03-01-2012, 05:14 PM
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Bugbear in the Playground
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Re: D&D Snippets II: The Snippetting
WHERE DOING IT MAN. WHERE MAKING THIS HAPPEN.
@Tavar
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This is very intense; I love how you've captured the setting and tone. Your use of the various fonts & colors was very well done as well; you bring across very clearly what's going on without needing to say it. Sounds like it would have been a great game
I just had a couple nitpicks; there's a weird tense thing going on in the second paragraph and a couple typos sprinkled around, but nothing awful. This was a really enjoyable read (and again, I find myself wanting to go pick up Exalted...)
@SleepyShadow
@Winds
Last edited by Dr Bwaa : 03-01-2012 at 05:15 PM.
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