The Relics of Raz'ni - An OotS Fan Comic

The Relics of Raz'ni

Ok, so this my Fan-Comic inspired by the Order of The Stick created by Rich Burlew. It is essentially a cheesy quests for the maguffin(s) story with (hopefully) a few original elements tossed in there as well.

Updates will have to be limited to one a week minimum. There is the potential for more than one a week, I just can't promise that.

So without further delay here is the prologue:
(watch out it is fairly long)

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Archive and stuff will be created when more comics are made!

Also any and all feedback is appreciated, I am still learning this after all.

This looks intense. I'll have to wait and see how the story starts off...

Your art style is pretty amazing as well.

Yeah, that strip had to be fast paced in order to fit everything in. I know it is a long strip but I thought it would inappropriate for a "Prologue" to be more than one strip in length.

Anyway, the first proper strip plus a cast page should hopefully be up this weekend :smallsmile:

thats nice magic clouds you did there for Urzil, think you can upgrade my Avvie?

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Originally Posted by super dark33

thats nice magic clouds you did there for Urzil, think you can upgrade my Avvie?

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Hey Dark remember this?
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/s...rkAvatar-1.png

it's that avatar you didn't thank August for.

Just thought I'd mention it.

IC: Damn good start. I really want to see the next one.

@V: Yes. Yes it is. Link to post.

nope i dont remeber this, when did it happen? is it me?

Wow! Really nice beginning, good script and awesome artwork.

Just two things though:

"It's over Urzil" is missing an "!". What? I found things like that annoying when I read :smalltongue:

Your running characters in robes look a little weird, kinde like they're floating. Rich does is like this (first panel). He shows the feet of the runner, which makes it look better.

wouldn´t this go into the fancomic section?

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Originally Posted by Ninjaman

wouldn´t this go into the fancomic section?

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Um... that's where it is :smalltongue: