Well he did enslave a goddess to come to his part of the universe for six out of twelve months, he rules over the part of the world considered to be the bad part in modern interpretations (hell) and his name sounds very similar to 'hate'.
Printable View
Also he kicked a puppy.
But then he felt bad about it and took it in to keep as a guard dog so...
Wait... what were we talking about again?
Allow me to apologize in advance for this unbelievably crappy page. It sucks.
Also, bringing back tons of loot is made a lot less fulfilling by bags of holding. :\
Yay new one.
*snicker* "Mayincatec" Yeah, I've had some run-ins with that culture....
Allow me to recite a much overused quote that fits with this page:
"IT'S A TRAP!"
Bad memes aside, this page was pretty good.
Oh, and the blue 'flames' in the other two pages look like spiked glowing blue mountains to me. :P
EDIT: I also think an update to the first post would be much helpful, since people like me who check topic first posts for updates might think the comic hasn't been updated in a while.
...Yes, I actually thought that was the case.
Everybody be dissin' on my flames of Hades. D:
Well, I suppose I deserve it. That was an inordinately lazy way of doing flames, after all.
So anyway, I fixed the archives. And the next page should be out a lot sooner than this one was. :\
Okay, I know, I know, there's no new page yet, and I shouldn't post when I don't have anything to post - but there's a reason why there's no new page yet. There's something I want to do. It'll be worth it, you'll see.
Well, maybe it won't, but I'll leave that up to you to decide once it's finished.
I'm posting this heads-up just so people will know this comic isn't sliding slowly towards death. I'm still hoping to have the next page up by the end of the week. But just in case I don't. Also, now that I've promised y'all a new page, there's added pressure. ;)
life is hard - work, school, love ....
I for one comic, I read that I sometimes even wait two months before new episode comes out ...
as for us says - be patient if to bear, make your own comics .. and then you realize how difficult it is ...
Ara: That's harsh. It's so harsh, I'm calling you Ara.
#18
Well, I got delayed even more (now there's a surprise) and didn't get to doing the thing that I wanted to do to completion. Maybe next week. Any longer than that and I'd have to go back to advancing the plot. O:
This page wasn't meant to be a standalone, but such is fate.
Yay new comic!
Lots of little details and I like the changes in view points. It's a strong comic visually. :smallsmile:
I did think for a moment that Izzy's eye had gone terrifyingly strange for a moment in the last panel when the page first loaded but I figured out they were sunglasses soon enough. I'm not really sure what, if anything, would make them more sunglassy... maybe if the highlights were more angular?
Also, one of Izzy's doubles (quintuples?) has a foot straying out of the panel barrier on the left hand side of the strip...
Also, also, your speech bubble work seems to be improving.
this last frame is Horacio Black Glass style or weird style of eyes???
The last pannel is a little confusin, for a short while I was wondering if he was on a sudden drug trip before I realised that those weren't anormaly wide eyes, you should make the mount of the glasses a little more visible.
i do like the monsters, this comic really establishes them as smart pack hunters and a real threat.
Izzy suddenly got creepy... :smalleek:
Can't wait to see the battle unfold. From the looks of it, it's going to be awesome.
Whooza! Nice one Max, keep it on.
Glad I wasn't the only one who got confused about the sunglasses (:smallcool:).
I thinkLixLornSmuchmuch has pointed out the biggest issue with them: the bridge of the sunglasses are very thin and meet almost exactly with his eyebrows. With all that black (hair, eyes, eyebrows, hand, arm, a lot of the mouth...) it was pretty much bound to get confusing... I think a different style of highlights might help too though, and I did realise they were sunglasses pretty quickly.
Edit: Woops Smuchmuch is using an avatar Lix used to use and I neglected to read the name. Sorry Smuchmuch!
Hey, that's a more positive response than I was expecting. Thanks, y'all.
Rigby: Ach on the leg, that was a really bad miss. >_>
As for the glasses, I suppose I could have made the frames a different colour... but bleh. I'll try to keep it in mind for next time, though.
Akrim: Sunglasses.
Smuch: Ninja'd. You're absolutely right.
Memo to self: have characters trip on drugs.
Budkin: Let's hope it is. O:
Ninjaman: Thank you.
Rigby: Yup, no way of getting around it. My sunglasses need a fix. :I
I could tell they were sunglasses right when I saw them...
so he got out of there? and has shield of faith? hmmmmm...
I have as many gripe as I do approvals, I like how you draw those giant lizard things, I dislike how you leave the characters mouths closed. I'm amazed at your attention to detail in character design but the flawed and somewhat awkward positioning of other details. It's pretty good job though and I like how you drew the mummy villains :biggrin: I just wish Isobel used Shadow Necromancy too :smalltongue:
The overall detail is nice as is the pyramid relative architectural consistency.
I praise:
- The detail on the dragon thingies
- The positioning and viewpoint changes
- The deatil in the visual gore
- The character design for this strip, sunglasess specially were nicely done IMHO
- The details on the panel frames
I however criticise:
- The palm trees. They need thinner trunks, and the tops need to be more varied.
- The jungle background, related to above detail, it doesn't look quite right.
- The before pointed out feet line.
- The base of the spells fume, it's too perfectly rounded.
- The lack of YEAHHHHHHHHH!!!! in the last panel, it had the sunglasses and if the comment balloon was shrunk a bit it would have fitted perfectly, even maybe a panel of the pyramid with the trees from far away.
I vote for this! :smallbiggrin:Quote:
I however criticise:
- The lack of YEAHHHHHHHHH!!!! in the last panel, it had the sunglasses and if the comment balloon was shrunk a bit it would have fitted perfectly, even maybe a panel of the pyramid with the trees from far away.
Crimson: At least someone did. B)
Dvandemon: Thank you, though the mouths will stay closed.
As for necromancy - Izzy is too handsome to mingle with rotting corpses.
Pinky & Akrim:
I don't support memes (yes I do), and I don't like CSI (I really don't), so this is all you're getting:
Still struggling to catch up. We'll see if I can do it. >_>
It has been a long time since you updated. New one upcomming:smallconfused: