bddx.png

M@XWeru
2011-01-30, 06:52 AM
Sorry. I don't get this one at all.

Ninjaman
2011-01-30, 01:01 PM
Sorry. I don't get this one at all.

Yea i agree it is very confusing.

araveugnitsuga
2011-01-30, 04:53 PM
I did understand it, it was funny.
The art quality as always awesome.

and "The cake wasn't a lie", at least not until it was eaten.

Akrim.elf
2011-02-01, 11:52 AM
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/032/9/3/chii__fire_by_depresiveneko-d38jpbg.png

or not?

I think this time I'll try to explain ...

Imagine a fictitious telephone competition, where you can win a cake if you can find all the differences between two images ... (about those two pictures you confused)
and what angers the organizer of competition more than finding that a single price just ceased to exist?
and if it knows who it may be, why not to punish him?

http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/043/0/4/memento_and_gilotine_by_depresiveneko-d39dekt.png

thx for idea by Szilard (Iron Avatarist Contest III)
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd233/SzilardG/akrimelf.png

Akrim.elf
2011-02-27, 01:45 PM
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/058/2/b/unhappy_memento_xxlll_by_depresiveneko-d3ajbj0.png

There is silence, emptiness ...
but even so I know that you notice me ...
and thank you for it

Akrim.elf
2011-03-17, 11:17 AM
this is not comics part, only little fan for mi beloved flash game :)
who know this?

http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/076/3/f/memento_vs__sushi_cat_by_depresiveneko-d3bu46w.png

and this comics not death, i am only lazy and not have a right mood...

M@XWeru
2011-03-17, 11:44 AM
Won't the ghost just fall through all the obstacles? D: Or cheat by flying back up?

Ninjaman
2011-03-17, 12:11 PM
Won't the ghost just fall through all the obstacles? D: Or cheat by flying back up?

He got a point.

Akrim.elf
2011-03-17, 01:19 PM
Mementine the magical barriers to treatment, so that through them can not be forfeited
track is adapted so that it is possible only natural movement in the direction of Earth's gravity ...

Ninjaman
2011-03-17, 01:49 PM
Mementine the magical barriers to treatment, so that through them can not be forfeited
track is adapted so that it is possible only natural movement in the direction of Earth's gravity ...

that makes sense. I think.

M@XWeru
2011-03-17, 06:02 PM
In that case, my money's on the cat.

Domochevsky
2011-03-17, 10:38 PM
Indeed, sushi cat is better suited to roll down those ramps.

But then again, having arms lets you cover more area, which is a plus in this. Im kinda torn.

Ninjaman
2011-03-18, 01:07 AM
My money is on the cat. Cats are mean creatures so it would propperbly cheat.

Traker
2011-03-18, 11:23 AM
Do not medele in the affairs of cats, for they are subtle and will pee on your computor.

sorta of topic but any way I think the cat would win

araveugnitsuga
2011-03-19, 12:49 PM
The ghost has arms and can try to crawl upwards or at least stop falling, and the lack of roundness makes it likely that she'll be able to control her movement better than the cat.

Akrim.elf
2011-03-25, 12:59 PM
Bets are closed, but did not finish the race .. We both contestants a bit stuck ... but the rescue squad is on its way ...

but as is already the end of the month, the time has come I got my release time
so a new episode with the old story:)

part 24!
http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/084/4/c/unhapy_memento_xxiv_by_depresiveneko-d3cff6l.png

forgive the text, but the icon would not it ...

Ninjaman
2011-03-26, 02:11 AM
Donīt you meen "donīt touch my kid"?

Akrim.elf
2011-04-01, 09:10 AM
thank all mine fans, but is time to end...

Memento 25 - the last piece of cake
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/091/3/c/unhappy_memento_xxv_by_depresiveneko-d3cy40q.png

araveugnitsuga
2011-04-03, 01:49 PM
That was awesome.

Akrim.elf
2011-04-22, 02:44 PM
here someting thematic
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/112/0/5/memento_pony_by_depresiveneko-d3elxa0.png

Bayar
2011-04-23, 05:17 AM
here someting thematic
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/112/0/5/memento_pony_by_depresiveneko-d3elxa0.png

White background makes it seem to be too invisible. A quote background however...seems to have the same effect :smallcool:

Akrim.elf
2011-04-25, 07:27 AM
White background makes it seem to be too invisible. A quote background however...seems to have the same effect :smallcool:

i know, but Memento is ghost and ghost is bat visible :))

and now for this Easter one little wish... (im to lazy for comics)
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/115/7/c/happy_easter_2011_by_depresiveneko-d3eu95c.png

Akrim.elf
2011-05-15, 07:46 AM
its to loong?
no, here no fans, here no comics! (im only copyraight another autors in this site)

im to lazy, that true... but here another little and clasic comics
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/135/a/c/memento_xxvi_by_depresiveneko-d3gdycs.png

Teutonic Knight
2011-05-15, 07:15 PM
Don't worry, I will support! Nice recent comic. You make very expressive characters, which is hard for me being strictly classic OotS-style.

Also they have cool clothes and designs.

Keep up the good work. :smallbiggrin:

Ninjaman
2011-05-16, 07:09 AM
I suport too.

The Succubus
2011-05-27, 05:11 PM
This a very strange and unusual comic you're running here but it's adorably sweet as well. Would like to see more. :smallsmile:

Akrim.elf
2011-06-12, 12:09 PM
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/163/4/6/unhappy_memento_xxvii_by_depresiveneko-d3ipt2z.png

I know my comics have smaller dimensions and thus struck me ask you a smaller range
what dimensions would you suggest?
and also .. think it would be better to add a header to comics? (or an individual work to invent the names?)
but do not worry, we still try to keep update to one (two if lucky enough) works for the month:)

Ninjaman
2011-06-12, 01:07 PM
It is very hard to see what happends, even though i think i can figure it out.

Moose Man
2011-06-23, 01:42 PM
I will support. :smallsmile:

Akrim.elf
2011-07-04, 12:19 PM
Im begining with Garfield Theme Week!
ehm...
maybe...
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/185/3/4/garfield_week___banner_by_depresiveneko-d3kz2ro.png
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/185/a/3/garfield_week___monday_by_depresiveneko-d3kyf63.png

The Succubus
2011-07-04, 03:35 PM
Yay! New Mini-story :D

Akrim.elf
2011-07-05, 06:28 AM
and now day two!
with best friend of cat!
http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/186/3/5/garfield_week___pooky_by_depresiveneko-d3l1jhu.png

Akrim.elf
2011-07-06, 11:24 AM
i love multiposting!
yeah!
(in this part of the forum is allowed:))
http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/187/c/7/garfield_week___spice_by_depresiveneko-d3l6bxr.png

Akrim.elf
2011-07-07, 11:22 AM
you know?
Odie is Tentacle Monster!
that is true!
read original :))
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/188/2/a/garfield_week___morning_caffe_by_depresiveneko-d3la8ax.png

Akrim.elf
2011-07-08, 06:39 AM
and now... another clasic theme with suprise twist!
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/189/7/9/garfield_week___lets_play_by_depresiveneko-d3ldhlb.png

Akrim.elf
2011-07-09, 09:04 AM
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/190/2/5/garfield_week___bad_place____by_depresiveneko-d3lhjtw.png

Akrim.elf
2011-07-12, 11:11 AM
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/193/5/2/garfield_week___fan_n__one_by_depresiveneko-d3nebld.png

M@XWeru
2011-07-13, 11:22 PM
Heh heh heh.

You gotta love Garfield.

Akrim.elf
2011-08-21, 09:22 AM
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/233/6/0/unhappy_memento_viii_by_depresiveneko-d47bzds.png

ghost is stronger as witch!

Akrim.elf
2011-09-21, 10:26 AM
and now.. number 29... maybe..
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/264/9/e/unhappy_memento_xxix_by_depresiveneko-d4ahnky.png

Oppolo
2011-09-21, 03:10 PM
Not sure if anybody else has this problem, but none of your images work for me.

Bayar
2011-09-21, 04:12 PM
Not sure if anybody else has this problem, but none of your images work for me.

Do you have, by any chance, deviantart blocked ?

The Succubus
2011-09-21, 06:40 PM
Mmmmm, I do love these one-shot stories. :smallbiggrin:

Akrim.elf
2011-09-22, 08:24 AM
Do you have, by any chance, deviantart blocked ?

that maybe is true...

antivirus programs hate devianart...

Akrim.elf
2011-11-18, 09:17 AM
im lazy and unmotivated author... and that stupid smog collored weather realy kill mine mood day to day...

but i still dont kill this comics, here is oficial 30. part!
if im counting right
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/322/b/0/unhappy_memento_xxx_by_depresiveneko-d4gjb7g.png



and here is awesome comics from Emperor Ing... is better that mine, i love this work!
http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/ll246/EmperorIng/MiniStoryGuestComic.png

Ninjaman
2011-11-18, 06:00 PM
Lovely. Even more since i spend a lot of time at damnlol.com and is quite familiar with rage comics.

Akrim.elf
2011-12-31, 11:44 AM
Happy New Year!

http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/365/b/3/unhappy_memento_xxxi_by_depresiveneko-d4ktp0s.png

we still lazy, but live!

Akrim.elf
2012-01-28, 12:07 PM
part 32
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/028/7/a/unhappy_memento_xxxii_by_depresiveneko-d4nvjbg.png

Akrim.elf
2012-02-24, 12:40 PM
part 33
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/036/6/7/unhappy_memento_by_depresiveneko-d4oqb1h.png

and little experiment (34)
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/055/b/6/unhappy_memento_xxxiv_by_depresiveneko-d4qt6xc.png

The Succubus
2012-02-29, 07:08 PM
Oh wow.

That's a really bold direction you took for your experiment. It's fantastic! :smallbiggrin:

More please.

Much more.

Akrim.elf
2012-03-13, 07:55 AM
Comic Update is Stoped

for some reason, but only for little time

so is time to continued...
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/122/8/2/unhappy_memento_xxxv_by_depresiveneko-d4ya7f0.png

Akrim.elf
2012-06-20, 06:13 AM
soo.. i still continued... i know, you are realy unhappy with this, but i still love this little ghost girl

part 36

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/172/4/e/unhappy_memento_xxxvi_by_depresiveneko-d54a3k2.png

The Zoat
2012-06-21, 05:21 AM
Really quite funny. The ghost girl would have commited suicide by now if she\
wasn't already dead.

Akrim.elf
2012-08-24, 12:40 PM
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/237/4/4/unhappy__memento_xxxviii_by_depresiveneko-d5cdgon.png

The Succubus
2012-08-24, 02:08 PM
Yay for the return of Mini-Story! :smallbiggrin:

Do you plan to do any more like the shadow one, because that was really awesome. :smallredface:

Akrim.elf
2012-08-25, 11:14 AM
Yay for the return of Mini-Story! :smallbiggrin:

Do you plan to do any more like the shadow one, because that was really awesome. :smallredface:


Yay for comment

and no, i dont plan for other BW Mini Story but for reading this comment i have this little idea...

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/238/8/2/unhappy__memento_xxxix_by_depresiveneko-d5chhm5.png

and thats all :)

and here first picture of Memento was created in SG :)
http://s3.amazonaws.com/stripgenerator/strip/62/27/42/00/00/full.png

Akrim.elf
2012-10-08, 10:30 AM
part 40
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/282/1/e/unhappy__memento_il_by_depresiveneko-d5ha8q4.png

Akrim.elf
2012-11-27, 11:21 AM
part 41
http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/332/c/5/unhappy_memento_ili_by_depresiveneko-d5mfqf6.png

Akrim.elf
2012-12-31, 01:08 PM
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/366/2/b/pf_2012_by_depresiveneko-d5px1jl.png

part 42
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/366/c/4/happy_memento_ilii_by_depresiveneko-d5px63f.png

Akrim.elf
2013-01-31, 12:05 PM
Part 43

http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/031/c/2/unhappy_memento_iliii_by_depresiveneko-d5tcver.png

dont worry, bee happy :)

The Succubus
2013-02-02, 05:11 PM
There's something adorable about that last panel. Just be careful it doesn't float away.

Akrim.elf
2013-02-27, 01:30 PM
part 44 - real story of ending this winter time

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/058/8/e/unhappy_memento_iliv_by_depresiveneko-d5weg74.png

Akrim.elf
2013-03-31, 01:11 PM
part 45
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/090/6/8/unhappy_memento_ilv_by_depresiveneko-d5zxqkq.png

Akrim.elf
2013-04-30, 09:05 AM
sigh.. no one tell me that i have a bad numbers in my comics...

http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/120/4/c/angry_memento_by_depresiveneko-d63l6j9.png

part 46...

Akrim.elf
2013-05-31, 10:31 AM
now another little fan service :)
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/151/1/c/garfield_theme____feed_me__by_depresiveneko-d679xlm.png

The Succubus
2013-05-31, 10:50 AM
<3 - that Garfield strip is adorable.

Akrim.elf
2013-06-30, 11:11 AM
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/181/9/0/money_spirit_by_depresiveneko-d6bccvq.png

Akrim.elf
2013-07-28, 08:21 AM
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/209/7/b/unhappy_memento_ilvi_by_depresiveneko-d6fjbdp.png