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Old 11-04-2008, 05:58 PM   Top  -  End  -  #204
heng
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Default Re: Erfworld Bloopers

#34 - Page 52 - Klog #06
Minor Grammar Nitpick for Critical Fact 1:

"Stupid, Stupid Meal"
should either be "Stupid Stupid Meal" (no comma, if the 'Stupid Meal' is 'stupid')
or "Stupid, stupid meal" (if the 'meal' is really stupid)

Capitalization suggests the former.


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