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Old 10-06-2012, 02:02 PM   Top  -  End  -  #233
TraceHyde
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Default Re: Soragakure OOC III - Why Do We Have 3 Of These?

We could be a while in that case - I knew my checking of the forums dropped as low as once every two hours during this outage. I wouldn't be shocked if it took some of the players in the games I'm in a day or more to realise they can access the site again.

Edit: Well, shut my god-damn mouth, he posted in the time I wrote this. I guess Zeone is on the ball~

Hmm... Well i thought I'd have it be something a little more personal to the both of them, like possibly as an explanation of why Amon trusts Alice so much and why Alice puts up with Amon. After all, there has to be less excitable and nosy genin she could pass on her knowledge to - although i guess in Amon's case she's just naturally very trusting (until the campaign started) without some backstory justification. But in any case, I don't know the whole of Alice's character so it might be a bit dry if I'm writing it worried about going out of character for someone I didn't write. The 'finds Amon during her hiatus from ninja-ing, takes pure pity on her upon seeing that she, like them, has mechanical limbs and decides to pass on their trade' was an all right explanation at first but I feel I need something a bit meatier now that we're dealing with an actual character who - maybe it's just my perspective - is the most interesting character in the game so far. Well I guess Kaede's pretty fun when you get him in a half-decent mood. Anyway, if I did write it myself I would at least send it in to you in the hopes of some revisions on your part. Hell, maybe we could do a little prequel RP, if we're a little pretentious, over email or something - that way Alice and Amon's encounter will feel potentially more organic, given that you have the time and inclination. I already sent you my email address, so yeah
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