Dawn of Yesterday (updates very sporadic)
Dawn of Yesterday
The Last Aether
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Introduction:
Episode 1: Shadowplay:
Episode 2: A Day in the Life:
Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
I like the beginning. I wan't to see more.:smallbiggrin:
EDIT: Whoo! First reply!
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Have a nice trip; see you next fall. :smallbiggrin:
Cool blur effects by the way.
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Looking great ! I like the fact that you used a different perspective when the guy fell. May your comic will enjoy a lot of strips !
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:smallbiggrin: Thank you for the kind words.
And I've made the comics first banner (I will make more at a later date)
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/o...iesBanner1.png
and remember...
Prism Tech Industries is here for you:smallwink:
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Not half bad. I can envision this lasting a while.
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You may of have completely ripped off The Matrix, but this is pretty damn awesome. :smallbiggrin:
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You know Nameless, I never actually thort of the Matrix whilst doing this comic...
but now you mention it, I must admit there are quite a lot of similarities.....
ah well :smalltongue:
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New comic:
(sorry for any complications)
[hr]will except auditions for cameos (ABR people will have to PM me with an explanation of why they would be on another planet almost 2000 years before the events of FFF)
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Poor guy.
Also, Jumper seems to be quite calm regarding his back.
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You accept cameos ? Wonderful !
*sends PM*
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CAMEO FOR NAMELESS! CAMEO FOR NAMELESS!:smallbiggrin:
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Looks neat so far. But I disagree with the "whole episode in one spoiler"-layout. It will make it incredibly bothersome to read when you have to find where in that huge column of comic you left last time so you can go on reading. It's already becoming apparent with only the second strip. And it surely wont get any better with ten of them. So rather put sub-spoilers for each page into the episode spoiler.
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I've just realised that no matter what I do, the third comic comes out wrong:smalleek:
In the last pannel it says:
"...I was going to send YOU help..."
when its actually meant to be:
"...I was going to send FOR help...":smallfrown:
This is what it's meant to look like:
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Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
Um... which comic has "send you help"? I don't see it...
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The one in the archive
:(
My laptop is not a happy laptop at the moment...
Ive just booted it up for the last 20 mins and got the BSOD ever 4 or 5 mins:smallannoyed:
EDIT:
@V
How very odd, because they all say "send you help" for me...
what does everyone else see them as?
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They all look the same to me; "Send for help".
What operating system do you use and what's the age of the machine? Do you do anything just before it BSoD?
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Coo', I like the sci-fi theme. Can't wait to see more.
Not to sound like a callous ass hole, but when exactly will my cameo be?:smallbiggrin::smallcool:
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*Checks PM inbox*
you havnt sent me any information about your cameo...:smalltongue:
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Fayt
*Checks PM inbox*
you havnt sent me any information about your cameo...:smalltongue:
...AMNESIA DUST!!!
*runs off*
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Grem's not gonna be happy... :biggrin: :cool: :biggrin:
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That "to the hospital" banner should have http://geekhazard.com/awesome.gif expressions.
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memnarch
Grem's not gonna be happy... :biggrin: :cool: :biggrin:
Nah, I think I can fit it in. Ovu Monobi has numerous resources, it wouldn't be that hard to send one of his followers to another world.
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Yes it's that time of the week again!
Happy times!
Here's a new comic:smallbiggrin::
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Say, this looks similar to The Emperor's room in Star Wars. :smalltongue:
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Prediction; my cameo character will either; A) never be seen/heard of again, or B) end up dead. :smalltongue:
Another prediction; Aaron and Fayte will have multiple run-ins with this hunter android, each time worse than the last.
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:smallfrown: sorry for missing not 1 but 2 updates.........
but I'll make it up to you guys tomorrow...
Ive been having a...... time... :smallamused: