Re: A complete N00bz first try at world-building...
The disiples seem great. I want to try out the Thrashing Dragon one now (I'm the kind of guy who not only enjoys but would win a 'knife-fight in a phone-box' sort of thing. Or I would enjoy it, except for the blood, pain et. al.)
I suggest gnolls for the gobbo-hole. They are scary little dudes.