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Elrond
2008-09-13, 01:29 AM
In The Playground

An OOTS style webcomic
Here is a link to my ITP website (http://intheplaygroundcomic.webs.com/) (Its In the Making)
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/InThePlayground.gif
Post or PM me if your interested in being put in the webcomic
Archives
ITP#1: Nameless
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP01.gif
ITP #2: Vampires
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP02.gif
ITP #3: Gunzz
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP03.gif
ITP #4: I am the Randomizer!!
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP04.gif
ITP #5: School field trip
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP05.gif
ITP #6: Take a ticket
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP06.gif
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP06Con.gif
ITP #7: Can't reach
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP07.gif
ITP #8: Way of a Ninja
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP08.gif
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP08Con.gif
ITP #9: The names SoD
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP09.gif
ITP #10: My companion
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP10.gif
ITP #11: The Planhttp://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP11.gif
ITP #12: The Guard (Janitor)http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP12.gif

ITP #13: Sleepy Timehttp://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP12Con.gif
ITP #14: I like Cookies!!!http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP13.gif
ITP #15: No pay
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP14.gif
ITP #16: Mmmmm... Crunchy
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP15.gif
ITP #17: Mobile duh!
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP16.gif
ITP#18: War
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP17.gif
ITP #19: Hair!!
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP19.gif
ITP#20: It's Looting Time
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP20.gif
ITP#21: Town
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP21.gif
ITP#22: Deaths Tavern
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP22.gif
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP22Con.gif
ITP:#23: Big Sentences
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP23.gif
ITP #24: So Many Choices
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP24.gif
ITP #25: New Look
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP25.gif
ITP #26: The Plot Thickens
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP26.gif
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP26Con.gif
ITP #27: There Leaving
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP27.gif
ITP #28: Bob
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP28.gif
ITP #29: Needs Training
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP29.gif
ITP #30: A Dark and Stormy Night
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP30.gif
ITP #31: THEM!!
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP31.gif

Cast
The Randomizer (Has appeared)
DD The Cookie Monster (Has appeared)
Ethrael
FF fanboy (Has appeared)
Nameless (Has appeared)
the_Q (Has appeared)
bayar
Wraithy
Darkblade
Haleyintraining
TheCountAlucard (Has appeared)
Gourtox
Collyer-san
Vulion
Bisected8
Exeson
Moff Chumley (Has appeared)
Tired N' Drowzy
ThePhantom (Has appeared)
Enlong
KidKris
Mauve Shirt
JasonDoomsblade
V Junior
SoD (Has appeared)
The Gremlin
Chas the mage
CrimsonAngel
Eldar Ditto
Supergwindor (Appear Shortly)
SandyCaesar (Appear Shortly)
GrlumpTheElder
Silverraptor (Appear Shortly)
sean o the dead (Appear Shortly)
horngeek
The Gremlin (Appear Shortly)
Skaroq
Belkarsbadside1
TehSheen


Banners

By Me
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITPbanner01.gif
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITPBanner02.gif
By The Gremlin
http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/3738/itpbanner1.png
By sean o the dead
http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc269/D-S95/chubbygremlin-2.jpg
By GrlumpTheElder
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w192/pomchop/Image%20Games/Bannar15.png
By Silverraptor
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt255/silverraptor_photo/InThePlaygroundBannersvg.png

Smileys
Elrond
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ElrondSmiley01.gif
SoD
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/SodSmiley01.gif
Grim
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/GrimSmiley01.gif
ThePhantom
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/PhantomSmiley01.gif
The Randomizer
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/RandomizerSmiley01.gif
Count Alucard
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/CountSmiley01.gif
FFfanboy (Night Surgeon)
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/FFfanboySmiley01.gif
Nameless
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/NamelessSmiley01.gif

Fan
2008-09-13, 01:39 AM
Seems interesting. I'd be willing to particpate if you don't mind someone giving you crticism every other comic.:smallsmile:
(Dialouge only, not art as I proly know so much less about it then you.)

Elrond
2008-09-13, 02:55 AM
OK sounds good:smallsmile:

Nameless
2008-09-13, 03:30 AM
This looks interesting :smallbiggrin:

Feel free to use me any time you want. (dear god that sounder wrong)

Dallas-Dakota
2008-09-13, 03:36 AM
Sounds good, good luck.

Feel free to use my character. (the cookiemonster, the cookie llama and the cookie cat.)

I'l most likely also comment if I get featured. With critique and how to improve.

Elrond
2008-09-13, 03:41 AM
This looks interesting :smallbiggrin:

Feel free to use me any time you want. (dear god that sounder wrong)
Thanks also yes that did sound quite wrong and thanks dallas

Nameless
2008-09-13, 03:56 AM
Thanks also yes that did sound quite wrong and thanks dallas

You know what I mean. :smalltongue:

Fan
2008-09-13, 04:23 AM
You know what I mean. :smalltongue:
I think we got the message.:smallwink:

Ethrael
2008-09-13, 04:31 AM
Ooh! Can I be in it? I've never been in any webcomic, let alone a ship. That would be so cool!

*calms down*

But yeah, I'm very versatile, you can use me for almost any character, and I'm up for genderbending if needed too.

Elrond
2008-09-13, 04:32 AM
Cool yeah you can be and im gonna hold you to the gender bending thing

Elder Tsofu
2008-09-13, 04:41 AM
Well, good luck!
If you ever need a bystander you can always use me.

Kaelaroth
2008-09-13, 04:46 AM
Ooh! Can I be in it? I've never been in any webcomic, let alone a ship. That would be so cool!

Liar! I shipp'd you with Curly, albeit briefly, in Schoolyard Song!

Elrond
2008-09-13, 04:46 AM
OK then well anybody feel free to post a comic of your own and i might add it to the story

Dallas-Dakota
2008-09-13, 05:06 AM
Concerning your last post Elrond : This isn't gonna be a re-do of ABR, is it?:smalleek:

boomwolf
2008-09-13, 05:06 AM
This looks interesting :smallbiggrin:

Feel free to use me any time you want. (dear god that sounder wrong)

Even more with your gender-bent variation in mind...:P

Anyway, looks too much like ABR...feel free to import the demonic wolf that is my current avatar, as its not my AVR one. (or is it?)

Wraithy
2008-09-13, 08:34 AM
If you feel up to drawing Wraithy, then by all means use it.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v325/Talfrey/CSquirrelBCrazy.png
(Wraithy is the thing in the top left of this image)

darkblade
2008-09-13, 08:59 AM
This looks interesting. I'm up to be in this.

Haleyintraining
2008-09-13, 09:06 AM
Oh, pick me!

Gourtox
2008-09-13, 09:10 AM
I also would love to be in it.

TheCountAlucard
2008-09-13, 09:33 AM
Utilize the awesomeness of TheCountAlucard as much as you wish.

Green-Shirt Q
2008-09-13, 09:40 AM
Pick me! No comic is complete without the Q!

Collyer-san
2008-09-13, 10:27 AM
Pick Me! Just because!

Lyinginbedmon
2008-09-13, 10:42 AM
Pick me! No comic is complete without the Q!

I can make a substantial list that violates that statement.

It was arrogant the first time you said comics are more successful with you in them, it's still arrogant now.

Therefore:

I respectfully ask you to consider placing me in the comic where and/or when appropriate.

Dallas-Dakota
2008-09-13, 10:53 AM
Pick me! No comic is complete without the Q!
*points at OOTS and Erfworld*
*points at AH(You may have featured yourself in a guerst comic, but that does not really count)*

Bayar
2008-09-13, 10:58 AM
Pick me! No comic is complete without the Q!

And that is why Q could be considered an egomaniac.

Nameless
2008-09-13, 11:07 AM
Oh, and just to let you know, Nameless (my avi) speaks with red writing
(See ABR if you don't know what I mean)

Green-Shirt Q
2008-09-13, 11:26 AM
And that is why Q could be considered an egomaniac.

Darn tootin. :smallsmile:

[EDIT]
I can make a substantial list that violates that statement.
*points at OOTS and Erfworld*
*points at AH(You may have featured yourself in a guerst comic, but that does not really count)*

A comic can still be really, really good without necessarily being "complete".

Dallas-Dakota
2008-09-13, 12:25 PM
A comic can still be really, really good without necessarily being "complete".
Define 'complete', which must not be 'when it has Q in it'.

T-O-E
2008-09-13, 12:37 PM
No, he's telling the truth. From what i've seen, the majority of web-comics end during their first year, and i've noticed something else too. All of these ex-web-comics have not include Q as a cameo/character. Well, except for the star trek comics. This must be it, there's no other possibility.

Lyinginbedmon
2008-09-13, 12:59 PM
anti-Heroes, Failing Saves, Natural One, A Story of Death, Remember, Population: Zero, Endless, Rob & Jack, The Siliad...

All of these are successful or semi-successful comics that have NEVER had the_Q in them. Two of them even have their own websites!

Green-Shirt Q
2008-09-13, 01:17 PM
Define 'complete', which must not be 'when it has Q in it'.

Well, the criteria for "complete webcomic" is as follows: I made most of this up, actually.
1. Must have finished. All comics have been made and the series stops. So not even the best comics like Order of the Stick and Anti-Heroes are complete,

2. Everything must come to a tidy and well explained conclusion. And that must mean everything. Even the tiniest of plot holes means it's not complete,

3. No sequels. If another comic comes after, even a spin-off, it makes the first comic incomplete,

4. Must have my characters the Q and/or the Green-shirted Q as cameo characters, even if it is the smallest role.

Now keep in mind that being "complete" isn't necessarily the same as "good".
In fact, completeness usually means it isn't as good as it could have been.

Bayar
2008-09-13, 01:39 PM
Comics that ended can never be any better.

Not having unfinished plot holes is a silver bullet for the storyline. It simply kills it.

What about fan art? Fan fiction ?

Dr McNinja doesnt feature Q's and still WIN's. Dont see anything that makes a comic WIN if they feature a Q. Other than boosting your ego...

So yeah, keep drawing your comic, it gets alot of comments and it is great. Because it features Q's. But that is not the solution for EVERY comic.

T-O-E
2008-09-13, 01:43 PM
You don't actually believe Q genuinely believes that, do you?

Green-Shirt Q
2008-09-13, 01:44 PM
Dr McNinja doesnt feature Q's and still WIN's. Dont see anything that makes a comic WIN if they feature a Q. Other than boosting your ego...

As I have said before, "complete" dosen't mean "good". They are too very different things. Just because a comic is really, really, really good still dosen't make it complete. A comic can still be (and is perhaps more likely to be) a "WIN" without being complete.

Having the Qs in it dosen't make it any better, but does make it complete. Don't ask me why, you wouldn't understand.

Bayar
2008-09-13, 01:46 PM
As I have said before, "complete" dosen't mean "good". They are too very different things. Just because a comic is really, really, really good still dosen't make it complete. A comic can still be (and is perhaps more likely to be) a "WIN" without being complete.

Having the Qs in it dosen't make it any better, but does make it complete. Don't ask me why, you wouldn't understand.

Because the Q's can do anything, even make a comic complete. Only by wishing it is, right ?

Green-Shirt Q
2008-09-13, 01:50 PM
Because the Q's can do anything, even make a comic complete. Only by wishing it is, right ?

That too, I guess. I haven't thought of that before....

But the actually reason is something far more philosophical then you might understand.

memnarch
2008-09-13, 01:52 PM
I would say that 1/0 (http://www.undefined.net/1/0/) is a dang good comic and is quite complete as well. (meets all your requirements except the ego one)


On topic; Feel free to throw any of the Avys you see me using in. (note, one of them isn't actually a creature.)

T-O-E
2008-09-13, 02:35 PM
I would say that 1/0 (http://www.undefined.net/1/0/) is a dang good comic and is quite complete as well. (meets all your requirements except the ego one)

Wow, thanks for linking that. I only read the first and last 30 comics but i'll read the others eventually. The ending was so touching, so thought-provoking, constructed. I felt as if I knew the characters and wished the best for each and every one. Loved how the first and last comics were complete subversions. Best conclusion ever, seriously.

Dallas-Dakota
2008-09-13, 02:41 PM
That too, I guess. I haven't thought of that before....

But the actually reason is something far more philosophical then you might understand.
Try me. I have diplomas and such in philosophy.

Green-Shirt Q
2008-09-13, 02:51 PM
Try me. I have diplomas and such in philosophy.

Well, there's actually also the matter of explaining it, which I might not be able to do properly. I do not have any diplomas. I didn't even make it past high school.

I'll try. Later. I need to think of the explaination.

Ichneumon
2008-09-13, 02:54 PM
I view my Opening webcomic was rather succesful even though it didn't feature any references to popular culture or Q.
Also, for those that are interested, Opening might be coming back soon.

Vulion
2008-09-13, 03:09 PM
You could mention me and my drawings, if you would like...mostly cause I'm a attention whoring, egomaniac and any attention given to me gives chills in all the right places...

...Pineapples?

*holds out a plate of sliced pineapples*

Nameless
2008-09-13, 03:31 PM
You could mention me and my drawings, if you would like...mostly cause I'm a attention whoring, egomaniac and any attention given to me gives chills in all the right places...

...Pineapples?

*holds out a plate of sliced pineapples*

Heheh... Pineapple googles...

Bisected8
2008-09-13, 04:15 PM
I'm in. I'd be willing to do gender bending and nude scenes (but both at once'll cost extra :smallwink:) ¬_¬.

Exeson
2008-09-13, 04:35 PM
Hehe, I would very much like to star, it will give you a chance to draw a werewolf and i mean hey, who wouldn't want that? :smalltongue:

Moff Chumley
2008-09-13, 04:54 PM
I demand cameos. :smallcool:

Elrond
2008-09-13, 10:43 PM
Concerning your last post Elrond : This isn't gonna be a re-do of ABR, is it?:smalleek:
No it wont be like ABR i was just saying that people could post a comic if they like but only really for ideas also the comic should be up shortly and i should put people staring in the comic up in the first post soon

Wreckingrocc
2008-09-14, 12:10 AM
I'll go for it :)

I can be the delivery guy who only delivers tires for some reason.

Enlong
2008-09-14, 12:28 AM
Oooh! Can I be in it? I'd love to be in a comic, even if I only have a bit part.

ThePhantom
2008-09-14, 12:35 AM
Can I be in too? Please?

Elrond
2008-09-14, 01:33 AM
Sure everybodys welcome

Fan
2008-09-14, 01:37 AM
Oh, and elrond i forgot to tell you this in the first post.
YOU WIN. For this comic that is

Enlong
2008-09-14, 01:43 AM
Sure everybodys welcome

Yaaaay! Will you be needing help on dialoge parts for myself? I want to warn you that I don't have the equipment to draw my character (or the talent. If you want someone to draw my avatar, talk to Shattersnap)

Elrond
2008-09-14, 01:45 AM
Haha:smallamused: *grabs pineapple*
Also yeah any help with dialog will be greatly appreciated if you have any you want me to use PM me and ill be drawing all people who are involved avvys for the comic

Kris on a Stick
2008-09-14, 01:56 AM
Ooooh! Can I be in it?

Nameless
2008-09-14, 03:34 AM
PINEAPPLE APOCALYPSE!!!!!11!!1111ONEONE111!!!!!!!!!! :eek:

Elrond
2008-09-14, 05:12 AM
Ooooh! Can I be in it?
Sure ill add you to the first post:smallsmile:

Ninja Chocobo
2008-09-14, 05:41 AM
If you can be arsed to draw a chocobo (who is also a ninja), then feel free to put me in it.

SoD
2008-09-14, 07:00 AM
Willing to be put in! Volenteering, sah!

I may, if need be, be able to manage a comic or two...if my schedual goes down sometime soon...

Edit: but there's many better good artists out there.

TheCountAlucard
2008-09-14, 08:02 AM
Sent a PM with some possible options for my character.

Elrond
2008-09-14, 05:34 PM
ok good now does anyone want to play the vilan

Green-Shirt Q
2008-09-14, 05:39 PM
I do! Q is good at being the villain!

But don't forget his sidekick. He's important. If you don't read My Name is Q, this is his picture:

http://i35.tinypic.com/2usyma9.png

ThePhantom
2008-09-14, 05:40 PM
I could be a villian as well, but I lack art skills.

Emperor Ing
2008-09-14, 05:41 PM
Not to sound nitpicky, but can you remember that Rand's speech bubble is purple with a black outline, and the actual text itself is white? Thanks.

And, contrary to popular opinion, Rand's Lawful Good. Ephasis on lawful however.

Bisected8
2008-09-14, 05:44 PM
I could be the villain (villains who attack with neologisms are scary, right?).

someonenonotyou
2008-09-14, 10:48 PM
ill be in if you can put me in anywhere me and my evil chicken sidekick

Elrond
2008-09-15, 02:35 AM
Not to sound nitpicky, but can you remember that Rand's speech bubble is purple with a black outline, and the actual text itself is white? Thanks.

And, contrary to popular opinion, Rand's Lawful Good. Ephasis on lawful however.
You dont sound nitpicky and i will remember youll probably be on the main adventuring party

Ninja Chocobo
2008-09-15, 04:38 AM
Not to sound nitpicky, but can you remember that Rand's speech bubble is purple with a black outline, and the actual text itself is white? Thanks.

And, contrary to popular opinion, Rand's Lawful Good. Ephasis on lawful however.

So long as we're being nitpicky about speech bubbles, mine's black, with a white outline, with red text in Segoe Script.

Elrond
2008-09-15, 04:44 AM
So long as we're being nitpicky about speech bubbles, mine's black, with a white outline, with red text in Segoe Script.
Oky doky first comic is up

Nameless
2008-09-15, 05:39 AM
Oooo... I'm the first to be introduced!

*feels special*

Looks good, can't wait to see more. :smallbiggrin:

And on a note, most people think I'm an evil character, but actually, I'm true neutral.

GO TEAM NEUTRAL!

*Does Charlie's Angels style pose"

JasonDoomsblade
2008-09-15, 06:03 AM
Can I get in on this too?

ThePhantom
2008-09-15, 09:19 AM
Ha, that's a great start. I think this should turn out well.

Bisected8
2008-09-15, 10:44 AM
So long as we're being nitpicky about speech bubbles, mine's black, with a white outline, with red text in Segoe Script.

In this vein, mine would be in light grey (I have quite a low, toneless voice. Or so everyone says).

V Junior
2008-09-15, 11:02 AM
I'm in, as is my cat-atar, Sabrina!

Oh yeah - Don't you DARE use my old avatar for this! Use my current one!

My speech bubble is green border, green text, black background. Sabrina's is light grey on black.

Edit: You can use Mewtwo if you want. Sarcastic and bored, with a dark-purple-on-light-liliac speech bubble - Oh, just use the colours in the avatar...

Dallas-Dakota
2008-09-15, 11:19 AM
Black border, white background, blue/dark blue text.

A intro-recruiting would be very amusing indeed.
Also, I would be very amused if you used the ´oh no, elmo is waiting in the car´´but isn´t he like 3´ ´yeah, he play younger on tv´. joke.

JasonDoomsblade
2008-09-15, 11:25 AM
My speech would be Blue Background, with Light Blue Text, and light blue outlining.

someonenonotyou
2008-09-15, 11:52 AM
mine would be normal but cluckys would be just red text if im in

Mauve Shirt
2008-09-15, 12:08 PM
Heh. Count me in.
Dark purple text.

Collyer-san
2008-09-15, 01:39 PM
Am I the only one who doesn't want Differently coloured speech bubbles?

Though rounded rectangles would be nice.... ^^

Enlong
2008-09-15, 09:28 PM
White background, Sienna text and outline. (I always pick sienna for my PBP games)

Enlong in-comic is... well, like me, of course. Generallyy soft-spoken, but possessed of an almost-impressive memory of random trivia, a tendency to fill in silence with babbling about stuff (example: there's an awkward silence. After a minute of feeling uncomfortable: "Hey, [random fact], ... um...") also self-consious about babbling. Generally a nice and personable guy.
Attempts to diffuse arguments by interrupting boths ides with facts.

Er, I've never used my guy in a comic (or anything) before, but I'd say in DND terms, he'd be a Wizard, with lotsa conjurations. I love the Hand spells in any edition, and any other force stuff.

Joke that I'd love to use one day in the comic.
"Bigby's Tripping Hand!"
Hand: "Heeey man. Woooah dude, you don't wanna get too close man. Uh-oh! Watch out duuude!" *trips*

Lord Fullbladder, Master of Goblins
2008-09-15, 09:56 PM
Yeah, appearing even briefly in a comic would be fun. Of course, for Fullbladder all you need is a generic goblin head and an odd sense of fashion. Since he has no actual body anymore (just a head), he could end up being anything, on any body.

Enlong
2008-09-15, 10:24 PM
Eh, don't sell yerself short. You'd make a great Villain IITP.

Elrond
2008-09-16, 12:51 AM
OK ill try and remember everybodys speech bubbles
Next to comics are up:smallsmile: hope u like them
Everybody can be in ITP also you can make your own banners if you like

And remember to PM me with dialog that you might want your character to say and can you please tell me if you haven't already which picture you wont to represent you character:smallsmile: thanks

Bayar
2008-09-16, 06:04 AM
Next to comics are up:smallsmile: hope u like them

Copy-paste is NOT your friend. Dont be-friend with copy-paste. You will end up as CAD if you do.

Ninja Chocobo
2008-09-16, 06:38 AM
Copy-paste is NOT your friend. Dont be-friend with copy-paste. You will end up as CAD if you do.

While that degree of copy-pasta is excessive, I agree, people tend to not move around that much in the middle of a conversation.

Bisected8
2008-09-16, 07:26 AM
Oh and just FYI, details of my "Linguamancer" homebrew class can be found in the compendium linked at the bottom of my signature.

JasonDoomsblade
2008-09-16, 07:30 AM
Question: Are you gonna keep doing this interview dealie with all the playgrounders; or make up some sort of story?

TheCountAlucard
2008-09-16, 07:53 AM
:smallamused: Hey, a cameo's a cameo.

JasonDoomsblade
2008-09-16, 09:30 AM
Its just a question. I don't really care what he does.

Nameless
2008-09-16, 11:44 AM
It's like a comic that's entirely based on cameo's! :smallbiggrin:

Enlong
2008-09-16, 01:41 PM
I like the comic so far. The interviews are nice.

However, I agree with the sentiment that you should not lean on Copypaste for the comic. I suggest trying a to draw a few poses for the characters, starting with a neutral "talking" pose for the interviews. Also, try some expressions, like the :smallconfused: eyebrows for being confused, and stuff like that. Trust me, it should be fairly easy, since you have everyone's avatars as reference, and once you get some poses made it should be easy to make tweaks to those for every occasion, like gesturing with their arms as they talk, and changing their facial expressions depending on what they're saying. Just make them move a little bit between panels. Trust me, people will love you for it.

Oh, and one little pet peeve I have with speech bubbles. My reaction to any comic panel is to read the speech bubbles from top left to bottom right. Try and arrange the speech bubbles such that the conversation "flows" in that direction. It's confusing to have all of one character's lines up top, and the other's down below, when the character up top has one line, then the bottom character, then the top one again. It'll work better to, say, have the "first" bubble up top, the "next" one a bit below or to the right of it, and so on.

Just a bit of constructive criticism. You're on your way though, I probably couldn't even do as much as you are.

Fan
2008-09-16, 02:50 PM
You know if this becomes a party type of situation its going to be like a small army storiming the dungeoun, and with my cheese, and I'll go ahead, and assume I'm nto the only broken one here. I think a encounter 5 lvls above us wouldn't even stand a chance.

Elrond
2008-09-16, 05:39 PM
It wont all be interviews for the party (there will only be a couple more) and ill introduse the others through the comic

Fan
2008-09-16, 05:43 PM
It wont all be interviews for the party (there will only be a couple more) and ill introduse the others through the comic

Thats good. I'm also expecting a sort of good group to our semi evils. (We have someone who threatened the interviewer. Me, a anti hero angsty Vampire ninja. And from the looks of it Death.))

Atomsized
2008-09-16, 06:42 PM
Sounds interesting, and the current comics look promising.

Feel free to use me:smallwink:

Oh, and you can draw me as just a unseeable speck. Atom sized, in other words.

Elrond
2008-09-16, 10:46 PM
Thats good. I'm also expecting a sort of good group to our semi evils. (We have someone who threatened the interviewer. Me, a anti hero angsty Vampire ninja. And from the looks of it Death.))
Yep there should be another party and an evil villain kinda guy with his minions and such

Enlong
2008-09-16, 11:16 PM
Heh. I could be a minion if I don't fit in on the "heroic" party or the other one.

By the way, Elrond, what did you think of my suggestions? Too much?

Elrond
2008-09-16, 11:27 PM
Suggestions are good:smallsmile: also yeah you'd make a good minion and probably wont make the heroic team (sorry)

Enlong
2008-09-16, 11:31 PM
Suggestions are good:smallsmile: also yeah you'd make a good minion and probably wont make the heroic team (sorry)

Meh. I'm a Kobold wizard with a bathrobe and an odd obsession with rubber duckies. I didn't really think I'd make it onto the "good guy" team. :smallwink:

Hey... that reminds me. Wasn't there some kind of line of Bigby spells outside of the Hands? I remember something like most excellent force sculpture ore something like that, but I just can't remember.

Elrond
2008-09-16, 11:39 PM
Huh???:smallconfused:

SoD
2008-09-16, 11:40 PM
I'm in (as previously mentioned), wherever I can be!

Enlong
2008-09-16, 11:46 PM
Huh???:smallconfused:

Oh, nothing important. I had some random obscure spell on my mind, mainly because I remembered it was a Force spell. No worries.
See, I remember that there are quite a few Bigby spells (almost all Force spells) in the PHB2 that were awesome. I just wish I had them.

Elrond
2008-09-17, 05:05 AM
Oh i dont have PHB2

Elrond
2008-09-17, 05:07 AM
Sorry for the double post but i remind all of you to specify which pic you want me to use to rebresent you in the comic

Fan
2008-09-17, 05:09 AM
http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x280/kriskatarn/F3Tux.png
I do eblieve this one functions well.

Elrond
2008-09-17, 05:18 AM
Ok good thanks

JasonDoomsblade
2008-09-17, 06:07 AM
This one should do nicely.
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/JasonDoomsblade/Avatar3-3.png

But if that's too much detail you can just use this one instead.
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/JasonDoomsblade/Avatar3.png

Enlong
2008-09-17, 09:11 AM
What I'm using as my avatar is fine, just base your stuff off of that.

Morty
2008-09-17, 09:17 AM
Sounds interesting. You can put me in there if you feel like it, in whatever role, represented by my avatar(that's a goblin sapper from my homebrewed setting).

ThePhantom
2008-09-17, 09:20 AM
Since you asked which image, here's mine. http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/ll246/EmperorIng/avatar3.png

Dallas-Dakota
2008-09-17, 09:23 AM
Just please draw the cookiemonster.

The way mr. saturn drew him for me.
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k125/Yitsockl/cookiemonster.gif

Collyer-san
2008-09-17, 09:33 AM
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa242/Jayessx/collyer.png

This should do. ^^

Ghastly Epigram
2008-09-17, 10:57 AM
This looks like it has some potential. Feel free to throw me in if you want. Just what my avatar is will be fine.

Would it be too much to request the role of main villain? :smalltongue:

TheCountAlucard
2008-09-17, 01:15 PM
Just use the one you already used for me; i.e., this guy...

http://i200.photobucket.com/albums/aa100/TheCountAlucard666/Avatars%20and%20Sigatars/AlucardAvatarByPhase01.png

Green-Shirt Q
2008-09-17, 02:14 PM
I believe I have already given the image of what I wish to look like in a PM, but I do not suggest a copy-paste of it (if "copy-paste" can truly be used as a verb).

If you are planning to copy and paste, I can supply a modern image I have personally drawn, but if you are planning to actually draw it yourself, the images I have given you will do just fine.

Elrond
2008-09-17, 10:46 PM
Oky docky:smallsmile:

Lord Fullbladder, Master of Goblins
2008-09-17, 11:42 PM
An image? Sure. The quintessential Fullbladder, by Kalirush.
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j21/kalirush/kingpin.png

Elrond
2008-09-18, 04:16 AM
This looks like it has some potential. Feel free to throw me in if you want. Just what my avatar is will be fine.

Would it be too much to request the role of main villain? :smalltongue:
Um maybe :smalltongue: ill think about it probably yes though you look to be the kind of main villain i might like

Elrond
2008-09-19, 09:46 PM
Sorry for the double post buy Uhh lake of posting is worrying me:smalleek:

ThePhantom
2008-09-19, 09:51 PM
Sorry for the double post buy Uhh lake of posting is worrying me:smalleek:

What does buy Uhh lake of posting means?:smallconfused:

Lord Fullbladder, Master of Goblins
2008-09-19, 10:11 PM
'Lack of posting' methinks. We can't rightly post until we have things to praise/snark/suggest/converse about.

Elrond
2008-09-19, 10:37 PM
I really dont know i just but it in
Oh ok ill have one up soon staring Randomizer

Elrond
2008-09-20, 01:43 AM
Sorry about the double post yet again but i have finished another ITP and it is up now:smallsmile: comments please:smallbiggrin:

Nameless
2008-09-20, 03:24 AM
LOL, "My head is made of jelly" :smallbiggrin:

Elrond
2008-09-20, 03:54 AM
Next comic is up enjoy:smallbiggrin:

Fan
2008-09-20, 06:20 AM
Just a few minor nitpicks.

1. I hope you won't take this to harshly, but grammar is very important in these kinds of comics, and would you PLEASE cpitalise the beginings of your sentences.

2: The Chainsaws on Rand's arms are by far to short to be effective; perhaps you could change it to make them longer in a later comic?

Shas aia Toriia
2008-09-20, 07:22 AM
Ooh, comic. I will be reading this.

*requests to appear in the comic.*

Nameless
2008-09-20, 07:55 AM
Who wants to be mah bus buddie!?! :smallbiggrin:

JasonDoomsblade
2008-09-20, 07:58 AM
I would but I'm not in the comic yet. :smalltongue:

Emperor Ing
2008-09-20, 08:01 AM
Who wants to be mah bus buddie!?! :smallbiggrin:

Alright. But remember we have to hold hands. *VERRRRR* :amused:

Fan
2008-09-20, 08:06 AM
Who wants to be mah bus buddie!?! :smallbiggrin:

I think it would be safest for us to... your death(kills by touch.), I'm a vampire (and thus immune to insatnt death effects.), and Rand has chainsaw hands... That, and i don't want to be stuck being a bus buddeh to mister Gunnzz.

Enlong
2008-09-20, 11:03 AM
Hey! They move! Sweet.
Nice coupla comics, Elrond. One minor nitpick on the last one: When I read the first panel, I tried to read left-to-right and ended up reading the word balloons in revers order 'cause of it. Do you think you could arrange future word balloons in top-to-bottom/left-to-right order?
Otherwise, the comics are coming along nicely, and I'm real glad you decided to draw the characters; they just look better now. I do agree with FF fanboy though, in that you do need to properly capitalize and punctuate your sentences, a little grammar, goes a long way.
Keep truckin' Elrond, you're doin' fine.

Fan
2008-09-20, 11:34 AM
Indeed it is nice to have some captilization, capital I's were the biggest problem as far as I could see.

Bayar
2008-09-20, 01:27 PM
The way Rand says "As you wish" in the last panel...reminds me of the WoW voidwalker :smallbiggrin:.

Moral Wiz
2008-09-20, 02:06 PM
Looking intermanestin.

Any room for another character? Doesn't look like it, but... Well, asking never hurt, right?

Threeshades
2008-09-20, 03:29 PM
@Eldrond
you should work on your speechballoon placing. People usually start reading on the left, so the first thingsaid in a panel should be above and/or left of all the other speechbubbles. then go from left to right and then add lines underneath.

You can put the first bubble on the right and the second on the left, but then you should put the first one very clearly above the second.


I really recommend you to do that, because so far I've been reading the speech in the wrong order in almost every panel.

Nameless
2008-09-20, 03:59 PM
Indeed it is nice to have some captilization, capital I's were the biggest problem as far as I could see.

*grabs Fanboy's hand*

http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x203/tomshaer/FUNTIME.png

Dallas-Dakota
2008-09-20, 04:01 PM
*grabs Fanboy's hand*

*snip*]

>,<

You're over-using that pic a bit Nameless....

T-O-E
2008-09-20, 04:01 PM
And, contrary to popular opinion, Rand's Lawful Good. Ephasis on lawful however.

You'd think a guy called The Randomizer would be more chaotic.

Nameless
2008-09-20, 04:06 PM
>,<

You're over-using that pic a bit Nameless....

I've used it once...

Emperor Ing
2008-09-20, 04:08 PM
You'd think a guy called The Randomizer would be more chaotic.

That's why my name is The Randomizer. When I announced it, everybody was all like :eek: and I was all like :biggrin:

:wink:

Threeshades
2008-09-20, 04:09 PM
I've used it once...

+ it's the best thing in the world. So no overusing here.

Nameless
2008-09-20, 04:15 PM
+ it's the best thing in the world. So no overusing here.

HIGH FIVE! :smalltongue:

Dallas-Dakota
2008-09-20, 04:16 PM
I've used it once...
And in your 'whats under nameless' hood' once or twice.

Or mebbe its just that that picture keeps popping up in my head?:smalleek:

Stop SMILING, MAKE IT STOP!

ARRGGH, MAKE IT STOP, STOP SMILING. PLEASE!

Nameless
2008-09-20, 04:22 PM
And in your 'whats under nameless' hood' once or twice.

Or mebbe its just that that picture keeps popping up in my head?:smalleek:

Stop SMILING, MAKE IT STOP!

ARRGGH, MAKE IT STOP, STOP SMILING. PLEASE!

I've used it ONCE Dallas...

Threeshades
2008-09-20, 04:35 PM
HIGH FIVE! :smalltongue:

WHOOO! :smallbiggrin:

Wreckingrocc
2008-09-20, 05:00 PM
I have a feeling the bus isn't going to be going anywhere :smallamused: At least, I doubt it'll be going anywhere safely.

Note my avatar.

Elrond
2008-09-20, 09:51 PM
Ive been trying to get the speech bubbles in the right order and ill work on my grammar.
Also next comic is up (it long:smallbiggrin:). Enjoy

Lyinginbedmon
2008-09-20, 09:57 PM
Threeshades' advice includes responses to other text boxes. "Fine" should have been placed after "I don't care..." If it helps you can extend the lines connecting the two boxes of "No-one else here" and "Fine" and the place the object underneath that of "I don't care..." so it overlaps. That's fairly standard practise.

Wreckingrocc
2008-09-20, 10:00 PM
I like how 'kill celestial creature' is a spell AND how he knows it.

Elrond
2008-09-20, 10:55 PM
Threeshades' advice includes responses to other text boxes. "Fine" should have been placed after "I don't care..." If it helps you can extend the lines connecting the two boxes of "No-one else here" and "Fine" and the place the object underneath that of "I don't care..." so it overlaps. That's fairly standard practise.
Ill take this into account for next time

SoD
2008-09-21, 07:51 AM
Looking good, can't wait to see the next few updates! Also volenteering for an appearance (I know it's about the third time, but my name isn't on the first post, and others have been added...).

Here's my standard avatar, if it helps:

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j131/Super_Moppy/SoDGnome.png

Rogue/Sorcerer (or was last time).

Ghastly Epigram
2008-09-21, 08:37 AM
As others have said, try and make sure the speech bubbles are in the correct order so they are read properly, and the grammar could use a little work.

But overall, good stuff! :smallbiggrin: Definitely interested to see where this goes.

Dallas-Dakota
2008-09-21, 08:49 AM
*wonders when he'l come into the comic*
Ps, you can feature me as a barbarian who's pretty silent and devoted to Cookiemanjaro. But still the cookiemonster.

ThePhantom
2008-09-21, 01:02 PM
When are the villians going to show up?

The Tygre
2008-09-21, 05:40 PM
Rakshasa mage, humbly at your service.

Elrond
2008-09-21, 08:14 PM
When are the villians going to show up?
Soon soon:smalltongue: i just gotta finish up some stuff with the Heros then they will be in

And SoD ive made up your character and he will be in soon:smallsmile:
dokkata be pashient ill but you in as soon as i can fit you in:smalltongue:

Trizap
2008-09-21, 10:38 PM
if you ever need a mad scientist position as either a villain or whatever tech kind or science kind of purpose done, don't hesitate to use my avatar, no wait don't hesitate to use a better drawn version of my avatar, my avatar looks horrible.

D_Lord
2008-09-22, 12:31 AM
Odd villainest cut aways that don't make sense is what I do alot. 5 plans a day, and can't get around to using all of them.

Enlong
2008-09-22, 12:36 AM
Yeah, it's me again. I'm liking the direction that the comic is moving in ("slay Celestial Creature" heheh.) and as always, I have one minor nitpick. When that red-coat-guy shot at the archon, there wasn't really any effect other then the sound effect to show that he had fired. Perhaps in the future you can show a bit of muzzle flash to show that he's fired. Oh, and it's spelled "earlier" Otherwise, you're improving. I like how the characters are making subtle movements, like Nameless pointing his other arm to cast, or your character standing on tiptoes to talk to the celestial.

TheCountAlucard
2008-09-22, 04:14 AM
that red-coat-guy

...Err, Alucard? Does no one watch Hellsing?

Nameless
2008-09-22, 04:47 AM
Dun Dun Dunnnn!!!

Elrond
2008-09-22, 06:20 AM
Yeah, it's me again. I'm liking the direction that the comic is moving in ("slay Celestial Creature" heheh.) and as always, I have one minor nitpick. When that red-coat-guy shot at the archon, there wasn't really any effect other then the sound effect to show that he had fired. Perhaps in the future you can show a bit of muzzle flash to show that he's fired. Oh, and it's spelled "earlier" Otherwise, you're improving. I like how the characters are making subtle movements, like Nameless pointing his other arm to cast, or your character standing on tiptoes to talk to the celestial.
Ok thanks for the nit-pickin

Dallas-Dakota
2008-09-22, 08:39 AM
dokkata be pashient ill but you in as soon as i can fit you in:smalltongue:
*wonders who this Dokkata guy is*:smalltongue:
And I'm kinda impatient sometimes...

Bisected8
2008-09-22, 12:10 PM
There's soem good advice on text bubbles here BTW;

http://webcomictriage.blogspot.com/

Enlong
2008-09-22, 02:10 PM
Yeah, I know Alucard*. I was just being paradoxially lazy enough to not say the name but say the concept instead.

*From Dr. McNinja though, not Hellsing.

Elrond
2008-09-23, 12:22 AM
There's soem good advice on text bubbles here BTW;

http://webcomictriage.blogspot.com/
Thanks but i cant see it

Bayar
2008-09-23, 02:51 AM
Yeah, I know Alucard*. I was just being paradoxially lazy enough to not say the name but say the concept instead.

*From Dr. McNinja though, not Hellsing.

Even though I havent seen it (yet, it will run on Animax soon :smallbiggrin:), he is easily recognised:

http://www.trombettasfamily.it/marco/images/Alucard%20gaggissimo.jpg

I love those glasses.

Bisected8
2008-09-23, 03:30 AM
Thanks but i cant see it

It works for me.

Elrond
2008-09-23, 05:48 AM
Oh ok:smallconfused:

Elrond
2008-09-24, 02:05 AM
New comic is up enjoy

Gourtox
2008-09-25, 04:59 PM
I liked the the summon stool for midgets thing.
When's the next comic?

Elrond
2008-09-25, 07:43 PM
should be up soon it will be introducing some of the other characters:smallsmile:

Fan
2008-09-25, 09:14 PM
should be up soon it will be introducing some of the other characters:smallsmile:

Pssh, don't rush yourself. Yoyu have to put times intos these things, and wer cant rush quality.... especially me seeign as i have the art skills of a monkey with no fingers.

Wreckingrocc
2008-09-25, 09:20 PM
Pssh, don't rush yourself. Yoyu have to put times intos these things, and wer cant rush quality.... especially me seeign as i have the art skills of a monkey with no fingers.Psshaw. Fingers are overrated. A nose, a face, and patience are all you need. Lots and lots of patience.

Fan
2008-09-25, 09:38 PM
Psshaw. Fingers are overrated. A nose, a face, and patience are all you need. Lots and lots of patience.
You have a point just look at the guy who does Anti heroes..... I personally am, still waiting for my inevitable apperance, but it is still a awesome comic written by a GOAT.

Dallas-Dakota
2008-09-26, 12:07 AM
Noses are overrated.

Elrond
2008-09-26, 02:53 AM
The next ITP is up (its a long one) also how are my speech bubbles going?

Bayar
2008-09-26, 03:25 AM
The next ITP is up (its a long one) also how are my speech bubbles going?

Not that great, it is really cumbersome to read...

Wreckingrocc
2008-09-26, 10:51 AM
That was only one character though....

Fan
2008-09-26, 11:31 AM
Nice Eldrond, and yet another example of the consequences of the ninja being the only one in the party that takes ranks in spot, and listen. :P

Elrond
2008-09-27, 02:09 AM
The next to ITP's are up enjoy:smallsmile:

SoD
2008-09-27, 02:46 AM
Boo-yah! Enter the SoD!

Can't help but wonder who my companion is though...looking good, keep up the good work.

Rescuing my companion from the toilet. Laughed quite loud at that one, and got a few odd looks...

Grim ranger
2008-09-27, 01:47 PM
This comic is pure win canned up in convient doses with "awesome" described all around them :smallbiggrin:. This peeked up my interest in such amount that I would like to get in as well... if you have need for snarky, anti-hero ranger, you can always put me in... it would be honour to be part of all-around comic ITP :smallsmile:. So yeah, pick me just because every comic needs deadpan snarker anti-hero, and all the better if he is human ranger/warrior.

Fan
2008-09-27, 02:30 PM
This comic is pure win canned up in convient doses with "awesome" described all around them :smallbiggrin:. This peeked up my interest in such amount that I would like to get in as well... if you have need for snarky, anti-hero ranger, you can always put me in... it would be honour to be part of all-around comic ITP :smallsmile:. So yeah, pick me just because every comic needs deadpan snarker anti-hero, and all the better if he is human ranger/warrior.

anti hero is my job bub.... *goes to find his banner*

Dallas-Dakota
2008-09-27, 02:42 PM
No way man...

Anti-Hero is Zarah's job.

He was there was before any of you and he's way more awesome. *points to the Anti-Heroes webcomic*

Fan
2008-09-27, 02:59 PM
No way man...

Anti-Hero is Zarah's job.

He was there was before any of you and he's way more awesome. *points to the Anti-Heroes webcomic*
Yeah, but he just writes about the anti heroes, and despite the current Black wings V.S Black wings awesomeness I still refuse to call him a anti hero....

Saint Nil
2008-09-27, 03:03 PM
This comic rocks:smallbiggrin:

If your still recruiting characters, I'd love to be in it please.

Dallas-Dakota
2008-09-27, 03:04 PM
Yeah, but he just writes about the anti heroes, and despite the current Black wings V.S Black wings awesomeness I still refuse to call him a anti hero....
Zarah be a awesome goat, and a great anti-hero.:smallcool:

*waits for own entre*

Elrond
2008-09-28, 05:51 AM
Sure everybodys welcome:smallbiggrin: im glad people actually like the comic

Fan
2008-09-28, 06:12 AM
Sure everybodys welcome:smallbiggrin: im glad people actually like the comic
People love seeing themselves written into a comic gives a feeling of nostailga.
Also great work Elrond.

Green-Shirt Q
2008-09-28, 06:19 AM
Also, do not be mistaken by the lack of posts I have made to your comic, I am reading intensely. I just haven't had a lot of things to say except for "don't forget the capital 'I'" or "make sure to take care when placing speech bubbles" which everybody seems to have no problem telling you.

Good job so far, and like almost everyone else, I am eagerly awaiting my appearance.

Elrond
2008-09-29, 05:48 AM
People love seeing themselves written into a comic gives a feeling of nostailga.
Also great work Elrond.
What does nostailga meen?:smallamused:

Bisected8
2008-09-29, 06:29 AM
What does nostailga meen?:smallamused:

What does meen mean? :smallbiggrin:

Elrond
2008-09-30, 09:46 PM
Good question

Belkarsbadside1
2008-10-01, 07:11 PM
Sounds awesome. You need a belkar in there though,
There is no one there to deliver a stabbity death

Bayar
2008-10-02, 01:12 AM
Sounds awesome. You need a belkar in there though,
There is no one there to deliver a stabbity death

No, you dont. :smallannoyed:

Wreckingrocc
2008-10-02, 01:44 PM
What do you mean "no we don't?" Belkar would be perfect for the job! What DON'T we need from him? He's just perfect, as long as we can get The Giant's permission.Wait... Didn't you want to ruin the comic? Oh... I thought our goal was to make it get stale really fast.

Crispy Dave
2008-10-02, 03:43 PM
I'll go ahead and sign up as a charicter http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z265/_Simius_/RangerChef.png I may make a good villain or something.

Bayar
2008-10-02, 03:56 PM
What do you mean "no we don't?" Belkar would be perfect for the job! What DON'T we need from him? He's just perfect, as long as we can get The Giant's permission.Wait... Didn't you want to ruin the comic? Oh... I thought our goal was to make it get stale really fast.

No, I was reffering to : "No, we dont need another homicidal maniac in a comic. They are too cliche and will ruin the comic" thing.

So no, we dont need a Belkar in there.

Crispy Dave
2008-10-02, 03:58 PM
No, I was reffering to : "No, we dont need another homicidal maniac in a comic. They are too cliche and will ruin the comic" thing.

So no, we dont need a Belkar in there.

awww does that mean you dont want my charicter?

ThePhantom
2008-10-03, 12:51 AM
When's the next update?

Elrond
2008-10-03, 03:21 AM
Should be soon ive just been having a blank for ideas

SoD
2008-10-03, 03:31 AM
What sort of idea blank? As in joke/ideas, or plot/ideas?

Haleyintraining
2008-10-03, 07:32 AM
(To the tune of In The Jungle)

In the playground,
the mighty playground,
the Giant sleeps tonight.
In the playground,
the quiet playground,
the Giant sleeps tonight.

Near the town,
the peaceful town,
the Giant sleeps tonight.
Near the town,
the quiet town,
the Giant sleeps tonight.

Hush my poster,
don't fear my poster,
the Giant sleeps tonight.
Hush my poster,
don't fear my poster,
the Giant sleeps tonight.

I wrote it for a SMBG, but it seems relevant here. :smallwink:

Elrond
2008-10-04, 06:03 AM
hmmm its quite good:smallsmile: also the blank is more with the plot

Emperor Ing
2008-10-04, 06:08 AM
also the blank is more with the plot

I'll make it easy for you
HEY!! BAD GUYS!!! What's your evil scheme that you want the good guys to stop?

ThePhantom
2008-10-04, 11:03 AM
How about a plan to destroy the universe, that's a classic.

Bisected8
2008-10-04, 11:09 AM
Well I've personally always considered;


Convincing a large number of people that every government in the world is part of a conspiracy.
Taking control of as many WMDs (and facilities for the production and development thereof) as possible using a revolution induced by part 1 as cover.
Destroying the planet so I won't have to worry about anything anymore.

Enlong
2008-10-04, 11:18 AM
Well I've personally always considered;


Convincing a large number of people that every government in the world is part of a conspiracy.
Taking control of as many WMDs (and facilities for the production and development thereof) as possible using a revolution induced by part 1 as cover.
Destroying the planet so I won't have to worry about anything anymore.


Approximately 80% of that is in the plot of the Metal Gear Solid games.

Belkarsbadside1
2008-10-09, 01:31 PM
If you need more people try drawing me. Bwahahaha

Bayar
2008-10-09, 02:06 PM
Think that Elrond has writers block...

SoD
2008-10-09, 07:32 PM
SoD casts Dispel Writers Block.

...did it work?

Edit: hopefully this comic survives longer than I did last time I joined up for one:

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j131/Super_Moppy/nimetn-2.png

It shows the advantage to being a PC over an NPC. (Created by Caracol.)

Gourtox
2008-10-10, 02:24 PM
Elrond you should have a bathroom fight.

Bisected8
2008-10-10, 04:59 PM
Approximately 80% of that is in the plot of the Metal Gear Solid games.

No, in MG there is a conspiracy (or several).

Crispy Dave
2008-10-22, 11:35 AM
think Elrond think you must write a new comic.

here have a cookie http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i278/wolfshonor/gifs/cookie1.gif

Elrond
2008-11-03, 07:16 PM
im really sorry about the deadness of the comic and i will try and resurrect it

Saint Nil
2008-11-03, 08:05 PM
Don't worry. Life happeans. Take a break, make a plot, and bring it back, better than ever.:smallwink:

The Gremlin
2008-11-04, 10:42 PM
If this comic is still alive, I would like to join. I'll post a picture of the character I would like to be displayed later.
EDIT: How's this?

Name: Unknown.
Race: Weird Floating Broody Intelligent-But-Not-Talking Hen Thing.
Class: None.
Special Attacks: Laser eyes.
Backstory: Unknown.
Alignment: Theorized to be Lawful Neutral but otherwise unknown.
Notes: Will not come off her nest if she can help it, and will not require food of any sort. Can serve as a villain or a hero, whichever you like. She talks like a typical chicken, but is, as I've said, intelligent.
Also, if you're reading this, NC, or Onasuma, no I am not ripping you guys off with the whole chicken-thing! I happen to have chickens of my own, and have thought about having a chicken character for a while!
http://i471.photobucket.com/albums/rr73/The__Gremlin/ITPCharacter-1.jpg

Chas the mage
2008-12-06, 06:27 PM
Can i be in the comic?
feel free to use the pic in my sig if the wings being clipped is a problem...

Bayar
2008-12-06, 06:33 PM
Can i be in the comic?
feel free to use the pic in my sig if the wings being clipped is a problem...

Yeah, I am sure he will include you...after 1 month of no posting.

Elrond
2008-12-07, 03:53 AM
Well im trying to get the comic back on its feat again but im stuck for ideas ill try get the next comic up as soon as possible

The Gremlin
2008-12-07, 12:08 PM
Well im trying to get the comic back on its feat again but im stuck for ideas ill try get the next comic up as soon as possible

Yay! :smallbiggrin:

CrimsonAngel
2008-12-07, 01:50 PM
cool can i be in your comic? i made my own character.
you can use my avatar

T-O-E
2008-12-07, 02:01 PM
CrimsonAngel: The image in your sig is way too large.

The Gremlin
2008-12-08, 10:35 AM
CrimsonAngel: The image in your sig is way too large.

Completely and utterly seconded.

Eldrys
2008-12-17, 12:57 PM
OH my gosh the vomic is friggin hilarious:smallbiggrin:! I would like to rquest a role. I know hound hound archons are overpowered but so are grim reeper things with the "kill celestial" spell.

Gourtox
2008-12-19, 07:03 AM
Well im trying to get the comic back on its feat again but im stuck for ideas ill try get the next comic up as soon as possible

Either do a cliche mission impossible thing:smallbiggrin: or have Elrond run in on someone on toliet in a stall in an attempt to *save* him.:smallwink:

Elrond
2008-12-21, 02:59 AM
Hmmmm... i shall try and yes everybodys welcome but you probably wont be seen for a while yet since there is and extremly long list of people who want to be in it

Tempest Fennac
2008-12-21, 03:09 AM
You could have 2 separate groups which are working towards the same goal. That would reduce the amount of screentime people get, but it would allow more characters to appear in it.

Dallas-Dakota
2008-12-21, 03:12 AM
I shall applaud thou if thee manages to draw the cookiemonste, he's notoriously hard to draw....(Heck, I can't draw him)

Elrond
2008-12-21, 09:01 PM
Ud be surprised i though he would be hard but to my surprise he wasn't

Next four or so comics
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP11.gif
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP12.gif

http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP12Con.gif
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh120/Elfunzo/ITP13.gif
Ok that should jump start this comic back up
enjoy :smallbiggrin:and comments critique ?

someonenonotyou
2008-12-21, 09:49 PM
OohOoh draw me please OohOoh do me next

Elrond
2008-12-21, 09:52 PM
Ah ok i try and get you in ASAP

ThePhantom
2008-12-22, 12:22 AM
Remember, Erlong:
The people who are the villians. After all, villians make a story easier to plot out.

Elrond
2008-12-22, 12:44 AM
Thats true oh and did you mean Elrond or Enlong? anyway ill juck some villians in there and see how it goes:smallsmile:

ThePhantom
2008-12-22, 12:52 AM
I mean you, Erlond. I made a typo, and don't forget to check your early pages for your villians.

SoD
2008-12-22, 06:32 AM
Ye-ah! ITP is back up, with my companion, uh, rescued! DD and SoD, what a team!

The Gremlin
2008-12-22, 12:33 PM
Yay! The comic returns! :smallbiggrin::smallbiggrin::smallbiggrin:

Elrond
2008-12-23, 12:54 AM
Yes it has Mbahahhahaahhahaaha anyway theres your cameo done DD i think im going to go and but to gether another party and a villians cult or group or something and if you haven't stared yet then tll me witch one you would rather be in oh and ive decided to have a banner contest and ive you win you'll get a shiny trophy so good luck:smallbiggrin:

ThePhantom
2008-12-23, 12:55 AM
I'm in the villian group, you said I could be earlier.

Green-Shirt Q
2008-12-23, 02:02 PM
I was told by Elrond that I'd would be the leader of the evil group. Or ad least the sub-evil "Linear Guild"-like group.

ThePhantom
2008-12-23, 02:55 PM
Great, I don't mind working under you. Now go, my roses and choke the life out of the heros!:smallamused:

Gourtox
2008-12-23, 02:58 PM
Elrond, I can be a bad guy if you want. Then I could stab people.

CrimsonAngel
2008-12-23, 03:00 PM
bieng evil would be fun. I shall use thine runic swords to smite thine good guys!

Groundhog
2008-12-23, 05:36 PM
Can you add me to the comic at some point?

Elrond
2008-12-23, 10:34 PM
Yeah sure and good i now have my evil party:smallsmile:

CrimsonAngel
2008-12-23, 10:54 PM
Tehehehe! :belkar: I'm evil!

CrimsonAngel
2008-12-23, 10:56 PM
in oh and ive decided to have a banner contest and ive you win you'll get a shiny trophy so good luck:smallbiggrin:

You stole that from me! :smallfrown:

sean o the dead
2008-12-24, 12:20 AM
need a random chaotic guy? if so, count me in...

something like this guy

http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc269/D-S95/avvy.jpg