...I'm pretty sure he's just helping herd them at training ground 39. Which is still in the village. :smallwink:
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Sorry. But while we have time (in game, a couple hours), it doesn't seem like enough to go outside the village (which is where N13 is supposed to be).
Erayue's a great animal "herder" due to the whole "made of metal" thing. Makes it harder for the animals to bite and stuff.
Sorry. I'll ease up. Busy is a way of life for lots of people. (Canada won another gold medal! Another excuse for my friends and I to party!) :smallbiggrin:
Kyo? A peaceful man who wishes no evil harm to befall the Hokage?
I think I hear Leech laughing.:smallamused: No wait, it's confirmed.:smalltongue:
So, Silver, Knight...any decisions on our genin team?
I don't have a google wave account, though since I already have gmail account I guess it shouldn't be too much of a problem to get a google wave account.
I just sent you and Knight an PM about details on the 1st team. I guess we should discuss the other team later?
Also, I didn't get another PM from you aside from you confirming that you want to play a Long Range combatant.
Me., having only taken a brief look at the new character, I can't say I've taken a GOOD look at her...but why one EARTH is she still a chuunin? O.o
And in only tangentially related news,
Zersk and horngeek
SpoilerI blame an awesome picture of the Raikage I just saw for this, but it's brought up a desire to play a strong as f*** shinobi who mixes ninjutsu with professional wrestling techniques Testosterone Poisoning is a given. But, I wanted to make sure that it was alright with you both for several reasons...
A) Because said character was going to be an older brother to Haruka, in my mind, and possibly a source where she learns some taijutsu from. (Aside from ninjutsu-enhanced taijutsu, he'd be predominantly a taijutsu expert) Also admittedly, an expert with the Lightening Release Armor or the technique's developer. Assuming I stick with lightening release, raiton users are becoming fairly common after all...
B) I'm not sure how much it infringes on both character's concepts, obviously it's still open to change. But the Kazekage also seems like a Mighty Glacier kind of guy, even if he takes after Armstrong more then the Raikage, so I want to make certain I'm not stepping on any toes before drawing something up.
C) Character, likely, wouldn't be introduced now but later when Kumogakure went up. Or not, who knows? The character is so fun it's hard to hold myself back.
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I'll quote particular bits as they come.
So, she's the same "danger" rank as any one of the Seven Swordsmen, but a Chunin? She should be at least a Special Junin, if not straight Juunin.Quote:
Name: Chihiro Yukimora (first, last)
Age: 19
Class: High A rank Chunin
It took me a couple read throughs to realize she has a pet fox. You might want to emphasize that more in the entry. maybe have a mini-entry for the fox or something.Quote:
Fox clone: This jutsu can work in a few different ways. It can either clone Hiita into a maximum of 10 Hiita's, all of which will attack her enemy. Or, it can make Hiita look like Chihiro, which then makes it seems like there are two Chihiro's, and she even clone this and make multiples of her, one her, one Hiita, and the rest clones.
As well, if those are solid clones of the fox, this is actually two techniques. Shadow Clone Jutsu, and Man-Beast Clone (or whichever one Kiba used). Merging those two notably different techniques into one and calling it a "fox clone" doesn't really work that well.
Genjutsu fool the senses. They never directly "mess with thoughts" or with "feelings" (emotions, I'm assuming).Quote:
Genjutsu: This her greatest are of expertise, she is able to not only mess with one's thoughts, but also their feelings.
...Okay, I'm going to point out that this should be very draining, no matter her control. Flight is not something that should come easy in Naruto. My Swordsman can do it...for short periods of time before he's totally drained. It's one thing if you said she uses small spurts of it to enhance jumps. But I'd ask you to at least stop and think about whether she should actually fly.Quote:
Flight: Chihiro can shoot fire out of her hands/feet and use these like a jet pack and fly around or even hover in the air.
That's...a lot of really powerful jutsu. Many of which would be draining, even with her control. Mainly because they're constant-effect techniques. Beyond that, you run into the fact that, if I remember right, there are certain minimum power requirements for things like the fireball jutsu (kiddy Sasuke couldn't do it for a while, and I think part of the reason was not having enough power to put in; it was internally commented by Kakashi that most kids who just graduated don't know it, because it takes so much chakra); things like the Fire Style; Serpent Tongue probably have a hefty minimal cost.Quote:
Ninjutsu: These being her second area and her being able to control her chakra well, Chihiro can do a decent amount of these jutsus.
...If this is her "greatest area", she should have more jutsu here than in ninjutsu. As is, she looks like a ninjutsu specialist who dabbles in genjutsu.Quote:
Genjutsu: This is Chihiro's greatest area. She can do a lot with these.
Clone: Makes 1-10 clones of herself. Though not real, they usually fool people.
Influence: Influences enemies thoughts, actions, feelings, and senses.
Also, "Influence" is a.)way too vague, this should be lots of techniques, and b.)way too broad. Like I said earlier, I'm pretty sure genjutsu can't actually change thought patterns or emotions. They fool the senses, up to the point of perhaps causing the body to freeze in place (Kurenai's Tree Bind jutsu), or shove a huge load of tramatic images/false sensory sensations right into the brain of the target (Itachi's Tsukuyomi). Really, Genjutsu only control the senses. This can be used to fool the target into performing actions, but I don't think it can change base behaviors and thought patterns.
For being her weakest area, this is still pretty beefy, so far as what it ends up doing. I mean, just increasing her speed, strength, etc with chakra (which is presumably how she does it) is a decent strength technique. Putting fire around her limbs? That's suggesting she's not really weak at all.Quote:
Taijutsu: Not her strongest area, Chihiro still is capable of doing some.
Flame Fist: Surrounds her fist in flame and causes burn damage.
Flame Kick: Surrounds foot in flam, causing burn damage.
Flame Run: Shoots flames out from behind her and bursts forward.
Also can do simple things like increasing her speed, jumping abilities, and strength.
Conclusion
Right now, she comes across as a fire-jutsu user. As well, none of her ninjutsu are really "finesse" types, so good chakra control won't help much. As well, if she's performing some sort of solid clone technique with her fox companion...that's got a hefty cost associated as well. Because unless she's feeding it soldier pills, I don't know how the fox will be able to do stuff with its own chakra. Which would mean she's providing the juice herself.
I'd suggest sitting down and rethinking things a bit. I'd heavily recommend dropping flight, or changing it to more of a "jump boost" kind of thing. Either change her to Junin, or downgrade her abilities to something appropriate for a chuunin. Try fleshing out her genjutsu, keeping in mind that only directly physically applied seals have been shown to do anything like influence thought and emotion. Genjutsu "cast" using handsigns can only influence the target's five senses. If she's supposed to be a genjutsu focused user, drop at least half of those ninjutsu, and downgrade her taijutsu to something like "can give self slight boosts via chakra enhancement". And if her sai use is tertiary, like you imply with the "taijutsu isn't her strong suit", the she wouldn't be channeling chakra into the weapon anyways (and besides, that takes special materials, which would make the sai somewhat expensive for her).
I've only just noticed this post, so my response is a little dated by now. Having read it now, there are a few aspects of it which are rather confusing. What exactly is happening in it? From a literal reading it seems to indicate that your character has woken up (presumably in his house), somehow 'sensed' the Kazekage's presence (despite this being a very rare ability even at short ranges) among the hundreds of others scattered all over Konoha, then wandered over to meet him. Is that really what's going on here, or is this a misunderstanding?
I believe that's exactly what's going on. Also, the part about after not getting a response...it's not my fault if you posted it during the middle of the night where I am! :smalleek:
Although I replied now, Me. Et voila. :smallamused::smallsmile:
If that's so, then there's a problem: The ability to magically sense the locations of other people from afar isn't something that the vast majority of characters in Naruto can possess. Aside from nullifying a lot of IC strategies, it doesn't really fit with the way that the canon world functions.
Me: If possible, could you edit your post to reflect another method of coming across the Kazekage?
+5 to it as well. Thanks Me! :smallsmile:
This post is mainly for Moon and Zersk, but others may find the info useful.
Me. will be away until Sunday. Scout campout.
Thought you'd want to know.
Well, when anybody has a character available for N13's introduction, just let me know. In the mean time, I totally forgot that Ryuu and Yasuko met at the library before. .-.
Zel isn't doing anything but walking around right now. Could use her, if you want.
As long as they have a reason to be out of the village. It'll be a bit of a long post though. :smallwink:
While, right at this particular moment, she's wandering in the village. But, she goes out to do exercises often. That's reason enough.
Posted the introduction post for N13. Also, Zersk, I responded on the last page. Ended up double posting, so I didn't want you to miss it.
As simple as can be done. Proctor will explain the test, genin make post about answering first nine questions and how they plan to cheat/just that smart, then a post setting up and asking the tenth question with each player's responses to it (probably two or three as befitting the situation).
@Purple: Also, well done. Impressive intro.