Re: Ring V - Yet another OotS-style Webcomic
Nice. I liked it so far. Just a little nitpick. Should the mom's speech bubble in the last panel be dashed? I think that usually denotes a whisper. As far as I've seen, a normal bubble without a speech line would be fine, especially since the character refers to the speaker as "mom" in his next line.
EDIT: Curse my inadequate monitor! Does the character's last bubble say "I shouldn't have played WoW last night"?
Tornatar by Serpentine.
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Original Tornatar by Threeshades. Second Tornatar by The Chilli God. Demonized Tornatar by Threeshades.
Last edited by hyperfreak497 : 11-24-2007 at 12:11 AM.