Right, nothing I can do makes what i recorded sound like anything but complete crap. Frankly EVERYTHING I've recorded recently has been very poorly balanced, with the game audio all but drowning out my voice. I just never noticed because my speaker setup is, apparently, cheap jack... stuff?
I've uploaded a new test with, hopefully, a better audio balance
here. If everyone wouldn't mind having a listen, and tell me if I got it better, and if not what needs fixing.