Originally Posted by Mr_Saturn
AP Summer homework strikes another victim! Looks like you came out victorious here.
One typo is in the first panel where King Ballandy says "Now to more importanat matters..."
Anyways, I like how the comic always seems to have some slight variation in the panels even when it's just dialogue. Here's hoping for some increased action and more character development/interaction in the next upcoming comics!
BTW: Thanks for the banner! Looks great!
Thanks, will fix that. I already caught a typo where taking was talking, but it seem that I had missed another.
And I think I've said this before, but I take pride in the the quality of of these comics. OotS is the inspiration of all of us on this forum, so if were going to pay homage in comic form, might as well do a good job of it.