Hmm.
I've been trying to draw a fedora for something I've been working on. Here's what I have so far:
http://i659.photobucket.com/albums/u...uin/fedora.png
But it doesn't look quite...right. Anybody have any suggestions?
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Hmm.
I've been trying to draw a fedora for something I've been working on. Here's what I have so far:
http://i659.photobucket.com/albums/u...uin/fedora.png
But it doesn't look quite...right. Anybody have any suggestions?
I was working quite a bit on my new comic, Peach's Castle: A Serious Fancomic On Serious GitP, and have quite a few things to show all of you. Some things improved from last time and some completely new.
Title page.
Comic 0
Spoiler
As you can see, this is a different style than the other comic. This is just to differentiate these "Goomba Journal" comics from the rest of the comics. These will tell the story of a young Goomba kid many, many years before this comic, or any of the Mario games, take place. They may not seem like they have anything to do with anything, but they will lead up to a huge twist later on in the story. A twist everybody will probably figure out way quicker then you're supposed to, but still...
Comic 1
Spoiler
New and improved.
So, how is it? :smallwink:
Well, I think now it's usable for a comic.
Not to say there's no room for improvement. There's always room for imrovement.
I like the Goomba journals. I always like it when a story is told from what otherwise would be a faceless mook.
Progression
http://img710.imageshack.us/img710/3205/progression.png
Thoughts?
As said before, Darklord, amazing.
Okay, I have a problem. I was working on the kitty comic (Which shall be codenamed "Flow of Life") and I need to draw a female cat. Any idea how to do this?
Here's the template for a male cat.
http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/t...t_Template.png
Any idea how? And no, I am not going to add mammaries.
Give her 8 boobs.
That's exactly the reason why I'm NOT giving her any. :smalltongue:
A'ight. I took your advice and I rounded the sides slightly.
Here's the full character design:
http://i659.photobucket.com/albums/u...edoraguy-1.png
Anybody have any more suggestions?
Alright, eyelashes and a curvier body.
Also they should be slightly shorter. I think maybe slightly longer arms/legs/tail.
It's a very drastic shift that says more "Costume Change" than "Art Upgrade". Not that that's a bad thing, it just means she changed from her tattered black clothing to tattered red clothing.
Also, as somebody who uses filled in sleeves/arms and legs (Well, for clothing anyway), let me warn you, it's alot trickier to work with than lines. Not saying you shouldn't use it, just warning you that it can be time consuming to get it right, especially when you are showing somebody reaching across their body, or crossing their arms, or holding something in two hands.
Okay, here's what I got for bodies.
http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/t...g?t=1267312033
The left two are kittehs, the right two are fully mature cats.
Anything I should change?
Move the girls faces a little up.
The right foot on all looks awkward... Like it need sto be shifted to the right just a tad. Other than that great job! I can tell the genders apart.
Better?
http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/t...g?t=1267313108
EDIT: Fixed the feet
Little more on the adult. The foot thing too.
Ok, more than just a tad.
Stop taking us that literaly!!!
Okay, here it is.
I fixed the faces and the feet.
http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/t...g?t=1267313240
EDIT: So.. many... ninjas...
Little more on the face and feet.
http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/t...emplates-3.png
This better? I turned the feet into circles with a flat bottom.
Oh, I was looking at the left foort, wich is on my right.
Me too! I was wondering why I wasn't seeing very much change footwise. The original "right foot" was good.
Ok so right now i'm gauging interest in an idea for a Metroid Sprite Comic i'm gonna possibly be doing after WTwU (assuming I ever get done :smalltongue:). I don't have the details for a plotline but I plan on it to be much less serious than WTwU with way fewer overpowered characters and more humor driven.
So, thoughts?
So there will be two Nintento inspired comics around here? :smallannoyed::smalltongue:
Whatever, I'm looking forward to it. Anything you can say about it at this point? Plot? Characters? :smallsmile:
Also, what do you think of my most recent art update with Peach's Castle? Anything else I can improve?
How 'bout taking place right after Fusion (Which is apparently at the end of the story)? Samus is running away from the GF, and lands on the ruins of an ancient civilization. (Maybe Chozo. Did they ever get to space?) There, stuff happensm and hilarity ensues.
Of course, someone already did the Metroid Fancomic thing, and it was pretty damn good. And it was scarily similar to Prime 3: Corruption. (It was started before they mentioned any information of it.)
Nice.. The third one kinds of creeps me out.. The feet feels wrong, you should try put them in front of the legs, and the right hand... I mean... how is she holding that sword? :smallconfused:
I made this a while ago:
http://zecarioca.net/Imagens2010/magopistoleiro.png
is this the kind of hat you are looking for?
I would like to initiate a contest for my comic, Idiosyncrasy. Anyone who can develop a unique style uniform for a black op covert of the trogodytes shall recieve a cameo appearance in my comic in the future. They will, however, need to pm the character they want the cameo appearance with.
Contest will last until I need to use the uniform Black op Trogodytes. (So you guys have to guess when. Pretty much, when it seems that they are getting closer, that's when you guys need to step up.)
Hope to see you all compete.:smallwink: