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Old 07-29-2012, 12:47 AM   Top  -  End  -  #170
OrchestraHc
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Join Date: Mar 2011
Default Re: [Nexus] Stories etc

A story about my first PC, Justin Mine.

New Location Discovered: Laneside Bowling

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Reviews:

Elaine/Billie: Split personalities have always been sort of fascinating to me. In a psychology class I took in college, I watched a video of a man with several. Having someone else in your head is scary, and making war or communicating with someone you can never actually meet, is really interesting. Your depiction of a transsexual is also interesting, as I had recently seen a video about trans issues when I first read your story.

Bloodplunder: Went back to read the others so I could understand it. Part 3 is a decently written fight scene.

Kirilia: The diary bits in the prelude were good, but I didn't care for part one of the actual story though.

Goblins: Oh Hutznim. Your smugness is so wonderful. Keep up the good work.
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