Can I get a critique of my game?

[eternalshades]

I'm trying to get solid feedback for my free game in the hopes of making it better.

The game's name is Dark Revelations - the Role Playing game.

here's the some links

Dark Revelations - The Role Playing Game - Player's Guide
https://play.google.com/store/books/details/C_N_Constantin_Dark_Revelation_The_Role_Playing_Ga ?id=gX-7BQAAQBAJ&hl=en

Dark Revelations - The Role Playing Game - Book of Magic
https://play.google.com/store/books/details/C_N_Constantin_Dark_Revelations_The_Role_Playing_G ?id=YoG7BQAAQBAJ

Dark Revelations - The Role Playing Game - Book of Adventure
https://play.google.com/store/books/details/Chris_Constantin_Dark_Revelations_The_Role_Playing ?id=9oG7BQAAQBAJ

Dark Revelations - The Role Playing Game - Monster Manual & Book of Danger
https://play.google.com/store/books/details/Chris_Constantin_Dark_Revelations_The_Role_Playing ?id=ZYK7BQAAQBAJ

If I had to sum it up very concisely using other people's games, it is pathfinder/rifts (with a healthy dose of modern d20).

I just dropped the psychic book (inspired heavily by the animated movie Rock and Rule) and would love suggestions and feedback on this one specifically.

Dark Revelations - The Role Playing Game - Book of Arrogance
https://play.google.com/store/books/details/C_N_Constantin_Dark_Revelations_The_Role_Playing_G ?id=jaMoCgAAQBAJ&hl=en

Thanks all. :)