Let me think about it.
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IGOR! PREPARE THE REGENERATION TABLET! WE MUST HAVE MORE CUPCAKES!
*twitch, twitch*Quote:
Stop being a baby and eat your spiders or you won't get any dessert :smallannoyed:
The dessert can go bugger off with the spiders.
Now I'm checking Equestria Daily compulsively. I MUST NOT MISS THIS.
No, of course not.
...
:smalltongue:
Sure, go ahead.
Would you kindly write it?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rGaIQ...layer_embedded This video is required viewing.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qG0ZM...&feature=feedf This is also good
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jumsx...el_video_title A classic, but I'm sure someone hasn't seen it. SEIZURE WARNING
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-1Wc3...el_video_title And I posted this one last thread, but it bears repeating.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6859170/...h_an_Iron_Hoof Also, if anyone's curious, here you go. The ponies/titans crossover
So, who wants to help me ponify the names of some dead scientists?
First, my own ideas:
Heisenberg - Hoovesenberg
Dirac - Deerac
Ones I have no ideas for yet:
Schroedinger
Pauli
Feynman
If'n he doesn't have kids, Schroedingeld works :smallamused:
Feynman could be Feynhorse or Feyncolt or something?
Hmm, I like Coltinger and Feyncolt. Any ideas for Pauli? I could play off his first name, Wolfgang, as well I guess...
Well, that took longer than expected.
Now, what have I done wrong?
Raise the Roof (roof raiser/roof razor)
Tub Thumpin'
Cupcakes/Sweet and Tasty
FOREVER smile (fa~vorite!)
Ok. I only wanted to know when it didn't matter; completion of the "official" list would keep me from getting manic. If you're adjusting, I can make due :3
I think it worked! There are no discussions of immortals, mine your or otherwise.
Now, side effects... Does the color of my robes smell high-pitched to you?
Yay for orbital weaponry!
And the pic... it's so wonderful. (starry eyed)
......
Help. The thread is explode.
EXPLODINGLY HAMMY!
GREAT FIRE OF THE NORTHERN LIGHTS!
please tell me you thought about anatomy even just an inkling while hectoring this... You have to submit this! she has wings, so it's ok.
Wow, I... I can't think of an oath strong enough for this. And that came from something I drew?!
Gadget, what do you think?
Inspector: ... Wowzers!
Wowzers it is!
I myself can find no real flaw at all. Several tiny differences that are artistic choices, but nothing wrong with it. This is digital art? This is what vectoring can do?
Time to move Guardalopolis up on my priority scale.
Forever smile?
...
Eternal Grin!!! =D
Since everybody seems to have a good time:
Did ya know that someone wrote an sequel for "Cupcakes" featuring the Cutie Mark Crusaders? hahahahaImgonnacrymyselfintosleep
Just look at this thread and its lack of image dumps. It's shameful, that's what it is.
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Much better.
@Raz_Fox: Would you mind if I critiqued your epilogue? I had a few thoughts about it, but I wanted to ask first beforeutterly annihilating your hopes and dreamsproviding many thoughtful and constructive comments.
EDIT: They did what now? :smalleek:
...if you'll excuse me, I'll be in my panic room.
I see your image dump and raise you... AN IMAGE DUMP.
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Good news! Finished another part of my Repo!nies.
The Great And Powerful Trixie Sweet! :smallbiggrin:
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I can put a freeze on it if you'd like.
And for what it's worth, I did feel like the epilogue was weak compared to the main story. Kind of to be expected in that kind of thing, though. Chalk it up to a need to tie up loose ends and move on.
Also, no PhoeBondage when the possibility of it was hinted at. I'm taking 10 points from Griffondor.
WHY DOES NOPONY TELL ME THESE THINGS BEFORE I SUBMIT? http://i.imgur.com/59s2M.jpg
...Maybe if you mention that I did rush out the epilogue, and am receiving some late criticism on it...
Aaaand you did get a cameo there in the epilogue, still tied up, so there is that.
Image dumps? Wih some images I also considered posting (but did not do, so whatever)?
Take this!
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Annotations:
*The images are links to the various artists, that saves me one work step
*15 points who recognizes the crossover from image 1
*The second Scootaloo strip is both a reference to the news I just announced and the severe lack of Trixie in this thread
*I like mooshy Twilight although no one else seems to do
*I'm the godamn Welf, and one day this will be my catchphrase
SpoilerWell, to be honest with you I did warn you of this when I was praising the final chapter. Everything had already come to a head, climaxed, and exploded violently in a satisfying burst of colors, shapes, and sounds. I don't know what the hay you could have possibly done for an encore, and it was my opinion at the time you could have called the whole thing right there. The only thing stopping you is/was the need to wrap up the metaplot, but to be perfectly frank I think it's brilliant with the hanging threads. It's your decision to make; I'm not always right. If you feel the payoff is strong enough then you should run with it.
Although I do kind of feel like (and this is going to sound really stupid given the particular subject matter) something should have come of my presence in the story. And I don't mean that Shimmer needs to be an important part of the narrative, she's just some putz who can't seem to untangle herself (sounds about right. <.<). It's just that the first invocation comes as a very funny visual gag, the second carries a punchline, the third is an apt comparison to the visual in the current scene, but by the fourth... the reader is going to wonder what you're planning with her, since she keeps sticking her nose in the narrative. And since there's ultimately no payoff to the final appearance, it's going to read as somewhat frustrating to anypony who doesn't get the joke. That's a moment where you need to consider letting her chew through the ball gag, glare and Braeburn and go, "You gigantic jerk!" before hopping away in a huff, leading to a bunch of confused looks and at least one pony asking, "Just who was that, anyway?" You wouldn't need to carry the scene much farther past that I don't think, but since you're there tying up (ha!) loose ends, I don't think introducing a new one is a very good idea. Minor though it be. You could also just cut her out of the scene; that would work just as well.
In the end there are some really nice shippy visuals in the epilogue, and I like it - it just doesn't stand up to the actual ending.