Re: Classical Greece, Dante and the 9 hells [PEACH]
Without the breaks between sections and paragraphs, it makes it just too dense to want to read. You'd get more feedback if this were just easier on the eyes.
Debby
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P.E.A.C.H. Please Evaluate And Critique Honestly. Being nicer and kinder doesn't hurt either.
Please, please, please when using non-core material, cite to the books. There are too many books to wade through to find the one with the feat, special ability or spell you use.
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