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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
Shinnmoso I'd like you to keep more track of your time period and where your char is when. Right now in the time that it took Jane, Cale, Jirou and Jason to meet near the restaurant talk for 5 minutes/grab brochures, Rockwell managed to meet Hinata, go to his base and grab a shower in a different district, find a comatose girl, wait for backup, apparently completely avoiding any form of making a report and witness reports of what has happened to any form of higher authorities, move a couple of blocks, hear a scream that already happened in the past and then suddenly attack some mooks.
This is getting dangerously close to power playing and did you ask permission from the characters who were dealing with these specific mooks to interfere?
I'm willing to let it slide for now but I'm asking you to keep your power playing down from now on. Unless you want your character to have super speeding powers, what he did right now is pretty near impossible and makes no sense at all.
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
In light of the above, removed my recent post to avoid creating more of a temporal snarl. Will wait for the current situation to be solved before posting again. :smallsmile:
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
RIght now I think the most logical way for the story is that the whole kidnapping happens in District 7. (or 10 if you guys really want to) and Rockwell takes the char to the hospital and waits there for his superiors to come and get his report. I mean, he found the girl, it's his responsibility to take care of her. Hinata could probably tag along out of concern or something.
That's just what I think would be logical at least.
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
Judging from how the timeline is, Hinata is still dolling up back home, and won't get anywhere near either the cafe or District 7 for half an hour or so. So I think it's best I just wait and have him appear near the cafe once flow of time allows. :smallsmile:
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
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Originally Posted by
Lillith
I'm willing to let it slide for now but I'm asking you to keep your power playing down from now on. Unless you want your character to have super speeding powers, what he did right now is pretty near impossible and makes no sense at all.
Well, I'm not. All this power play has ruined this part of the game currently. We need him to acknowledge how any of this is possible.
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Originally Posted by
Silverraptor
Well, I'm not. All this power play has ruined this part of the game currently. We need him to acknowledge how any of this is possible.
Game wise I think it would be best if he sticks to the body plot and let the others deal with the kidnapping plot. Then everybody can have their own storyline to work with.
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
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Originally Posted by
Lillith
I'm willing to let it slide for now but I'm asking you to keep your power playing down from now on. Unless you want your character to have super speeding powers, what he did right now is pretty near impossible and makes no sense at all.
Funny thing is that Katsu does have super-speed powers and yet he ahven't done anything yet. :smalltongue:
By the way, does anybody mind him distracting the thugs with the "I'm over here! No I'm here! No here!" routine? He may only be slightly faster than a bullet at full speed but the thugs' reaction time should be a lot slower than their weapons. :smallwink:
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
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Originally Posted by
Keveak
Funny thing is that Katsu does have super-speed powers and yet he ahven't done anything yet. :smalltongue:
By the way, does anybody mind him distracting the thugs with the "I'm over here! No I'm here! No here!" routine? He may only be slightly faster than a bullet at full speed but the thugs' reaction time should be a lot slower than their weapons. :smallwink:
Wait a bit so Rockwell's post can be altered. Once the light flashes and smoke bombs and bullets have disappeared you three can try what you want on the thugs. =)
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
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Originally Posted by
Lillith
Wait a bit so Rockwell's post can be altered. Once the light flashes and smoke bombs and bullets have disappeared you three can try what you want on the thugs. =)
You might want to pm him. I'm not entirely sure he reads the OOC.
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
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Silverraptor
You might want to pm him. I'm not entirely sure he reads the OOC.
If he hasn't by tomorrow I will.
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
Unfortunately, I wouldn't be around too long.
The amount of work I'm getting because I study the IB Diploma is starting to build up. Right now a I type, I have 2 Internal Assessments, my World Literature essay and my Extended Essay I have to write and work on.
So I would more or less likely stick around until the end of Sunday, then I'm going to leave this roleplay for an unknown period of time.
It was fun while it lasted.
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
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Originally Posted by
shinnmoso
Unfortunately, I wouldn't be around too long.
The amount of work I'm getting because I study the IB Diploma is starting to build up. Right now a I type, I have 2 Internal Assessments, my World Literature essay and my Extended Essay I have to write and work on.
So I would more or less likely stick around until the end of Sunday, then I'm going to leave this roleplay for an unknown period of time.
It was fun while it lasted.
Well, can you edit what you did so we can figure out what happened?
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
I'm sorry if I've missed out on the action due to lack of posting. But I still have to wonder, where is Hajime in all this relative to everything else?
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Originally Posted by
Silverraptor
Well, can you edit what you did so we can figure out what happened?
If he can't we'll just ignore his posts up until the truck raced around the corner. Anybody who wants to do that plot can go at it in my opinion. Would be a shame to just let that girl lie there.
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Originally Posted by
InyutheBeatIs
I'm sorry if I've missed out on the action due to lack of posting. But I still have to wonder, where is Hajime in all this relative to everything else?
Hajime is standing across the street of the alley where just a boy disappeared and screamed. Though I suggest you wait posting until we figure out what to do with Rockwell's sudden super speed and assassination of three kidnappers. Which will get changed either way.
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
that sounds okay, I'll act like there wasn't a big burly soldier guy around when Cale turned around the corner.
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Silverraptor
Well, can you edit what you did so we can figure out what happened?
Considered it done? (Introduced a side character with a generic name of "Delta-Two-Three")
He's Rockwell's partner. Or at least in his Platoon
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
People please disregard the interference of Shinnmoso's characters on the plot involving Cale, Jirou and Katsu.
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Originally Posted by Rhydeble
I'll act like there wasn't a big burly soldier guy around when Cale turned around the corner.
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This.
The situation of the kidnapping plot is the same up until Jirou and Cale's reaction as I have yet to respond to his actions and Katsu has not been involved yet. etc. etc.
Thank you and my apologies for the mess that this plot has gotten in. :smallfrown:
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
Its not your fault. There's always a power gamer that comes in every once in a while. Anyways, lets continue the Jason and Jane plot then.
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
Alright, I'll give Katsu till tomorrow to respond until I move along that plot.
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
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Lillith
Alright, I'll give Katsu till tomorrow to respond until I move along that plot.
I think you'd have to respond to Cale's spear first, Katsu will probably attempt to stop the other two if the victim of said spear is knocked out but will focus on getting the unconscious boy away from the armed kidnapper if not.
Sorry if this makes no sense or is a bother, I may be a tad sleepy today. ^_^'
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
I got news from Shinnmoso that he's pulling from the rp. :smallfrown:
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I'm sorry to hear that. :smallfrown:
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
Given my current schedule I should be able to do one major update a day. Which means parts of the plot that involve multiple people, like the kidnapping plot. That way I can take my time to think of how to respond properly to the chars and let everybody have a turn. :smallwink:
On a different note, next week Friday (4th of March) I'll be going on vacation for a week with no internet so I won't be able to update during that time. What we could do is try to let the story reach up till a certain point where people can just do whatever they feel like while I'm gone and pick up the story when I get back. Unless someone has better ideas of course!
Also, bonus points if you guys can guess Six's power. :smallsmile:
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
Let me guess. He can produce high frequency sounds, right?
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Silverraptor
Let me guess. He can produce high frequency sounds, right?
Points go to Silverraptor! Not that it was a hard question but still. :smallbiggrin:
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
Wow... I missed alot... :smallfrown:
What would be a good point for me to join in and what has happened so far?
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
I am also wondering if it's alright to jump in at this point.
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
So my biggest worries right now is if I provided you people with an entertaining plot without making it too confusing. I figure that before I put you guys through more suffering I should ask first what you people think of it up till now. Any things you liked, or thought were awful? Or any tips are also welcome.
Also of course there's the big question of: do you guys like the plot enough to continue it, or should I drop it and make room for someone who's a lot better at it then me? :smallwink:
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Re: [Rail] Academy City OOC II : ONEESAMA!!!!
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Originally Posted by
Lillith
So my biggest worries right now is if I provided you people with an entertaining plot without making it too confusing. I figure that before I put you guys through more suffering I should ask first what you people think of it up till now. Any things you liked, or thought were awful? Or any tips are also welcome.
Also of course there's the big question of: do you guys like the plot enough to continue it, or should I drop it and make room for someone who's a lot better at it then me? :smallwink:
Right now, there is no one better at you at making a plot thats currently playing. Besides, you can't put this much suspense and mystery on top of us and not satisfy our curiosity.:smallwink:
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Just keep going. Take it as practice.