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Old 12-01-2009, 10:00 AM   Top  -  End  -  #3
Golden-Esque
Barbarian in the Playground
 
 
Join Date: Dec 2008
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Where the Wild Things Are
Gender: Male
Default Re: Way of the Gear (Discipline)

A little bit of fluff and background would be nice to set the fighting style that you intend your Discipline to be from. Also, a lot of people use the set-up where you first organize the Maneuvers and Stances by level, then have the full description listed alphabetically.

Your maneuvers look gory, but I can't really put them into the context of a fighting style without that background.
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