Re: [Nexus] OoC 34: If it exists, we have role-played it. No exceptions.
I could run through the things wrong with it from an OotSatar perspective, but to be honest, they don't really matter. It's got good dynamic movement, good character, and the sack of lewt pretty much sums up Justin in a nutshell.
Might want to work on your hats and hair I guess, if you're looking for a critique. Great first effort nonetheless.