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The first one doesn't work :smallconfused:
Or is it just me again...
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I'm seeing them alright Nameless. And I must say, I'm quite interested already :smallsmile:
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Oh there ir is :)
Look's quite good :smallbiggrin:
Although I'm not understanding the endings... :smalltongue:
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The way they talk reminds me of the Transformers in that recent 3 hour movie and the things that made the monoliths from the 2001 series, but that doesn't matter. Cool comic.
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I dont know what it is but I am strangely drawn towards it (guess the quote :smallbiggrin: )
nice comic...really inconsistent (it is a compliment btw)
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Its hard to concentrate on the characters when they are all symmetrical rectangles.
I miss the line art. =o
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I'm confused but intrigued...I'll withold my judgement until I've seen more.
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banjo1985
I'm confused but intrigued...
That was what I was going for.
Comic three: Map
EDIT: Made a banner for public use.
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/6...nbanneriv0.png
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You'll need some pretty good dialogues to make up for the lack of facial expression...But I like it.
...Is that a map? :smalleek:
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It looks like a screenshot from an old Atari console game...
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Ne0
You'll need some pretty good dialogues to make up for the lack of facial expression...But I like it.
...Is that a map? :smalleek:
Indeed, it is a map. A whole comic page of map. Indeed, it is confusing.:smallamused:
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know we know what the orange zone is.
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No offense but..I don't get it all. What is it, some rectangles talking?
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It reminds me of flatland - which was... interesting.
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Kagan
It reminds me of
flatland - which was... interesting.
I was influenced by both Flatland and 1984 when I first wrote this story, my story is set on an other dimension with 6 totalitaristic states controlling its seemingly 2-dimentional citizens. The nations are in a pepetual war with each other and these "wire" networks are used to spy on the other nations and quickly transport the information to the capital of each state.
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3 comics in and you already have some fanart! :smallbiggrin:
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q...consistant.png
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Yeril
3 comics in and you already have some fanart! :smallbiggrin:
Damn that is awesome yeril :smallamused:
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Yeril, that is way more awesome than any of my comics yet.:smallbiggrin:
And I can tell you this, the name will link into the plot quite smoothly.
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Wow. This comic looks quite impressive.
I mean plotwise, off course. The art is not badly done, but it's still just blocks.
But the plot? It intrigues me. Seems quite original too, and I have no idea how it will work yet (which is more than I can say for most webcomics).
I'll be watching how this develops.
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Comic number 4
Comic Four: Nitric Acid
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"Why did you send two?"
"There are two wires"
:biggrin:
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New update...
Comic Five: Downfall
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think Green wants to say something in the lines of: "The world will be destroyed.Good thing no one will blame us..."
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comic 5 is the best one yet
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Another 2 updates!
Comic Six: Flux
Comic Seven: Map
EDIT: I will also reveal the name of this story arc: Heartbeat
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This is a bump and an update. I can see people are reading (or at least opening) this. Please comment....:smallfrown:
Comic Eight: Fire
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Think you have a unique way to craft the plot...wonder which wire is wrong...
think the second one, since killing all the orange zone would take some effort IMO...but I could be wrong.
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Let's see, it would be more difficult to destroy the orange zone than for a mistake in intelligence to be made, so I'm going to go with Occam's razor and say that the orange zone survived.
However, I'm certainly intrigued about what happens next! :smallsmile:
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I'm finding this brilliant so far.