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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
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Originally Posted by
Lyinginbedmon
Threeshades' advice includes responses to other text boxes. "Fine" should have been placed after "I don't care..." If it helps you can extend the lines connecting the two boxes of "No-one else here" and "Fine" and the place the object underneath that of "I don't care..." so it overlaps. That's fairly standard practise.
Ill take this into account for next time
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Looking good, can't wait to see the next few updates! Also volenteering for an appearance (I know it's about the third time, but my name isn't on the first post, and others have been added...).
Here's my standard avatar, if it helps:
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j1...y/SoDGnome.png
Rogue/Sorcerer (or was last time).
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
As others have said, try and make sure the speech bubbles are in the correct order so they are read properly, and the grammar could use a little work.
But overall, good stuff! :smallbiggrin: Definitely interested to see where this goes.
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
*wonders when he'l come into the comic*
Ps, you can feature me as a barbarian who's pretty silent and devoted to Cookiemanjaro. But still the cookiemonster.
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
When are the villians going to show up?
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Rakshasa mage, humbly at your service.
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
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ThePhantom
When are the villians going to show up?
Soon soon:smalltongue: i just gotta finish up some stuff with the Heros then they will be in
And SoD ive made up your character and he will be in soon:smallsmile:
dokkata be pashient ill but you in as soon as i can fit you in:smalltongue:
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
if you ever need a mad scientist position as either a villain or whatever tech kind or science kind of purpose done, don't hesitate to use my avatar, no wait don't hesitate to use a better drawn version of my avatar, my avatar looks horrible.
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Odd villainest cut aways that don't make sense is what I do alot. 5 plans a day, and can't get around to using all of them.
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Yeah, it's me again. I'm liking the direction that the comic is moving in ("slay Celestial Creature" heheh.) and as always, I have one minor nitpick. When that red-coat-guy shot at the archon, there wasn't really any effect other then the sound effect to show that he had fired. Perhaps in the future you can show a bit of muzzle flash to show that he's fired. Oh, and it's spelled "earlier" Otherwise, you're improving. I like how the characters are making subtle movements, like Nameless pointing his other arm to cast, or your character standing on tiptoes to talk to the celestial.
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
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Enlong
that red-coat-guy
...Err, Alucard? Does no one watch Hellsing?
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
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Originally Posted by
Enlong
Yeah, it's me again. I'm liking the direction that the comic is moving in ("slay Celestial Creature" heheh.) and as always, I have one minor nitpick. When that red-coat-guy shot at the archon, there wasn't really any effect other then the sound effect to show that he had fired. Perhaps in the future you can show a bit of muzzle flash to show that he's fired. Oh, and it's spelled "earlier" Otherwise, you're improving. I like how the characters are making subtle movements, like Nameless pointing his other arm to cast, or your character standing on tiptoes to talk to the celestial.
Ok thanks for the nit-pickin
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
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Originally Posted by
Elrond
dokkata be pashient ill but you in as soon as i can fit you in:smalltongue:
*wonders who this Dokkata guy is*:smalltongue:
And I'm kinda impatient sometimes...
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
There's soem good advice on text bubbles here BTW;
http://webcomictriage.blogspot.com/
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Yeah, I know Alucard*. I was just being paradoxially lazy enough to not say the name but say the concept instead.
*From Dr. McNinja though, not Hellsing.
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
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Bisected8
Thanks but i cant see it
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
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Enlong
Yeah, I know Alucard*. I was just being paradoxially lazy enough to not say the name but say the concept instead.
*From Dr. McNinja though, not Hellsing.
Even though I havent seen it (yet, it will run on Animax soon :smallbiggrin:), he is easily recognised:
I love those glasses.
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
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Elrond
Thanks but i cant see it
It works for me.
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I liked the the summon stool for midgets thing.
When's the next comic?
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
should be up soon it will be introducing some of the other characters:smallsmile:
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
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Elrond
should be up soon it will be introducing some of the other characters:smallsmile:
Pssh, don't rush yourself. Yoyu have to put times intos these things, and wer cant rush quality.... especially me seeign as i have the art skills of a monkey with no fingers.
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
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FF fanboy
Pssh, don't rush yourself. Yoyu have to put times intos these things, and wer cant rush quality.... especially me seeign as i have the art skills of a monkey with no fingers.
Psshaw. Fingers are overrated. A nose, a face, and patience are all you need. Lots and lots of patience.
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
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Tired N' Drowzy
Psshaw. Fingers are overrated. A nose, a face, and patience are all you need. Lots and lots of patience.
You have a point just look at the guy who does Anti heroes..... I personally am, still waiting for my inevitable apperance, but it is still a awesome comic written by a GOAT.
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
The next ITP is up (its a long one) also how are my speech bubbles going?
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
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Elrond
The next ITP is up (its a long one) also how are my speech bubbles going?
Not that great, it is really cumbersome to read...
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
That was only one character though....