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Originally Posted by Role
The Guru can forge his Essence into a weapon capable of disrupting an enemy's chakra, causing non-lethal damage[...]
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Originally Posted by Gentle Touch
All Gurus learn to master the art of the Gentle Touch, a mystical martial art that involves dealing nonlethal damage with focused bursts of chakra.
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Originally Posted by Sineater (Wages of Sin)
his chakra flow is torn apart
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Originally Posted by Seal Wounds + Crack the Shell
the Guru's mastery of chakra
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Originally Posted by Sever the Flow
the Guru's ability to disrupt an opponent's chakra
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Originally Posted by Immortal Essence
the Guru's mastery of the flow of chakra
Chakras are spiritual organs, not a substance that can be measured, and they do not flow (but they influence energy that flows through them). I'd be okay with using "chakra" to refer to an energy, except that it's inconsistent - the intro says that the energy is called Essence and that chakras are points on the body. Not to mention that "chakra is an energy" will make people think of Naruto.
Also, inconsistent spelling of "nonlethal" in the first two quotes.
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Originally Posted by Sineater Proficiencies
The Sineater also gains the Improved Unarmed Strike feat as a bonus feat
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Originally Posted by Sineater (Maelstrom of Sin)
As a full round action the Sineater can increase his melee reach by 5 feet as his body becomes shrouded in tainted Akashic energy and make a single unarmed strike against all enemies in reach.
Odd to word it in that order - generally it would "He makes an attack. His reach for this attack is increased.". Also does the reach increase last just for the attack, for 1 round, or forever? :smalltongue:
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Originally Posted by Stunning Fist
1/day as a free action, the Guru can restore a single use of Stunning Fist by taking 3 points of Essence burn.
Only one extra use? A daily use limit
and a cost? :smallconfused: I'm wondering if you meant restore
all uses of Stunning Fist or something, because even the Extra Stunning feat gave you +3 uses without hurting yourself, and hardly anyone took it.
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Originally Posted by Chakra Disruption
[More chakra stuff]
"Flow of chakra energy" is fine, if a little odd. "The flow of chakra" at lv18 isn't.
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Originally Posted by Chakra Binds
At 2nd level and every three levels thereafter you gain the ability to bind Veils directly to your chakras, unlocking potent abilities.