Re: Classical Greece, Dante and the 9 hells [PEACH]
Without the breaks between sections and paragraphs, it makes it just too dense to want to read. You'd get more feedback if this were just easier on the eyes.
P.E.A.C.H. Please Evaluate And Critique Honestly. Being nicer and kinder doesn't hurt either.
Please, please, please when using non-core material, cite to the books. There are too many books to wade through to find the one with the feat, special ability or spell you use.
I've got a red
pen and I'm not afraid to use it.
Thanks Gurgleflep for my new avatar!