Getting out of the story stage

[Delanish]

I've been writting.... and brainstorming and building up.... ideas and writting them from old PNP session of building a world and using my own (and friends) with permissions as heros Villans and NPC through the world the problem is i'm not much of a student of English. and have a great trouble Writting my ideas correctly...

i would like if possible for some people to read over my collections of works.... (archieves to recent) to use them together and add a bit of flare to my bland typeing

[Ravyn]

I think I might be able to help you there; helping people write by asking questions and suggesting revisions is one of my favorite activities, and I pride myself on dialogue.

Feel free to PM me; it might take me a bit to get through things because of school getting in the way, though.