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Winds · 12-06-2011, 10:02 AM

Your battle is written fine. What exactly are you thinking is wrong with it?

I wish I were still working as a player...I can't do the villain's side because they don't need to know, and I can't do the player side because they never seem to flesh out their character's personality. Even if they did, I don't like writing the POV of someone else's character...

12-06-2011, 10:02 AM	Top - End - #6
Winds Orc in the Playground Join Date: May 2011	Re: D&D Snippets II: The Snippetting Your battle is written fine. What exactly are you thinking is wrong with it? I wish I were still working as a player...I can't do the villain's side because they don't need to know, and I can't do the player side because they never seem to flesh out their character's personality. Even if they did, I don't like writing the POV of someone else's character... __________________ Games I'm in: Spoiler Gell Tharak, in Orcs of the Endless and Unconquered Forest OOC/IC James and his avatar Mathias in The Kingdom of Elaria MMO OOC/IC