Mini Story (one shot)

[Akrim.elf]

link to previous thread ...
http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=165926

what to say, short stories about a girl who wants only one .. candy!
One Important Note - I hold the principle - if something about it and nobody understand it, I did it wrong ...
and then it is useless to explain anything ...
update at least once a month!


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Sweet Factory
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/336/6/d/unhappy_memento_xvi_by_depresiveneko-d3428p7.png

http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/353/8/c/unhappy_memento_xvii_by_depresiveneko-d34qmh2.png
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[Akrim.elf]

part 19

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/003/e/3/unhappy_memento_xix_by_depresiveneko-d36bnuc.png

[M@XWeru]

A comic about ghosts and candy. Awesome.

[Cizak]

I... don't get it.

[M@XWeru]

The first two stores are open, and the last doesn't allow ghosts.

It would have been better with the Ghostbusters logo, though. ;P

[Cizak]

That one I think I got. But the rest... eh?

[Akrim.elf]

ou .. I forgot that everyone immediately assumes that it is a placard with the inscription opened / closed on opposite sides ...

If I knew, I wrote a note - on both sides of the sign is the same word ... either closed or open

http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n159/Akrim13/g6691.png

[Akrim.elf]

part 20

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/008/4/f/memento_xx_by_depresiveneko-d36p0yr.png

[Bayar]

I really like your art style. And it is refreshing to see a webcomic doing humor without the aid of massive walls of text. Keep up the good work !

[Akrim.elf]

part 22 (hm.. this weird... i forgot created a comics 21..)

http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/016/e/5/unhappy_memento_xxii_by_depresiveneko-d37bo2h.png

[araveugnitsuga]

The fourth wall has been destroyed, it's pieces now lay across several multi-verses.
Found it very funny.

[Akrim.elf]

The fourth wall has been destroyed, it's pieces now lay across several multi-verses.
Found it very funny.

you means this?
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/245/6/d/006___break_away_by_depresiveneko-d2xtznu.png

[Ninjaman]

Funny very funny akrim.elf

[araveugnitsuga]

Akrim.elf, never ceasing to amaze me in her destruction of the fourth wall, and the third wall, and the second wall, and the first wall. Oh, and the fifth wall.
You are still missing 6 dimensions.

Awesome and funny.

[Akrim.elf]

Okey, is time for part 21!

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/029/8/2/unhappy_memento_xxi_by_depresiveneko-d38bddx.png

[M@XWeru]

Sorry. I don't get this one at all.

[Ninjaman]

Sorry. I don't get this one at all.

Yea i agree it is very confusing.

[araveugnitsuga]

I did understand it, it was funny.
The art quality as always awesome.

and "The cake wasn't a lie", at least not until it was eaten.

[Akrim.elf]

http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/032/9/3/chii__fire_by_depresiveneko-d38jpbg.png

or not?

I think this time I'll try to explain ...

Imagine a fictitious telephone competition, where you can win a cake if you can find all the differences between two images ... (about those two pictures you confused)
and what angers the organizer of competition more than finding that a single price just ceased to exist?
and if it knows who it may be, why not to punish him?

http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/043/0/4/memento_and_gilotine_by_depresiveneko-d39dekt.png

thx for idea by Szilard (Iron Avatarist Contest III)
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd233/SzilardG/akrimelf.png

[Akrim.elf]

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/058/2/b/unhappy_memento_xxlll_by_depresiveneko-d3ajbj0.png

There is silence, emptiness ...
but even so I know that you notice me ...
and thank you for it

[Akrim.elf]

this is not comics part, only little fan for mi beloved flash game :)
who know this?

http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/076/3/f/memento_vs__sushi_cat_by_depresiveneko-d3bu46w.png

and this comics not death, i am only lazy and not have a right mood...

[M@XWeru]

Won't the ghost just fall through all the obstacles? D: Or cheat by flying back up?

[Ninjaman]

Won't the ghost just fall through all the obstacles? D: Or cheat by flying back up?

He got a point.

[Akrim.elf]

Mementine the magical barriers to treatment, so that through them can not be forfeited
track is adapted so that it is possible only natural movement in the direction of Earth's gravity ...

[Ninjaman]

Mementine the magical barriers to treatment, so that through them can not be forfeited
track is adapted so that it is possible only natural movement in the direction of Earth's gravity ...

that makes sense. I think.

[M@XWeru]

In that case, my money's on the cat.

[Domochevsky]

Indeed, sushi cat is better suited to roll down those ramps.

But then again, having arms lets you cover more area, which is a plus in this. Im kinda torn.

[Ninjaman]

My money is on the cat. Cats are mean creatures so it would propperbly cheat.

[Traker]

Do not medele in the affairs of cats, for they are subtle and will pee on your computor.

sorta of topic but any way I think the cat would win

[araveugnitsuga]

The ghost has arms and can try to crawl upwards or at least stop falling, and the lack of roundness makes it likely that she'll be able to control her movement better than the cat.

[Akrim.elf]

Bets are closed, but did not finish the race .. We both contestants a bit stuck ... but the rescue squad is on its way ...

but as is already the end of the month, the time has come I got my release time
so a new episode with the old story:)

part 24!
http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/084/4/c/unhapy_memento_xxiv_by_depresiveneko-d3cff6l.png

forgive the text, but the icon would not it ...

[Ninjaman]

Don´t you meen "don´t touch my kid"?

[Akrim.elf]

thank all mine fans, but is time to end...

Memento 25 - the last piece of cake
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/091/3/c/unhappy_memento_xxv_by_depresiveneko-d3cy40q.png

[araveugnitsuga]

That was awesome.

[Akrim.elf]

here someting thematic
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/112/0/5/memento_pony_by_depresiveneko-d3elxa0.png

[Bayar]

here someting thematic
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/112/0/5/memento_pony_by_depresiveneko-d3elxa0.png

White background makes it seem to be too invisible. A quote background however...seems to have the same effect :smallcool:

[Akrim.elf]

White background makes it seem to be too invisible. A quote background however...seems to have the same effect :smallcool:

i know, but Memento is ghost and ghost is bat visible :))

and now for this Easter one little wish... (im to lazy for comics)
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/115/7/c/happy_easter_2011_by_depresiveneko-d3eu95c.png

[Akrim.elf]

its to loong?
no, here no fans, here no comics! (im only copyraight another autors in this site)

im to lazy, that true... but here another little and clasic comics
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/135/a/c/memento_xxvi_by_depresiveneko-d3gdycs.png

[Teutonic Knight]

Don't worry, I will support! Nice recent comic. You make very expressive characters, which is hard for me being strictly classic OotS-style.

Also they have cool clothes and designs.

Keep up the good work. :smallbiggrin:

[Ninjaman]

I suport too.

[The Succubus]

This a very strange and unusual comic you're running here but it's adorably sweet as well. Would like to see more. :smallsmile:

[Akrim.elf]

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/163/4/6/unhappy_memento_xxvii_by_depresiveneko-d3ipt2z.png

I know my comics have smaller dimensions and thus struck me ask you a smaller range
what dimensions would you suggest?
and also .. think it would be better to add a header to comics? (or an individual work to invent the names?)
but do not worry, we still try to keep update to one (two if lucky enough) works for the month:)

[Ninjaman]

It is very hard to see what happends, even though i think i can figure it out.

[Moose Man]

I will support. :smallsmile:

[Akrim.elf]

Im begining with Garfield Theme Week!
ehm...
maybe...
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/185/3/4/garfield_week___banner_by_depresiveneko-d3kz2ro.png
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/185/a/3/garfield_week___monday_by_depresiveneko-d3kyf63.png

[The Succubus]

Yay! New Mini-story :D

[Akrim.elf]

and now day two!
with best friend of cat!
http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/186/3/5/garfield_week___pooky_by_depresiveneko-d3l1jhu.png

[Akrim.elf]

i love multiposting!
yeah!
(in this part of the forum is allowed:))
http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/187/c/7/garfield_week___spice_by_depresiveneko-d3l6bxr.png

[Akrim.elf]

you know?
Odie is Tentacle Monster!
that is true!
read original :))
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/188/2/a/garfield_week___morning_caffe_by_depresiveneko-d3la8ax.png

[Akrim.elf]

and now... another clasic theme with suprise twist!
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/189/7/9/garfield_week___lets_play_by_depresiveneko-d3ldhlb.png

[Akrim.elf]

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/190/2/5/garfield_week___bad_place____by_depresiveneko-d3lhjtw.png

[Akrim.elf]

http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/193/5/2/garfield_week___fan_n__one_by_depresiveneko-d3nebld.png

[M@XWeru]

Heh heh heh.

You gotta love Garfield.

[Akrim.elf]

http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/233/6/0/unhappy_memento_viii_by_depresiveneko-d47bzds.png

ghost is stronger as witch!

[Akrim.elf]

and now.. number 29... maybe..
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/264/9/e/unhappy_memento_xxix_by_depresiveneko-d4ahnky.png

[Oppolo]

Not sure if anybody else has this problem, but none of your images work for me.

[Bayar]

Not sure if anybody else has this problem, but none of your images work for me.

Do you have, by any chance, deviantart blocked ?

[The Succubus]

Mmmmm, I do love these one-shot stories. :smallbiggrin:

[Akrim.elf]

Do you have, by any chance, deviantart blocked ?

that maybe is true...

antivirus programs hate devianart...

[Akrim.elf]

im lazy and unmotivated author... and that stupid smog collored weather realy kill mine mood day to day...

but i still dont kill this comics, here is oficial 30. part!
if im counting right
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/322/b/0/unhappy_memento_xxx_by_depresiveneko-d4gjb7g.png



and here is awesome comics from Emperor Ing... is better that mine, i love this work!
http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/ll246/EmperorIng/MiniStoryGuestComic.png

[Ninjaman]

Lovely. Even more since i spend a lot of time at damnlol.com and is quite familiar with rage comics.

[Akrim.elf]

Happy New Year!

http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/365/b/3/unhappy_memento_xxxi_by_depresiveneko-d4ktp0s.png

we still lazy, but live!

[Akrim.elf]

part 32
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/028/7/a/unhappy_memento_xxxii_by_depresiveneko-d4nvjbg.png

[Akrim.elf]

part 33
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/036/6/7/unhappy_memento_by_depresiveneko-d4oqb1h.png

and little experiment (34)
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/055/b/6/unhappy_memento_xxxiv_by_depresiveneko-d4qt6xc.png

[The Succubus]

Oh wow.

That's a really bold direction you took for your experiment. It's fantastic! :smallbiggrin:

More please.

Much more.

[Akrim.elf]

Comic Update is Stoped

for some reason, but only for little time

so is time to continued...
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/122/8/2/unhappy_memento_xxxv_by_depresiveneko-d4ya7f0.png

[Akrim.elf]

soo.. i still continued... i know, you are realy unhappy with this, but i still love this little ghost girl

part 36

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/172/4/e/unhappy_memento_xxxvi_by_depresiveneko-d54a3k2.png

[The Zoat]

Really quite funny. The ghost girl would have commited suicide by now if she\
wasn't already dead.

[Akrim.elf]

http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/237/4/4/unhappy__memento_xxxviii_by_depresiveneko-d5cdgon.png

[The Succubus]

Yay for the return of Mini-Story! :smallbiggrin:

Do you plan to do any more like the shadow one, because that was really awesome. :smallredface:

[Akrim.elf]

Yay for the return of Mini-Story! :smallbiggrin:

Do you plan to do any more like the shadow one, because that was really awesome. :smallredface:


Yay for comment

and no, i dont plan for other BW Mini Story but for reading this comment i have this little idea...

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/238/8/2/unhappy__memento_xxxix_by_depresiveneko-d5chhm5.png

and thats all :)

and here first picture of Memento was created in SG :)
http://s3.amazonaws.com/stripgenerator/strip/62/27/42/00/00/full.png

[Akrim.elf]

part 40
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[Akrim.elf]

part 41
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[Akrim.elf]

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/366/2/b/pf_2012_by_depresiveneko-d5px1jl.png

part 42
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/366/c/4/happy_memento_ilii_by_depresiveneko-d5px63f.png

[Akrim.elf]

Part 43

http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/031/c/2/unhappy_memento_iliii_by_depresiveneko-d5tcver.png

dont worry, bee happy :)

[The Succubus]

There's something adorable about that last panel. Just be careful it doesn't float away.

[Akrim.elf]

part 44 - real story of ending this winter time

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/058/8/e/unhappy_memento_iliv_by_depresiveneko-d5weg74.png

[Akrim.elf]

part 45
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[Akrim.elf]

sigh.. no one tell me that i have a bad numbers in my comics...

http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/120/4/c/angry_memento_by_depresiveneko-d63l6j9.png

part 46...