How does this look for a pirate

Ok so I was asked to make a crew for a floating fortress ship. And well big and tough is what I was looking for. Saying core, complete, and Stormwrack were allowed along with a few outside sorces if they fit how does this build look all in all?

http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheetvie...sheetid=472095

This is one of the crew that though has filled his part is still a slave to the captain which is his hated race, why their is a ranger dip, along with the ref save. This will be one of the people to first board an enemy ship, the front liners who cause the most destruction. Does the build look good enough to work.

Any help would be welcome thank you.

At 6th level you took a feat called "war domain". What is that?

I meant devotion. Sorry.

I wouldn't put anymore ranks in jump than Leap Attack requires (8 i think). The DC for the check is like 10, so unless you are building him to be some fantastic leaper, those skill ranks could be used for something else.

Thanks for the advise let me improve my survival. I always though a high Jump was great. Guess not.