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Old 01-29-2012, 09:51 PM   Top  -  End  -  #16
Dr Bwaa
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Default Re: D&D Snippets II: The Snippetting

Silent Night
or: The Renaldwatch Massacre, Part II
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@TheCountAlucard
This is nice; I'm intrigued by what business such a cast of characters has to discuss. The only moment that bothered me was here,
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Originally Posted by TheCountAlucard
The sorcerer looks about as Shen spoke
"Spoke" ought to be "speaks" since the whole thing is present tense.

...Man, every time someone posts an Exalted snippet I come away really wanting to try the system out.

@SleepyShadow
I LOLed. Poor NPCs, such is their lot in life. One of these days I have some great NPC-perspective stuff I want to write up in this same vein (being abandoned, forgotten, ignored, etc) that I think would be highly amusing. This was really fun to read and believable; I especially loved the moment where White Crow naively attempts to advise a PC on how to approach a problem
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