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Old 03-19-2012, 08:25 PM   Top  -  End  -  #48
Winds
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Default Re: D&D Snippets II: The Snippetting

It's written well. Though, if his pals were that worried, why didn't they speak up? Still, his 'noble voice' sounds pretty natural.

As for the pie golem, it couldn't speak, it's attacks did zero damage, and it rotted away in three days. Also, Kalach doesn't have access to an oven. But it would be fun, in a different kind of game.

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