I like the first one a lot. Damn near perfect, really.
The second one is good, but it doesn't appear overly ... female. Maybe work on that a bit.
Thanks!
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I like the first one a lot. Damn near perfect, really.
The second one is good, but it doesn't appear overly ... female. Maybe work on that a bit.
Thanks!
Well, how should it be changed?
Bigger hips, maybe? Look up some female figure drawing tutorials.
Also, after looking at the dwarf, I've decided I want there to be a sort of short female Space Marine" look about her. Look at some of the Black Templar Space Marines, and see what you can do to capture some of the aesthetic.
Sorry if I'm a bit bossy and fickle. I really don't mean to be. If I'm getting too demanding, slap me.
I am happy to report that with tomorrow's call to customer service of Adobe, I will be back in business! I am anxiously awaiting that hour! I apologise for the massive delay.:smallredface:
Sorry. As you know, I should be ready to draw by next nightfall.
Hey Gligar!
*pokes to the last page*
Whaddya think of my chicken scratchings?
Well, the warlord's hands are kinda wonky, but they are no worse than mine. He's kinda thin for a norseman, and hemlooks slightly piratesque. The dwarf isn't very feminine, and seems kinda wispy still. However, the norseman is savage and aggressive, and I loved the idea of a dwarf using a pick as a weapon. Genius.
Is this satisfactory? Can you give a similar analysis of my work?
Good job. I need to start working soon. How much time did you spend on each? Mine take 2-3 days, but the dwarf took far longer as I was learning with photoshop. I am assuming you saved the images. If not, could Mr. Hobbit provide them?
Edit: Due to a problem, I have had to wait to use my computer until this night.
Photoshop Obtained! Ding!
First draft of the ravenfolk cleric done! What is needed to be revised? I just got this done quickly, so much may need to be changed. Much.:smallredface:
Here: http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images...vencleric.jpg/
Save, inform and delete, as usual!
Firstly, sorry for the quadruple post. It took place over a lot of time.
Secondly, I really appreciate your work. Thank you for the criticism.
Finally, here's that avatar picture link. http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images...arversion.png/
(Could Chainsaw Hobbit please check my ravenfolk cleric for revisions and inform me of its saving?)
Okay. Wow, that's cool!
Now go to User CP, scroll to "Options," scroll all the way down, click oon the box for "Custom Avatar" and paste this link into the box:
http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/5...tarversion.png
I've got the rogue done. Please save and inform.
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images...lingrogue.jpg/
Me too! I copied you. http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m8...i394o1_250.png
Can I put you on my Buddy List?
There are buddy lists?
Where is Hobbit?
Yes! Click on my username, it'll say "Add DEB to your Buddy List." Can I add you?
Offline.
You look goooood. *highhoof*
Highhoof. Also, yeah, you can add me. My third and fourth drawings are up, and Chainsaw hasn't revised them. I will keep working. How are things with you? Did you know Chainsaw has a blogspot, in which he reveals his name?
Yay! I added you, buddy!
And yes. I read it often, you chould check it out. It helps in my D&D games.
Do you know how to take the whitespace off of th' avatar?
Photoshop, I guess.
If you have some time, would you do mine, pleasepleaseplease?
I'll give you signature credit!
Sure. Can I have a pic?
Thankyouthankyouthankyou!!!
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m8...i394o1_250.png
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m8...i394o1_250.png
Here's the avatar: http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/439...lfbardcopy.jpg
It still seems to have a white background... :confused:
What? I removed the background. I used a Background Eraser, for celestia-sakes! What is this? Why?:smallfurious: