you should put all the strips in the first post, so we wont need to search the thread.
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you should put all the strips in the first post, so we wont need to search the thread.
Issue 10: Apparently, !POP! isn't just for when characters appear anymore...
Great. Now that you've hit 10, you can defend yourself in ABR. Or I could just kill you if you want to quit. I'm tired of waiting.
...Wow. He's a fast dragger. Especially since Blue and Grlump seem to have disappeared. I think if you stopped using the 4-panels-per-comic format for now you could fit a lot more story in each one without sacrificing anything. Most of the space in these giant panels is going unused. And I still think the nonspeaking characters look vacant.
The only reason I was using four panels was so I could show everyone and everything. Now that I don't need to, it will go back to it's regular 12 Panel format.
Something that was bothering me was the spelling of disintegrate in the first few comics.
Otherwise keep up the work, just try to polish it up a bit instead of putting out so many frequently. Since there are a few mistakes here or there =)
Issue 11: Low Quality
SpoilerI'll admit, there are a lot of errors in this strip both panel-wise and in the background. I tried to fix most of the errors, but some still remain. Thankfully, the next strip will be in a different area so these errors will not appear again.
http://i777.photobucket.com/albums/y...ios5/CH111.jpg
Change the white lines to black and the text in the bubbles to comic sans an- -- I feel like an editor now. The previous is just advice, not orders. And by that I mean the changes to format. Anyhoo, keep up the good work
Alright. On the Comic Sans subject, that on my part was a mistake for the selecting the font.
You should draw the scenery underneath the panels.
Quality, not quantity.[/cliché]
If you know there are errors, shouldn't you fix them before posting the issue?
Also, why is it called Low Quality?
I tried fixing them, but there were too many.
Because, the background of the strip is of lower quality then the others.
Also: No update tonight. I have to make some new templates:
Goblin
Hobgoblin
One-Eyed Hobgoblin
"Invisible" Goblin
Wizard Goblin
Hobgoblin Chief
Issue 12: A town made at Spawn. Hence, Spawntown.
Heh, preempting the F word on the Generic Market sign.
Issue 13: The Explanation, Part One
Spoilerhttp://i777.photobucket.com/albums/y...ios5/CH113.jpg
The flashback panels were supposed to be in Sepia, but for some reason it didn't appear after I uploaded it to Inkscape
I like the top hat, in spite of it looking a bit odd.
You still need indicators for who's talking.
yay, I appear.
seems to be doing good so far.
Issue 14: Bees. My god.
An Amazon attack,
Good panel!
~ ♅
Have you been watching the facebook group chat? Because I must have said "Bees. My god." a million times. :smalltongue:
its obvios hes lying :smallsmile:
you made me nicely.
Thanks, Superdark :smallsmile:
though robe is a bit too grey... darken it up a little.
and my avatar doesnt have an eyed amulet for nothing you know! its 33! an intillegent amulet who enchances my casting powers.
I have a reason for the color of the robe being as it is currently :smallwink:
Also, you will find an amulet...eventually :smallamused:
it will take an arc, wont it?
I apologize for the lack of updates, but tomorrow, I will create a new strip :smallwink: