Originally Posted by petersohn
This topic is great. I decided to try myself in composing, and this is what I've done:
Elan, Inspirer of Competence
Since this is my first composition ever, I decided to keep it simple and short. Any comments and suggestions are welcome.
It's very nice, I put it in the OP.
I think you've got a good melody, and maybe it would be nice to have a little more substance, maybe variation on the tune a little? For a first piece, it's really great, and I hope to see lots of music by you in the future