Re: Dragon Age - A Story
I just read it and I like it, but I want to mention is that it seems a little too perfect. I can't believe all those teenagers spent all that time at camp, and didn't cause any serious problems. Also how long was camp? Time was not referred to much at all, which tends to confuse readers trying to imagine the story. Still, I feel like its a great idea, keep writing!
I have returned, and plan on focusing on world-building. Issues are being dealt with.
Originally Posted by MesiDoomstalker
Thread won! I don't think I have the authority to do that but whatever