View Full Version : One page not very funny comic.

2007-10-19, 02:30 PM
Oke, this isn't a very great comic, but I feel like posting it here.


I even used this joke once....

Tiffanie Lirle
2007-10-19, 02:41 PM
While not really funny, the characters have a cute "doll-like" thing going on. The line on that shield might be a bit too thick though? It doesn't seem like its part of the character at all really.

Just my opinion though.

Edit- The red shield, not the round one the other guy has.

2007-10-19, 02:45 PM
It's slightly funny actually. In a 'What?!' kind of way.

2007-10-19, 03:28 PM
Eh, It's not my cup of tea. Good effort though.

2007-10-19, 03:39 PM
Made me giggle a bit. :smallsmile:

And yeah...I've used that joke once before as well in Real life...<.<

More cute dolls! Woo! *hugs cute doll*

2007-10-19, 04:36 PM
The moon changes position slightly in some frames, and the sky is lighter in the first frame. A very good style, but the page itself is... lacking?

2007-10-19, 06:16 PM
Well, that made me laugh :thog:. Seriously, it did.

#7 ? Where are the #1, #2, #3, #4, #5 and #6 ? :smallbiggrin:

2007-10-19, 09:38 PM
Being someone who has fought with shields on an almost weekly basis, I think it would look a bit better if the red shield was a bit closer to the Gnome's body. As of right now it looks like a punch shield, which though its fine for the barbarian, most tower shields look a bit odd like that.

Just my two cents.

[Insert Neat Username Here]
2007-10-22, 09:17 PM
I liked it.

For those of you who didn't know, 1-6 are at Jleuven.net.

And Ichneumon, if you didn't get my PM, your site's boards aren't working. Thought you ought to know.

2007-11-02, 04:47 AM
Well, that made me laugh . Seriously, it did.

#7 ? Where are the

2007-11-02, 05:41 AM
...others? See above you, they're at http://jleuven.net/.

I giggled. In a "aww, i'nt that cute" way.

2007-11-03, 02:07 PM
Thanks for the nice comments. Happy you enjoyed it. :smallbiggrin:

I know the forum on my site is down, I really don't know how to fix it.:smallannoyed:

Dalboz of Gurth
2007-11-03, 09:07 PM
I like it ^_^