Chaosvii7
2011-04-06, 10:44 PM
I wanted some opinions on this new breed of enemy I've created. They're called Voidspawn, summoned by Eldritch Circle Cultists(another group of enemies I've made) that revere the 15 Eldritch Lords. Voidspawn are mortal enemies of the Starborn, another race that dwells in the Great Beyond.
Both Starborn and Voidspawn create Star Counters, a special rule-based ability I've created. However, they use them differently. The Voidspawn consume the Star Counters and restore health whereas the Starborn release them into space and are blessed for it. I plan to add these into a 4e game to give it a layer of good/evil conflict. You can side with good and fight Voidspawn or lean towards evil and stop Starborn. My game is big on astrology and stars like that.
Without further ado, I'd like you to judge my Voidspawn creations. I've made 11 different Voidspawn, converted into a nifty file with some formatting for flavor:
Mediafire Download (http://www.mediafire.com/?o6elgdnf6pxadrd)
(I would post it but that would consume a ton of space and the formatting would fall apart).
I'm looking for all sorts of input and criticism on these guys. I wanna tailor these guys out so they're all nice and proper for when I unload them upon my players. I don't have an encyclopedic knowledge on all of 4e like I do 3.5, so some things may be off and the format of some attacks may be wrong, but I don't plan to change that, just the actual information on the attacks and flavor. As long as I can read it, then that should be good enough.
So, any advice?
Both Starborn and Voidspawn create Star Counters, a special rule-based ability I've created. However, they use them differently. The Voidspawn consume the Star Counters and restore health whereas the Starborn release them into space and are blessed for it. I plan to add these into a 4e game to give it a layer of good/evil conflict. You can side with good and fight Voidspawn or lean towards evil and stop Starborn. My game is big on astrology and stars like that.
Without further ado, I'd like you to judge my Voidspawn creations. I've made 11 different Voidspawn, converted into a nifty file with some formatting for flavor:
Mediafire Download (http://www.mediafire.com/?o6elgdnf6pxadrd)
(I would post it but that would consume a ton of space and the formatting would fall apart).
I'm looking for all sorts of input and criticism on these guys. I wanna tailor these guys out so they're all nice and proper for when I unload them upon my players. I don't have an encyclopedic knowledge on all of 4e like I do 3.5, so some things may be off and the format of some attacks may be wrong, but I don't plan to change that, just the actual information on the attacks and flavor. As long as I can read it, then that should be good enough.
So, any advice?