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Re: Paladin Academy: A Playground Inspired Story
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Originally Posted by
Blue Ghost
True. But as long as you don't force it on other people, there's nothing wrong with a lawful or chaotic disposition.
Fixed that for you.
Good is also important.
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Re: Paladin Academy: A Playground Inspired Story
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Originally Posted by
Blue Ghost
True. But as long as you don't let it get in the way of the Good, there's nothing wrong with a lawful or chaotic disposition.
Precisely! Raz himself is Chaotic Good, but all you Paladin-y Lawful Good types are all right in my book. Shame about all your rules against stealing, though, even the just-borrowin' type of stealing.
I'm up to 16, and I'm liking it so far. I wouldn't mind Raz the Fox making an appearance once or twice, though probably as an unlucky thieving-bard/ess-person instead of a paladin. I'm not one of those knights in shining armor types, you know?
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Yea I ain't one either, but I'm more of destructive rebellious kind of guy, I'd be hoping for more something like a barbarian or one of those wizards who like to make explosions
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Looks like I already have some volunteers for my demon army. :smallamused:
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Hah, all these Paladins! Bring on the non-paladins, thats what I say! We'll either destroy the world...or save the paladins...depending on whether Silverraptor makes us good or bad!
Of course we all know Mangosta's bad...you evil demon king you! :smallamused:
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Re: Paladin Academy: A Playground Inspired Story
Well, you know I'm a good guy... right?
Frankly, I'm kinda worried about how the massive influx of new characters will affect the story.
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Re: Paladin Academy: A Playground Inspired Story
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Originally Posted by
Blue Ghost
Frankly, I'm kinda worried about how the massive influx of new characters will affect the story.
Psh. I volunteered at the start, and I've been mentioned once. If we're halfway through the first of 5 arcs, he's got plenty of time to work more people into the story. There's no reason he has to put them all in right away, after all. Could be that the only difference is that some unidentified mook down the line just got a name.
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Re: Paladin Academy: A Playground Inspired Story
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mangosta71
Psh. I volunteered at the start, and I've been mentioned once. If we're halfway through the first of 5 arcs, he's got plenty of time to work more people into the story. There's no reason he has to put them all in right away, after all. Could be that the only difference is that some unidentified mook down the line just got a name.
don't care, still happy if said mook is me.
and whats to stop people from making their own? if I know genre's and styles, every time a new one comes, pretty soon a bunch of imitators will soon follow.
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On how the influx of readers deals with the story: Put them in later arcs. I finally get in around arc 4 or 5. Next year. :smallyuk: (Hopefully worth the wait, though.)
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Re: Paladin Academy: A Playground Inspired Story
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Originally Posted by
Grimlock
Of course we all know Mangosta's bad...you evil demon king you! :smallamused:
...OR SO WE HEAR.
Grim said he was evil... how do we KNOW? For all WE know, the ANGELS are gonna invade, and Mangosta saves us all.
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Re: Paladin Academy: A Playground Inspired Story
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Lord Raziere
and whats to stop people from making their own? if I know genre's and styles, every time a new one comes, pretty soon a bunch of imitators will soon follow.
Simple; the Shipping thread got shut down.
I'm still amazed he was allowed to continue PA in its own thread.
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RabbitHoleLost
Simple; the Shipping thread got shut down.
I'm still amazed he was allowed to continue PA in its own thread.
Roland specifically said that people were allowed to continue making stories in their own threads.
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Lix Lorn
...OR SO WE HEAR.
Grim said he was evil... how do we KNOW? For all WE know, the ANGELS are gonna invade, and Mangosta saves us all.
Hmmmm, interesting! A nice fluffy Demon King who likes bunnies eh? An interesting concept!
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Re: Paladin Academy: A Playground Inspired Story
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Originally Posted by
Grimlock
Hmmmm, interesting! A nice fluffy Demon King who likes bunnies eh? An interesting concept!
:smallamused:
I need not say more.
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...
SHIP
So how about those paladins?
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Re: Paladin Academy: A Playground Inspired Story
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Originally Posted by
Raz_Fox
Precisely! Raz himself is Chaotic Good, but all you Paladin-y Lawful Good types are all right in my book. Shame about all your rules against stealing, though, even the just-borrowin' type of stealing.
I'm up to 16, and I'm liking it so far. I wouldn't mind Raz the Fox making an appearance once or twice, though probably as an unlucky thieving-bard/ess-person instead of a paladin. I'm not one of those knights in shining armor types, you know?
Alright then. Adding you to the list now. I assume "Raz" is an okay nickname?
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Originally Posted by
mangosta71
Psh. I volunteered at the start, and I've been mentioned once. If we're halfway through the first of 5 arcs, he's got plenty of time to work more people into the story. There's no reason he has to put them all in right away, after all. Could be that the only difference is that some unidentified mook down the line just got a name.
Yes. Mainly this. I'm just trying to find people to add to the positions of the roles that are to come in the story.
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Blue Ghost
Roland specifically said that people were allowed to continue making stories in their own threads.
Yes he did. And I can't thank him enough.:smallbiggrin:
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Silverraptor
Alright then. Adding you to the list now. I assume "Raz" is an okay nickname?
Well, from the list, you've already got Lord Raziere down as Razz, so I would suggest a nickname like Raz the Fox. Otherwise it's too easy to confuse Raz and Razz.
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Raz_Fox
Well, from the list, you've already got Lord Raziere down as Razz, so I would suggest a nickname like Raz the Fox. Otherwise it's too easy to confuse Raz and Razz.
You could nickname him The Vulpine?
'The Vulpine's in town!'
'Quick! Lock your doors and windows and hide your daughters before he steals them for Lix!'
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Re: Paladin Academy: A Playground Inspired Story
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Lix Lorn
You could nickname him The Vulpine?
'The Vulpine's in town!'
'Quick! Lock your doors and windows and hide your daughters before he steals them for Lix!'
The Vulpine: master thief. Peerless arcane trickster. Harem girl. :smalltongue:
(Actually, that gives me an idea. If you're experiencing a bout of thefts, are you going to look twice at the cute little harem girl that couldn't possibly hide anything in her clothing? Of course not!)
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So, what exactly do you want your nickname to be?
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Paladin Academy: Part 27
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Mordokai
Viola
Blue
Nil
Kurama
Penny
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The sun was barely up when Viola awoke. She watched the sun rise over the horizon as she quickly got dressed. She knew that when the sun fell, it would be too late. She left the room just as Kurama awoke. She felt bad for leaving him behind, but she had orders to follow. She quickly went to the mess hall where she grabbed some food and hurried to Mordokai's office. She entered to see Mordokai, Blue, and Nil waiting for her. Mordokai addressed her behind his desk.
"Good. You came quickly."
She nodded at him.
"Well, everyone's counting on me."
Her insides squirmed uncomfortably and she quickly started eating. The feeling subsided somewhat.
Mordokai nodded.
"Good. We have some things for you on your task. Blue?"
The wizard stepped forward, holding a metal box. Viola watched as he opened the top of it.
"These items should come in use during your infiltration of the great furnace below."
Mouth full, Viola just nodded and looked inside. She saw a round, circular object that had a yellow ring glowing around it. Spaced in equal segments of the ring were lines that seperated the ring into many blocks. The last block at the bottom right glowed red instead. Two paper tags with weird runes inscribed all over them were also laying inside the box as well as a large vial of blue liquid. Blue spoke up again.
"The round object will act as a clock while you are separated from the sun. Each bar of yellow represents an hour of time, signaling the position of the sun. When it gets to the red bar, than you have less than an hour before the undesirables begin invading."
Viola nodded. Silently, she made track of which bar of time meant that she should be heading back for her promise to Kurama.
"The tags will allow you to seal the portal permanently. You need to set both tags 5 feet from the portal in both realms and the spell will active. However, be warned, for if you set the second tag while in the demonic realm, you will be trapped there. So make sure you set the tag for our realm last."
Viola nodded again. She noticed that she was almost finished with her food.
"And finally, the blue vial will be given to all paladins here. You are just the first to receive it. The liquid inside will grant the drinker restored energy as well as healing any wounds they might have attained. I would suggest that you hurry to the ruins and take a sip before entering the portal."
Viola swallowed her last bite before answering.
"Great. That will certainly help. And what are you guys going to do in the mean time?"
Nil answered her.
"We are currently preparing the fortress for siege. The main problem is we have no front door to the fortress since Grim knocked it down. So we need to prepare a barricade against the oncoming demons. It will take a while and require a lot of work."
"Which means it's absolutely critical that you successfully disable the device on their end to stop the invasion."
Viola inhaled deeply.
"So hurry up. Get suited up and get ready to go."
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Viola walks out of the changing room, fully dressed in her armor. The clock-device, the tags, and the vial were stored in the hidden compartment on her armor. She walked over towards the front entrance. She stepped over pieces of bent metal from the front gate. Suddenly, she hears her name called from behind. She turns around to see Kurama and Penny hurrying over to her. They stop in front of her and Kurama speaks with an anxious look on his face.
"Well... good luck."
Viola nodded back at him.
"Thanks. And I promise, I'll be back around noon."
Penny walked forward and hugged her around the middle
"You be careful, Okay?"
Viola hugged her back.
"Don't worry, I will."
She looked at the two of them for a moment before turning around and hurrying out of the gate.
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Re: Paladin Academy: A Playground Inspired Story
Dun Dun DUN.
(Waits on tenterhooks)
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Re: Paladin Academy: A Playground Inspired Story
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Lix Lorn
(Waits on tenterhooks)
Kinky. :smallwink:
*ponders the lol-fest that would ensue from the demon king playing on Viola's doubts and turning her into his champion*
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Re: Paladin Academy: A Playground Inspired Story
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Originally Posted by
mangosta71
Kinky. :smallwink:
*ponders the lol-fest that would ensue from the demon king playing on Viola's doubts and turning her into his champion*
I swear, if you try to corrupt her, I will slay you myself.
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Re: Paladin Academy: A Playground Inspired Story
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Blue Ghost
I swear, if you try to corrupt her, I will slay you myself.
Are you going to go back to using violence? Really? That's just what the Demon King wants.
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Re: Paladin Academy: A Playground Inspired Story
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Recaiden
Are you going to go back to using violence? Really? That's just what the Demon King wants.
Maybe. I can be dangerous when aroused.
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Re: Paladin Academy: A Playground Inspired Story
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Blue Ghost
I swear, if you try to corrupt her, I will slay you myself.
Use your aggressive feelings, boy. Let the hate flow through you.
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Re: Paladin Academy: A Playground Inspired Story
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Originally Posted by
mangosta71
Use your aggressive feelings, boy. Let the hate flow through you.
Yes. The hate will make you strong, Blue. Give in to it.
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Re: Paladin Academy: A Playground Inspired Story
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Originally Posted by
mangosta71
Use your aggressive feelings, boy. Let the hate flow through you.
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Recaiden
Yes. The hate will make you strong, Blue. Give in to it.
:smallsigh: Looks like you guys have found my weakness.
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Re: Paladin Academy: A Playground Inspired Story
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Blue Ghost
:smallsigh: Looks like you guys have found my weakness.
I thought that your weakness was homicidal baked goods?