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Originally Posted by The Tygre
Let me just say, I'm somewhat fond of this. Can I see myself using it in a game? ... Maybe. I roll with a weird crowd IRL. But that's not important. What is important, is that I want to commend you on being so bold with your material. You did a brave thing honestly posting this, much less keeping it open to critique. So you deserve that if nothing else.  |
well... clearly labeled in the title to be mildly mature
There shouldn't be any problems.
anyway
to anyone: Is the staged progression better, or did I make it worse?