*looks at the Grimmace's updated sheet* Well, still missing age, hp, healing surges, actions points (1), daily item powers per day (1 heroic), should probably fill in the quick lookup stuff for the longsword (+3, 1d8), and did you seriously spend all
of your money?
You don't seem to have included any class bonuses to defenses. Nor did you put your skill bonuses in the skill chart (just slot them into Misc). Should probably fill in physical description at some point. Nor did you put down your class granted powers (I suggest down at the bottom of the thing). And...oh....oh no. You didn't. Glib Limerick. Oh. No............ (Matthias at least will know why I'm reacting this way.)
Edit 2: Though still, much better than it was.
Edit: And I'm still trying to figure out why your roll in the IC thread didn't work. Maybe you needed a space between [Arcana] and the rolling?