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Originally Posted by C'nor
Alright, sounds good. What specific changes need to be made to that scene?
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*shrug* I guess it'd play out more or less the same except he'd have a stout, colorfully dressed young woman examining his palms.
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Originally Posted by C'nor
In addition, speaking of Story Elements, any tips on how to write up the Sireni? I'm not really too sure how one goes about defining a species in something like this.
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Just jot down what first comes to mind. Maybe gen them like you'd write up an individual character? Appearance, typical behavior, origin, distinctive capabilities.