Ok, so it's quite messy at the moment, nowhere near finished, but I've been working on a little piece called the Battle for Azure City
, and I'd like some advice to help me tighten it up a little bit please, as right now it's biggest flaw is that it's a bit rambling. Anyone got feedback?
EDIT: Quarion, I've no idea what it could be for, but I know I love it. That's some really phenomenal work!