Re: Keep off the ice my child... (PEACH)
This is pretty nice, although I note one or two typos (it's monstrous, not monsterous). I also have no idea what these things really look like, but at least there is a good idea of what they do. Still, it would probably be appropriate to add ability that enables their child-killing urges (like sniffing out a child, for ex.).
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