Well, not all PCs have to be in the crew, so long as the character is deemed disruptive, and the player has to reroll. We know that Coby isn't long for the group, for example. Good point about the additional untyped damage, though.
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http://dragontrainer13.deviantart.co...-026-208396698
Did some last minute changes to the dialogue because it seemed a bit awkward. Well... more awkward than it seems now, anyway. :p
heh, the dialog does seem decent enough, and the setup of the comic worked great at building up tension.
Im not 100% sure the use of "leet" speak works so great though, maybe using another font would work better?
Yeah... the leet speak was a mistake... :p
http://dragontrainer13.deviantart.co...-027-208630238
Hehe, i liked the GM's reaction here :smalltongue:
Ah, the cry of annoyed GMs everywhere: "What! Let me see that..."
hehe, poor Coby, he really is the chewtoy of the first episode.
Nice, clearly the pc cant see any reason to make it easy for the poor gm :smalltongue:
This brings us to the end of the first episode! It only took seven weeks to do, too. I was worried that an episode was going to take up to 100 pages to complete. Well... 30 is still a bit much. If I do 30 pages per episode and there's currently 498 episodes, 10 films, and 5 OVAs, then that works out to... over 16,000 pages!!! (o_O")
Er... >_>
Yeah... <_<
Anyways, here's the last page for the first episode! ^_^
http://dragontrainer13.deviantart.co...-030-209542043
Well, you better get to work then. :smallbiggrin:
(Weird dude in the comments of your dA page, that. A bit overzealous.)
Very nice end to the episode. I do pity that GM.:smallbiggrin:
The copyright stuff isn't going to be a problem, is it? There was another rpg screencap called "Criminals and Crusaders" and that's been up since 2009, so I figured it'd be okay. I already have it up on drunkduck.com, so maybe I should just start posting it only there for now. ~_^
Nah, i doubt it. Just keep it until someone starts to actually complain. :smallsmile: (Someone other than that guy, at least. I could totally see him trawling around dA, reporting stuff.)
Here. There's only 7 pages on deviantart, though. Can't find anymore than that.
http://masamiphoenix.deviantart.com/...-001-122437242
Thank you.
Title Page for Episode 2:
http://dragontrainer13.deviantart.co...-031-209660698
Ahh, now im really looking forward to see how Zorro turns out, and what the explanation for his swordstyle will be :smalltongue:
Ahuh. I have to say I found the first Naruto one funny and interesting as a concept, but this is actually going to be a part of this now?
The Naruto thing was primarily to try out a way for the players to talk to each other between game sessions. In this case, Luke and Cory are playing a fighting game while the GM's setting up. Er... I had planned for them to talk about something with a bit more substance, but... yeah... >_>. I've also been experimenting with a few things for fight scenes. For example, I'm trying out the "Damn Noisy Kids" font that the Irregulars use for Darths & Droids.
http://dragontrainer13.deviantart.co...-034-210483233
Can't wait for the next ones :)
Hope you continue!
You posting links on any One Piece forums?
Er... I planned on posting it in the One Manga forum, but I wasn't sure where exactly to put it. Should I be putting it under the Art section or the Fanfiction section? ~_^
Honestly, no idea. Just thought it might get you more views. :)
http://www.narutoforums.com/ might work too. They have a strong one piece community.
Back to the pirates, and bad handwriting, the bane of good descriptions.
Not bad work through.