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Originally Posted by Thomar_of_Uointer
I thought I'd come back through these again and give more feedback.
Bard? You're kidding, right? Bards don't get necromancy.
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They actually do, if you look at the spell list.
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I can't get behind this one. It's far too powerful to be a cantrip. Maybe a first level spell? It's also vastly superior to the Bone Walk spell, even with the 10 gp component.
If you make it create something that statistically is much weaker than a regular skeleton, then it might be alright. Maybe make it only affect Tiny-size animals or something...
Also, bards shouldn't get necromancy.
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It's for a creature with up to or less than 1 HD. This means a few animal zombies or a commoner zombie, nothing to freak out about.
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Wizards normally don't get animate object.
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I think a cantrip version of it should be allowable, at least.
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I'd make it 1d4 damage (or 1d3 damage for Small-sized targets, and 1d6 damage for Large-sized targets.) That's appropriate damage for a spiked gauntlet.
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Good idea. Changed.
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Area daze with no save? You're kidding, right? Daze is already a cantrip, and it's single-target. I'd make it Dazzled with a Will save to negate.
Why did you specify "combat with non-humanoids?" Why not just say "50% chance of working on non-humanoids?"
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Modified it so that the daze effect is weakened. May eventually change it so that it just grants a -2 to Concentration checks.
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Instead of giving a +2 bonus to Disguise, I'd simply note that it negates the standard -2 penalty for diguising yourself as the opposite gender.
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Done.
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I don't get it. What kind of action is it to blast?
I'm not aware of any precedent for multischool spells.
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Assume it's a standard action. Also, multi-school spells do exist.
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A 70% + 1%/caster level what?
The material component is vague, it should be a belonging or something (a strict interpretation would be that you need hair or blood or something.)
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Chance of working, sorry, that got taken out. And the material component does specify what you just mentioned.
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The school should be Conjuration (Teleportation).
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Corrected.
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Why not change it so that you can use the Aid Another action at that range instead? It's more simple.
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It's meant to be able to help
and hinder people.
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Is there any reason why it's so easy to detect? Does it glow, or flicker?
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That's really a matter of what kind of flavor you want to add. It can be both, if you want.